Do you have any appreciation? Any suggestion? Did you like it? Or maybe you didn't? Tell me here! No hate, please nwn
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Ahhh! That's why that sounded so familiar! Thank you for the reference! Well done. Seriously, think I played the song like 4 times before Iet it move on. Tears each time. I honestly relate to this story you're telling too well. Almost everything is an autobiography so far. Different locations and names obviously but everything else is almost the same. Its uncanny. Thank you for sharing.
Like it has been posted on the main page, it won't be possible to change MC's name due to the way this VN was written. Things like "Lucaaaaas", or "LUCAS" made it hard (The code has to be specific for each personalized word, if you know coding maybe you'll understand). I'm sorry if this reduces the immersion. I still hope you can enjoy the VN :)
Well, I don't know all codings I think in all of them you can set a variable value as capital. In case of the long string, in Java, for instance you can find in the string vowels with charAt () and multiply it as needed.
I give you a clue in this horrible language: String - 16: Reverse Vowels order in Given String - Bing video. You go all over the string and once you find the last vowel, you just have to capture it.
I'm not saying that you have to use it, this writting is YOUR work. But if you need it in another work, here you are.
Gracias por tu apreciación! En realidad todo lo que leíste (Muchas gracias por darle una oportunidad a esta historia) es bajo mi percepción del mundo y mis experiencias vividas. Como dicen por ahí, todos ponemos un poquito de nuestra alma en todo lo que hacemos. Supongo que esto es especialmente cierto en esta clase de proyectos. Comprendo que ciertas acciones/temas puedan verse de esa forma, represión, timidez, cosas por el estilo, pero eso es lo bonito de leer historias ¿no? ¿Ver como otras personas ven el mundo y compararlo con como lo veríamos nosotros? :3
Otra vez muchas gracias por leer esta historia. Me alegro que te hayas "enamorado" de esos personajes! nwn
Wow... I can only say thank you... Thank you for giving this story a try. Thank you for your kind words... And thank you for sharing your experience with me. You just made my heart warm and happy, very happy that someone really enjoyed this "roller coaster" with me hehehe... I's so glad you could experience those emotions just like I did when writing. And sorry for the crying part... yeah, we share that too hahaha.
Keep waiting for the next updates! every new build comes with little changes to the story (new CGs, some phrases changed), so, even when the main story is intact, some small things (very small things) could change. That, and the veeeeery slow process of replacing the music with ones made by my own hahaha.
THANK YOU AGAIN!
Hi Seth, I stopped playing 10 days ago because I have been stuck in the same point of the game. I want to avoid giving any spoilers, but it's on Chapter 17, after Lucas finishes giving us updates on the events of the past couple of weeks leading into spring time. After the <CRACK> and subsequent terrifying events. No matter which of the two paths I choose, the bad outcome is the same, and thus I am trapped in a never-ending loop.
Awwww, thank you Phamyne! Don't worry, next build with chapters 13 & 14 will be uploaded soon, like... in three or four days.
Yeah, Morenatsu was my first visual novel, and I fell in love right away with it. I'm really trying hard with translaltion, and like I wrote on the main page, I'm not a native english speaker, so yeah, I'll get lost in some parts of the translation. That's why I'm in need of testers! hahaha. Thank you for your encouragement, it really gives me the inspiration I need to keep working hehe.
Have a nice day/night! nwn
Don't worry man, xou're doing a great job all 'round! ;) Just focus on getting everything all translated, and 1nce it's done, xou can get some1ne to assist xou ^^_ the problem with translating can be a difficult 1ne :/ coz like, maybe xou want to word something in a particular way, but then, people are like "well... that's not common in English, but it can still work". So yeah. Maybe some1ne who speaks Spanish would be a good match for helping xou? I find xour writing style very poetic at times~ Either way it's really good ^^_ I seriously couldn't stop smiling throughout the entire story so far :p
Heh, good ol' Morenatsu ^^_ it's the godfather of all VN's. The "childhood crush" for most of us ^///^ glad to see people are still drawing inspiration from it.
Xou too man, great day/night and keep up the great work \>o< best of luck!
Hi razorbee! Thank you for reading! And yes, you assume right. If I read correctly, 99% of those points you wrote are answered in the next chapters. You just have to be patient, I wouldn't be a good writer if I answer all the questions at once hehehe. And wether I make up to your expectations or not, that remains to be seen hehehe. I hope I do, but if I don't, i just hope at least I brought a smile :).
