Hopefully? π Coz the whole situation just doesn't sit well with me
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The thing I love most about Andromeda Six is how natural it feels for everyone to be bisexual. Not at any time does the flirting feel forced or awkward, more so that humanity has been around for long enough that society has naturally changed over many centuries.
While I know this is done mostly for the sake of the reader being able to choose their own gender, the writing that went into making it feel natural is well done and should be applauded, because I've seen this very same writing style fail many others.
It's always a pleasure to read updates for this VN, and it was so nice getting to learn about everyone's backstory! π
Might I suggest horizontally flipping the CG of Joseph on Day 11 so xou can see his face better? It's kinda hidden behind the name thinga-ma-bob, and he has such a handsome face, no reason to hide it~ π
Great update as always, and seeing as it was of my favourite otter, even better~ π
I can certainly tell xou hurried this build a little, as there are a few spelling mistakes here and there, but the writing is still as strong as usual π
The only thing that really stood out as weird was when the gang meets up at the bar, Oscar starts by telling Lucas that he and him are friends, then at the end of the hangout, Oscar says "I hope we can be friends"
And seeing as xou mentioned it, I guess I don't have to point out that Oscar's clothes kept changing at the end of the night π
PtK has fast become a feel good VN for me~ π it's mushy in all the right ways and just serious enough for it not to be clawingly sweet π I'm a pretty big fan of NSFW, but I 100% stand behind the choice to keep this project clean π
I think it was a real clever artistic decision to add piercings to Artemis's beanie (as he doesn't have ears) to make him look more punk rock π
Might I make a suggestion concerning the scene where the power goes out? I think Hunter's response to Arti's aggressive approach was a little tame. He doesn't have to go full on jock, but I think Hunter being more assertive would not just feel more natural (unless he doesn't do well with conflict), but it would also help to make the situation feel a little more tense. Just a suggestion of course.
Omg, Ollie is too damn adorable for his own good! π³ And that's saying a lot, because Rofi is dogdamn adorable~ βΊοΈ really liked his reaction to being asked about dating Artemis.
Fun update, I love what xou're doing π
1irst of all, thank xou sooo much for adding the pronunciations! Polish is 1ne of the languages I struggle the most to figure out, so it's extremely helpful! π
That scene at the Oginski's was flippin' hilarious! π shame, poor fella. I just wanted to give him a big hug when he went "Nooooo~" π I love how well written all the characters are, this scene alone was enough to showcase just how well constructed and alive they all feel, which in itself showcases xour skills as a writer π
Real great update. I'm so invested in the story, it's compelling, dark, and not so consuming that it gives me anxiety π I love the mix of crime-drama & horror/thriller, it blends so nicely together with the overall vibe xou've set
1ne final thing... With how this updated ended, does this mean the VN will have NSFW scenes? Sorry if this has already been asked. Either way, amazing work, I look forward to the next update! βΊοΈ
Thankx for the response! π I actually had a problem getting the option to sleep with Nick, like, I got it right the 1irst time, but then I went back to change something and couldn't re-create the conditions π€ not sure what I got wrong there π and thankx, I'll consider joining Discord~ π
And an even bigger thankx for answering the 2econd question, as it was the most concerning. I have 3hree general saves, "Good", "Bad", and "Neutral", with each favouring certain characters, so I just wanted to make sure I don't miss out on anything by not focusing one 1ne person π
Amazing work. Xou're really doing an outstanding job with this VN, I love everything about it, especially them wolfy sex scenes~ π
Hey! π Great update~ dark, sexy, and very intriguing π I just wanted to ask if xou have plans to continue the walkthrough or of it was meant more as a base guide to help us understand how the mechanics function?
Oh, and 1ne last thing. I realise this might be a silly question, as the VN is pretty sex focused, but does sleeping with certain people negatively influence other relationships? π€ I could be mistaken, but I think there was a point reduction earlier on with Nick? I keep a ton of saves just in case of this, but I thought I'd check π
The actions scenes are always super well done, which is impressive, because other than horror, I personally find that action is the most difficult genre to write well, so I really must applaud the effort xou've put into making these scenes coherent and absolutely enjoyable π
Everything about IFS is top notch. Backgrounds, sprites, music, writing, pacing, world building, everything! π I'm totally hooked and can't wait to see where xou guys take this compelling tale!
