Fantastic zine.

PDF could do with bookmarks.

Would recommend adding text for Surprise and Initiative.

For me I make surprise a Psyche save, and initiative was a flat d20 to order everyone (was using Foundry VTT so I rolled for everyone using the interface).

I would also recommend expanding the text for Wounds, e.g. for exactly what happens when you hit 0 or below HP and took a Wound (I ruled you fell prone + were stunned for 1 round), what exactly a "minor" wound is (I ruled it was <= 1 slots) and how to heal a "major" wound, and finally what happens if you're hit again - are you on zero HP for the next hit, so potentially can take a worse wound? I assume it's that way because of the "10 item slots of wounds = dead" rule.

I've downloaded the PDFs for Zines 2 and 3 and they look amazing. Have also ordered hardcopies from lulu.

Thanks for making this wonderful set of zines!