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Feedback on first look/feel needed

A topic by WASD Games created Mar 02, 2023 Views: 352 Replies: 10
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We value your opinion! Please share your feedback on our Steam game and our upcoming indie RPG. We want to hear your thoughts and suggestions so we can make our games even better. Let us know what you think and how we can improve. Thank you for your support!
Itch.io page:
https://wasd-games20.itch.io/plague-london-1665

Steam page:
https://store.steampowered.com/app/2225010/Plague_London_1665/

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The game looks good. But I have feedback about your game page. Usually, players don't read the text of the long description, unless you put headings (you can put headings in images and then insert them to Steam or use the text mode it provides). I would use headings with the main aspects of the game. And I would recommend to put one or two more GIFs like the first one you have showing different areas/mechanics. 

Some time ago I found this marketing website and I think you can get some ideas from here https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://howtomarketagame.co...

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Hi Ij377,

thank you very much for your feedback! Very much appreciated.
We added a GIF to the about section of the Steam page and tried to integrate as much as possible footage showing mechanics, transitions and gameplay to the trailer, but we had material for about 15 minutes, so we had to pack that into something presentable >1mintue...
We will be posting another follow-up trailer in the coming months, trying to add more gameplay footage and other aspects of the game

Anyhow, thank you for the feedback and the link. :)

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You are welcome :)

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Grammar police here - I have some suggestions:

 - Wishlist
 - comma splice
 - GHz

 - player

 - the players'

 - bury

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Hello Grammar Police!

Thank you very much for point out the issues. We address them, all but one, what do you mean with "comma splice"?
Hope we don't get fined. :)

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Hello, grammar is spelt with an "a" not an "e". A comma splice is when you use a comma to break up two clauses which make sense on their own (e.g. I like pizza, it is the best). Instead of a comma, you can either use two sentences (I like pizza. It is the best.) or a semi-colon (I like pizza; it is the best.)

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Went and edited the post, "Grammar ". :)
Thank you very much for the explanation. Appreciate it.
We followed your suggestions.

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Hey Joyless, that grammar police intervention was so cool. Bam ! I follow you.

Impressed also with the number of games you did.

Now, sorry for the interruption guys.

Thank you!

Oh come on. No one knows how to use a semicolon.     ;-)

(Please do not fine me,  I would lose my license if you search for my commata misusage)