Real strong start! π I love the expansive cast (all the guys are total hotties π€€), I adore xour art/sprite style, and the premise is fun yet pleasantly dark! This VN looks like it'll be a real banger π
Does the arrival of Mortal Coil mean that xou're abandoning "The Sticks"? π€ Because I was really enjoying that VN
I know it has likely been brought up multiple times, but I beleive xou can fix the "Foreskin" problem simply by rearranging the name to "For Scale & Skin". Just a suggestion π
I'm enjoying the story's progress π especially since there are some branching options, and the new background are great! They really do fit the theme well. I hope xou do this with all the stock images?
1ne last thing. Might I suggest adding more interactions with the clutchmates (children)? I think xour story would benefit from including them more, and it doesn't have to be in a big way, as I can see what xou're going for, but they kinda feel invisible most of the time. The scenes with them are always cute, but it's kinda hard to connect with the clutchmates when they get such little screen time.
I'm always left smiling after each update π especially after Toast's~ he's such a feel good character for me π
I must applaud the team for all the hard work that's been put into this project, because not only does it look good, but it FUNCTIONS well. All the sprites, animations, UI, it's all great π
It's crazy to think how far xou've come from the original demo where Kobu left hell on vacation and had random sex to this full fledged tale with a compelling storyline! π It's been such a fun journey
I'm really excited for the future of this VN, please keep up all the AMAZING work! π
Oh, and 1ne last thing... ‘‘‘TOOOAST!!! π
What a great flippin' update! π I had a lot of fun reading it. I love the direction and am excited to see where xou guys take it~ π Also, I like the little intro xou added to the beginning, it really helps to set the pace π
There's a craaazy amount of info in the LOOM, like, omg π the world building for String Zero is absolutely insane! π― I must applaud xou for this
I'm not sure if it was the sheer quantity of information, or maybe a combination of the font and honeycomb background, but I found it difficult to read the right side panel in the LOOM (I have partial dyslexia, so that could be why). Everything is well written and coherent, but it felt like trying to detangle a mess of cables spun by a self taught IT technician π
1ne final thing. When the Visor pops up, the VN becomes laggy (enough that the entire background flashes black and only displays the dialogue box and HUD). I don't usually have this problem with animated VNs, so I'm not sure if it's just my resolution (1366x768) or what, but I thought I'd let xa'll know.
Weh-hey! Way to start this update off kinky~ π just like "bam!" Bear cock π
Oh my freaking gosh, this update was sooo amazing! π― Like, I was on the edge of my seat π really great writing, I was so enthralled. Action scenes can sometimes fail miserably with bad writing, but this was awesome, perfect in every way π
Amazing job as always π I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here~! βΊοΈ
I am absolutely in LOVE with this visual novel! π Xou've done and increeedible amount of work on this game, like, wow π The whole thing is an entire experience and I must applaud xou for all the hard work xou've put into it π
There are an UNBELIEVABLE amount of customisation options, more than I've seen in any other VN, Kevin is simultaneously adorable and frightening (and shamefully very arousing), the writing is wonderful, the pacing great, and the overall vibe is totally up my alley~ βΊοΈ
Gorgeous. Really, top dog marks across the board! βββββ I'm VERY excited to see where this story goes. Keep up all the amazing work! π
This VN is certainly a breath of fresh air π could the writing benefit from a 1nce over? Surely, but the introduction to this universe is still well done. The pacing is great, the characters seem fun, and the overall premise is interesting.
The resolution is... Hmm, I'm torn between liking it and not. I'm on a 1366x768, so the graphics are pretty small. Maybe increasing the width just a bit will be enough to bridge that medium between PC and phone?
Either way, good work! I enjoyed what I read and am interested to see where xou take the story π