I posted one cool game here called "4knights". Please rate the feedback in trauma. I just started making games and I need an estimate from someone who can review the text. Here's the link if you're interested: https://kotofey124.itch.io/4fleshcat . Here are screenshots and video about the game:
a roguelike style game with interesting additions in the form of unusual options, interesting classes, an unusual plot, etc.
And a little more about the plot that is hidden in the game: there are two worlds and one person decided to connect them, which led to the fact that soon they will both be erased and now the creatures of the world of monsters have fallen into our world. All from the world of monsters have special powers and an unusual appearance. The villain of the game is recognized at the end and this is an unexpected twist, so I will not shoot him. The villain himself has built protection around himself and now protects the sphere that connects the worlds. 4 masters of the world of monsters (1 magician, 1 warrior, 1 knight and 1 shaman) tried to stop him, but almost all the villain decided his strength and scattered people around the world and killed one. The soul of the victim did not give up and found a random person with a deadly disease, in which the soul could try to stop the main villain alone. Along the way, we will also meet the diaries of a traveler who tried to uncover all the secrets of 4 knights (there is no end of the game with him yet, since the game is still being actively updated and receives improvements). Our hero assembles a team and once reading in a diary that one of the knights has one of the main villain's defense levels, he finds him and enters the world of monsters. The world of monsters is almost like ours only completely chaotic and random. There he finds more diaries of a traveler and then finds a zone between worlds and learns that creatures from different worlds must have great strength in order to survive in another. It was the secret of three worlds (although it is more correct to say two). But the game still has two endings:
wrong: we kill the main villain and disconnect the worlds back.
correct: there is a developer in the game who changes the game (it’s logical that this only narrows and he doesn’t influence the game) and Reed (that’s the name of the main character) understands that the main villain here is the developer with the help of a secret code, he finds the developer’s office, defeats the latter and kills game with you. Temsamym not giving the developer a chance to rejoice.
This is a very short story with many details left out, but I hope you get the gist of the game.
