Pros:

Gay, Poly, wholesome. I love these characters. They feel fleshed-out and they have interesting dynamics with each other. The bonus scenes are also incredibly cute and just a joy to read. Good trans girl rep (I had forgotten that about her even, since it's been a while since I played the first one).

Cons:

Not much in the way of plot; though a character-driven story is valid too. Choices are few and don't really matter (more a kinetic novel). That all is fine though. The shape of the story is pretty easy to see coming, as soon as the characters get on the train the second time. But it's not a deal-breaker since the main appeal is watching the characters interact with each other. I guess something that rubbed me a little wrong is the sort of presumption that poly relationships are by-default a fully-connected web? Though I did enjoy that we get to see a different group of characters take a different approach to it.

Thank you for the food. I look forward to seeing your future work too :3