I could use some advice on how to ask for feedback.  

How many of these questions can I ask without imposing too much? 

 I've decided to not use analytics, which might have answered most of these.

Am I going about this the wrong way?

# general
Does the game launch successfully?
Did you use the itch.io app or download the app?
Is the framerate (in the upper righthand corner) typically above or below 50 fps?

# preferences
Do you use keyboard or game controller?
Are the controls too difficult or uncomfortable to use?
Did you change the bindings?
What is your preferred Cursor Sensitivity?
Do you like Cursor Influence option?
What is your preferred Camera Size (Shown in lower lefthand corner. Use scroll wheel or settings menu to change)

# open ended questions
Any specific control layout preferences?
  * bumpers for dash and jump?
  * spacebar to jump and left shift to dash?
Have difficulty aiming?
Can you perform a dash+walljump? (while wallslide, dash + move towards wall, then jump, then move away)