I hope the content of pregnancy can be rich, not monotonous. I really look forward to getting Anna pregnant.
As it currently stands, there is no explanation why Anna wants to take photos with MCs cock in particular (no implication she knows about it and first photo shows surprise) so cant just be a gut feeling. Before that there should be some kind of mandatory event where Anna sees it (why is there an MC shower function if not for this, she stumbles in there and gets the idea from there). Or in the morning she goes to wake MC and sees it that way, in other words some kind of short event followed by internal monologue "i have an idea etc." for plausible explanation.
Similarly, there is no explanation as to why the touch barrier is suddenly broken between Anna and MC. Either groping shouldn't be available before Anna loses it first (BJ) or there needs to be an event where the touch barrier is broken for some good reason (she wants to reach something and is helped, or falls and is grabbed, followed by some kind of dialogue "oh you are touching me that way blabla, we shouldnt but it feels good" whatever). Before the first BJ they still have the "contract" of no touching, so the sudden groping comes out of the blue, especially if you play passive innocent MC (love route). This goes for the hallway spilled milk as well, lock the aggressive options before groping makes sense.
Other option is MC might make a few statements first that the photography gets him horny and he is just a man and wants to touch, helps with positioning, whatever. "hey dont do that mhm" "sorry cant help it been seeing you naked all this time" "ok fine but be careful".
All this could be resolved with the LEAST work (if necessary) by the "can we shower together" option, which is out of place atm. Could serve these things perfectly if fleshed out "omg MC you have grown so much -> *i have an idea* (justification for cockpic) and "help me with soap" "(justification for broken touch barrier) and subsequent groping, as is already depicted on the CG anyway. As I said, antichronological atm.
Crucially, I believe a legitimate "first kiss" event is in order, aside from some of the optional events. Can be incorporated into the previous.
Furthermore, there is no reason why Anna and MC disappear for a weekend vacation before Josef is confronted. Either lock the option before that or program a short event where they tell Josef they are leaving for the weekend together for some plausible reason. Some lie about Charlotte or whatever, they have no reason to disappear without Josef for 2 days as it stands.
These things would be implemented without too much work and would help continuity. Right now the aforementioned is unfortunately a bit immersion breaking.
Also some anachronisms of note. Most noteworthy, Valentines BJ can be triggered before Studio BJ.
Some pool events seem out of order. A photo of her "holes" can trigger quite early, with too much confidence "yes show my holes..." at this point, which is contrasted to the shy reaction of the tits groping "ehm what are you doing" at this point in time. On the same note, the pool tits groping later down the line starts off too meek with the same shy reaction, which is not in character anymore.
TL;DR: 1. Find a short or elaborate solution, depending on dev will, why Anna knows about MCs cock and why they start groping (and kissing) suddenly, could be done in a single event if necessary, ideally several. 2. Find justification for vacation before Josef is in the know
good morning,
While some things will be fleshed out, do notice a couple of things. Anna is no saint, she had a "no touching" deal, but her intentions were always to let out her slutty side and was interested in mc. She wanting to get the cock picture is not because mc is "big", is because she wants to keep pushing him into doing her and is looking for an excuse, while also wants more views; him being big is a plus to her. Btw she does know how big mc is afterwards which she mentions to Charlotte on mondays(is just not directly said)
While a dialog to say "we are going away for the weekend" could be implemented, is not really a big thing, but we shall see.
And lastly, yes, there are some events out of place which will be reviewed after completion or fixed little by little which each installment.
Thanks for the feedback and have a nice day.
Hey there,
Thanks for the reply Dr. Muramasa. Yes, I acknowledge Annas nature but I hope there still will be some fleshing out of some logical inconsistencies or have some of the motives "on screen" instead of implied. Keep in mind if its Anna who wants it she should be the one to grope first, but right now MC is the aggressor. I believe doing all the mentioned things in the shower scene, a kiss maybe also, is the easiest way to address it all with just a few extra CGs and lines of dialogue. I would prefer a more elaborate approach with multiple scenes (I believe this first major taboo break and the very end "breeding" to be the crucial points in Annas plotline) but I do have the devs resources in mind.
Best wishes
"She wanting to get the cock picture is not because mc is "big", is because she wants to keep pushing him into doing her and is looking for an excuse" - Again I will use this example the hotel scene (before the cock pic) after the beach does not make a lick of sense going by this statement.
She has obviously got a glimpse of the package by this point and it is all she can think about. I always get the impression she could not care less really about Starmaker numbers, it is just a means to spice up her life from a failing marriage.
I will not let this die, the early game needs some major attention with one of the last 3 major releases.
Idea - This can be resolved with features that work their way into end game as well. One example that comes to mind is a "Hands of God" trait where the MC gets to learn to massage. It starts off with Anna having a bad back or something, so he offers to give her a rub. She tells him he is OK but could do with a little work. He then goes off to learn how to massage (This could be a new area like the gym or for a scaled back method online courses using the computer.) The Anna scene can then escalate and this opens up story progression and could fill in gaps, while also having the opportunity to be used for other characters
Absolutely. Also, the first vacation needs to be mandatory then to progress the cock pics or something. She can acknowledge his cock with either Leilani (oh god why does MC have such a...) or the night scene. And during the same vacation MC can oil her tits up with a completely normal reaction which feels as premature as the Tuesday shower. What do you think about my other points? Early game is where its at...some things happen too sudden or out of context right now.
馃挴on kissing now I think about. It does go from 0-1000 doesn't it. There should be some kissing progression. Peck on the cheek (for cleaning pots) > Quick kiss on the lips (early in corruption maybe some dialog "Sorry that was a mistake, I should not have done that") > Then to full romantic/passionate/seductive kissing (depending on playthrough choices)
Right. The dish one feels right, or for buying groceries (no acknowledgement as of now) a peck as a reward and the third time around it lands on the mouth or something. Tongue not before BJ. All groping not before BJ or some (clothed) groping event where the subsequent gropings make sense, something along the lines of "help me up...mhm...what are you..." as I outlined. Or massage as you said since she complains about back and therefore does yoga, and some progression there from safe zones to ass to tits.
cannot make a vacation mandatory, even less when specific actions need to be taken for the night scene to trigger. On the topic of sudden changes, yes, the game moves fast, and not everyone can be pleased. Theres a good chunk of users that want a slower and more meaningful transference from one point to another, while others want to get to the full spice. The way that it is now is a good middle ground.
Again, ideas are not bad, but not everything can be done, not everyone can be pleased. And yes, theres some inconsistencies/"plot incoherent moments" that are noted and will be fixed in the future.
It was meant as "is not just because he's big". She does care for the starmaker numbers, she likes the attention. As previously stated, yes, there are some inconsistencies and early game can be fleshed out, but, some things are not just fully presented to the player and instead are just briefly said on dialogs. Not that the idea of the massage is bad, but the groping is ok right now. She wants it, but also wants to play it as is not her.
Some ideas I had lol: