Hey guys!   : )

In order NOT to leave a bad aftertaste in your mouths I'd like to start with the things I personally would like to see improved with this game.

1. English grammar and punctuation

Correct me if I'm wrong but seeing that English is not your mother tongue (aren't you guys living in Hamburg? - I live in Rostock btw! ^__^) I can understand the difficulties of translating into English... but to be honest I can't help cringing having to read so many spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes!  T____T

2. Art

There's actually not much to criticize here except for maaaaaybe focusing or rethinking the proportion of hands and wrists (they kinda seem a teeny-weeny bit too small for me personally) and the general background. While it's fun seeing the café not being leveled to the ground it also looks quite comical and sketchy to me - which might be intended, you guys tell me.  :P

Having said that, let's get to the PRAISES!!  (^O^)

Damn, you really managed to surprise me with that plot twists and general narrative that kept me excited, wide-eyed and eager for more! (Need more popcorn!!) I love how the four main characters are designed (artwork, writing), how distinguished they are and how they interact with one another. And witnessing all this crazy and dumb bullshit they pull and getting in reaaaaaally awkward situations just makes me feel at home.  xD

So please keep up the good work - and if you need help with proof-reading (since I don't wanna just bicker about it) or anything language related, just say the word (l3ucht3@yahoo.de) and I will see what I can do.  :3

-BlueDoggy