Hi there! I played this with a couple of friends online and had a good time. Creating our deity and the world was really cool. The prompts provided for these two elements are really evocative.

However, we struggled when it came to the actual gameplay and I think this is to do with the structure of the rules document. Concepts were introduced, then half way through, the gameplay was introduced. It would have been easier if things were more 'procedural' in terms of how they are introduced. We kept having to go back and forth, and it was hard to find the information we needed. For example, the concept of scenes are explained in the beginning; then referenced many pages later in terms of actions you can do it. It might be worth re-formatting the document to start with the first gameplay phase, and explain concepts as you go along. 

In any case, it was fun to try out and I'd definitely come back to it if there as another version!