I feel like this can be an incredible game but it needs some work. The dreams don't come across clearly and you get judged by this "all mighty being" who tries to pin off your problem as a result of eating junk food and making dumb mistakes as a kid. It makes it sound like it's your fault that you're sick and that's just wrong. Don't ever blame the victim.
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