Quick background, I commissioned an artist but wasn't too happy with the result (no, the title wasn't a placeholder), and especially the communication.

So I gave myself 1 week to see what I could before commissioning another one.

Which one do you prefer ?

The one with the black background is mine. Any feedback is welcomed, and you can say it's crap if you want :D

So still messing around with it. 

From this



To this

Bumped it to this 

My favorite among the 3 last ones is your 2nd iteration.

Definitely yours.

The commissioned art looks like a clever but unfinished draft.