Are you still working on it? Because I do want to end the story :).

The art especially in (spoiler?) the Grouchy and Natsu trowing stuff at the thief (end of spoiler?) shows the skill of the artist, it's well detailed. Dark circles, hair lines, everything is high level.

As for dialogue, it's obvious that this line will add more liking with this or that guy, but it doesn't make it bad. It continues to be interesting and captivating. I got surprised by how (out of nowhere - but in a good way) open some characters got after a while :).

Now a personal look about the guys: I want to be friends with them :D. Really! Didn't see myself with any of them, weird or not haha. They're good looking and funny, but Natsu doesn't appear to be searching or in a good moment to get a partner. I tend to overthink details, but it seems she only wants to get her life on track, education and career wise.

But of course it isn't a problem if she have to end up with someone, this is the main objective of the game after all - and it's good the way it is.

I like Konbini Life in all aspects! And hope you have the time, creativity and willingness to continue working on it :).