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Pictures of Life [story puzzle]

A topic by Bull&Ram created Jul 07, 2019 Views: 326 Replies: 3
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Hello! We are young small team from Russia developing our first game. We almost done and it's time to present our game to the world via trailer but we unsure if we got english text typed in correctly. I assume you can see my level in it already. So can you  give us a feedback about these several phrases?

The place where you never been before

Things that keep secrets are all around you

Find what reminds you about your previous life

Mistakes can be fixed here

But choose wisely if you want to see again who you love 

Will you see the whole picture?

And that's how our game looks now

Trailer is here and you can watch it!

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all sentences are fine, the only bad one is "The place where you never been before", which should be corrected to "a place where you've never been before"

good luck with the game!

Great thanks!