Thank you for your feedback!
Have a nice day/night! nwn
Oh, and I forgot to say something: part of the information given and it's logical sense are always depending of the desicions you made. Certain decisions brings light to the points you wrote, leading to important conversation and such. Good thing is, wether you choose the "right" desicions or not, you can check later whenever you finish the VN, since this activate the guide. The VN has 3 endings, and the understanding of them depends merely on the choices you made. But my canon ending (which not necessarily it's everyone's canon), I wrote it trying to explain the most i could without being forced. So, like I said, I hope it doesn't leave a sour taste. But! If you get the bad ending, of course there will be things that you won't understand hahaha. That's why is a bad ending, right?
Hi Seth! Thank you very much for your reply!
Oh, I did not realize that decisions hide some of the backstory (or are that impactful) - but it absolutely makes sense because you chose a format where you can do that.
It is a very good idea to have a guide at the end to find further insides! I look forward to it.
Also, I blame myself for not being attentive enough and just skipping some important parts - missing vital clues. It is definitely my fault for trying to go to fast. But it's so exciting :D
Also.
The title. "The Writer". It's George! Of course it's George! Lucas is an illustrator. Everything he does is revolving around George. No matter what. I feel like a child for not realizing this earlier. Now I feel even more fuzzy and warm inside :)
(Yes, it might also be some supernatural being in the background pulling the strings or the figurative writer of the story, but I go with my version.)
And I spoiled myself a little by watching your trailer and checking the game files.
The twin brother will show up somehow! Yay! And George's daughter maybe as well. And George will get a haircut and shave and looks totally different. I am excited!
And worried. Three different endings may mean that I might get the bad ending. Argh, I will try to be more attentive and observant!
But don't you worry! I am just assuming what I experienced elsewhere and could not be disappointed by things to come that do make sense and are as sweet as what I read and saw until now. No matter how obvious or cliche :D
Oh my, I have to apologize. I am so sorry.
I am re-reading from the start and am taking it slower, I am not even through chapter 1 yet.
I have missed so much. So much. Most of my questions are clarified and I understand more of the reasoning behind certain events. These deviant perverts.
Still having a great time! Promise me that somehow the rooftop apartment lives on and allows new tenants to find love!
Hi Baralover! Thanks for reading! Let me copy paste the info that appears in the main page. "~This game may contain pictures of explicit GORE, so please, read discreetly. You will find depictions of homosexual relationships, sensitive topics, and pictures that may be considered NSFW (nothing really explicit, but better play safe, that’s why the +18). --- IMPORTANT: This visual novel has only one love-interest, meaning that there's not other routes where other romances can be pursued. However, your decisions WILL affect your ending. Actually, this story was going to be a book, but I decided to go this way because of the way that music and sound efects improves your reading experience".
So, to answer your question, there won't be any other romance routes as it's explained in the main page. This is because this story was going to be a book, but I decided it to make it VN. And about the +18 content, again, like its written in the main page, there will be nothing really explicit, but I better play safe since I wouldn't like to be banned by uploading content that *may be* considered +18. That's it!
Thank you Baralover! Have a nice day/night! nwn
It's no necessary, I mean it. I want people to smile while reading this, and the more people read, the more smiles I get! Not everyone can buy hehehe nwn. Besides, I do this because I love what I do, and I'll keep doing it wether I get profit from this or not hehehe. If you really want to help me, share it! I'd be VERY grateful. nwn
*warning, incoherent rambling ahead*
Apologies, I have more thoughts. This story is intending on living rent free in my head for a while and those thoughts want out.
I cannot begin to imagine how much time you invested in this.
You establish world rules that explain, why things confusing to me happen. You even repeat them to make sure these rules are understood but somehow still managed to ignore them the first time I read them.
The current end of act 3, chapter 1 low point with George makes me want to learn Spanish, it is amazing how many ups and downs this emotional roller coaster has. And how low the lows are.
I assume that one of the things coming up is that Laura coincidentally is specialized in child psychology. How convenient that would be for the trial! You did it with all the other characters :D
I noticed that Lucas' and George's last name are pretty much the same, letters are just a bit scrambled. Blaine and Benali. I hope this is just a fun gag and not some twist that they are the same person or one of them is imaginary (or worse, both).
