Hi everyone!
As the title suggests, I'm looking for someone who can make sure this is a game in current English and not a fever dream.
Three Yellow Quartzes is complete and released, with an estimated playtime of approximately 40 minutes/1 hour. It joined two jams, and I was told the grammar isn't exactly the best.
For this reason, I would like a native English speaker (Or someone with excellent knowledge of English) to correct it.
Total word count (cutscenes and flavour texts) is approximately 13.120.
— About the game
«It is said that the Golden Apples of Villa Lixa, three yellow quartzes, are cursed and are at the root of the misfortunes that have befallen the family.
Not that Clea cares. She just wants to get them, even if it means going to a crumbling parallel dimension of the Villa and probably unleashing the wrath of its previous inhabitants.
The only thing Clea is afraid of is that there are humans and that their blood tastes so much better than the blood in her flask.»
Features vampire main characters, references to Greek mythology and several game overs.
Please note that the game also features some themes that may be uncomfortable, like death-related stuff, abusive relationship, implied suicidal thoughts and depression (A very edgy list, I know-). It's a horror genre, although light and more on the psychological side.
— For some reason, I'm interested. What I have to do?
Feel free to contact me at wisteriasakana@gmail.com (No Discord, unfortunately-).
You can download the game from its page here on itch.io, or I can provide you with the text (The scenes, however, would not be in chronological order).
In case you want to proofread by playing the game, don't worry, a guide is included in the download folder, so you can also do a speedrun.
— What do I gain?
My gratitude and your name in the credits ♡