Hey there!

I’ve had a look at your page. I would say it makes me a bit intrigued, maybe a 6/10. I’ve compiled some more details in case it helps:

• I like the general concept, you trying to find out which race you belong in.
• Explaining in detail how long the story is and what it includes, feels a bit like taking the magic away. I think it would be more straightforward to just explain the gameplay and some parts of the story.
• Also feels like the description contains some spoilers, as it describes mentions what happens on the last few chapters.
• Well done for making a video about it!

Why should you buy it?

Because I’ve been working at it for 2 years and half.

• I’m not sure that sounds great. I completely understand how it feels to spend a lot of time working on a project, and wanting to see other people play it, but to the eyes of an average stranger, this phrase sounds like you want people to play your game because of the time you spent on it, instead of playing it because it’s a great game.
• Also the font and the text color seem to be a bit hard to read for me. I had to put extra effort to read it, I’d advice on trying something a bit easier to the eye.
• I really like the screenshots, they show the variety the game has to offer, and some exciting moments!

Hope that makes sense. Everything mentioned here was my personal opinion, feel free to pick only the ones you liked :)