I keep asking myself what George did. He said he hurt a lot of people, it involved alcoholism and coming home in the middle of the night half clothed. Until recently there was a decent divorce and child care settlement in place, but this is no longer enough for his ex-wife. What did you do George? I am so excited to find closure.
I am thinking if parts of the precognition at the tree while camping are directly related to the different endings of this story. But maybe they are already resolved.
Thank the maker (Cassandra might have said this more often than Leliana, but I liked the Iron Bull more so whatever) that I can read through the story again and again and still discover new details. I might start another round tonight :D
Current personal top moment ranking:
1. Saying goodbye to Laura at bus station (instant ugly cry)
2. George leaving the ER (instant ugly cry)
3. Replacing George's door lock, comic publish suggestion
4. Camping, bonfire guitar song
5. George talking about his daughter at the lake house
6. Camping, enjoying the view
7. Camping, the helmet
8. Winter day party karaoke
9. Chatting with Laura at the mall
10. Mall piano play with George
11. Beach talk with Jenna
12. George and Lucas becoming a family
Have a good one!
PS: This has me in stitches :D
Hi again Razorbee!
Hehehe, thanks. Yes, writing the story took me a year, make the VN another year, and translating is taking me another year too hahaha. But I enjoy it, a lot. About the last name, yes. Similar, but not related. Coincidences happens all the time in real life after all. And I loved your list hehehe, glad to see those moment weren't overlooked. And keep expecting the next updates! More content awaits to be discovered hehehe.
Have an nice day/night nwn
PS: My favorite is also The Iron Bull hehehe <3
Thank you so much Phamyne, for all your kind words. Yeah, kind of makes me sad to know that we're close to the final chapters, but yeah, it has been a good ride. Even if it is now well known as other VNs, I consider myself happy, because all of you got to read my story. Most of the things you've been reading actually happened to me, so the fact that you can emphatize so much with Lucas means you can empathize with me. And that makes me happy.
Regarding the sprites, yeah, I also wanted to include more "visuals" when each character speaks, but I think not including them was a way to bring you more story related stuff. Like I've stated in some devlogs, I am the only one working on this, and work/the house project/other personal projects and the VN... I think I'm really good at organizing my time hahaha. But yeah, I also wanted to bring more "visuals", but my "programmer sanity" told me to focus on writing and translating hahaha.
That's it. Thank you again Phamyne for your constant support. It really warms my heart.
Have a very nice day/night nwn.
Awwwww, thank you so much Phamyne nwn. Yeah, I can't give much details here in the comments sections because of spoilers hahaha, but yeah, that scene was SO HARD to write. Not because I didn't know how, but because I did know every detail of it. Thank you again for reading this Phamyne and your constant support in the comments section.
Have a nice day/night! :D
I know right?! Chapter 21 wrecked me as well, hehehe. My first time playing, I was upset because I thought I had gotten the bad ending, and the ending made me sob so loudly my neighbor knocked on my door to do a wellness check. XD
But thankfully I got the best ending, and the ups and downs made the ride definitely worth every tear shed. Such a beautiful story, even six months later, it continues to live rent free in the rooftop of my heart and mind. :3
P.S. You are adorable, Phamyne!
heehee! ^__^ lol, shame! But I feel xou! :p ~El Escritor~ brought tears to my eyes throughout the many chapters too UwU and I ALSO thought I got the bad end "^^, I considered doubling back to make other choices xD
I couldn't agree more :3 this VN will stay in my heart alongside Adastra, Echo, and all the other good stories :) the build up was perfectly paced and led beautifully to such a completely satisfying ending n_n
Hahahahha, yeah sorry, I've commented in other places that I wanted to make a point. That I didn't write the VN with horny thoughts, I wrote it with love. That's why I decided not to include nudes or things like that, since, from my point of view, things like sassy moments or nsfw moments should not really be... mundane. Not when two people love each other. For me "poetry" would be a better word to describe those moments. And I think i made the effort to show that.
Not that everyone has to agree, I know hahaha. Still... point made I guess.
Thank you for playing Literarybear :3
Owwww thank you nwn. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I do enjoy well written stories, and it's still makes me smile to know the fact that I actually managed to get other people smile too.
Yes, world can be pretty fuked* up hahahaha, but there's still Beauty 💙.
Thank you again! nwn
