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Does Isaac have borderline personality disorder? 🤔 Coz I see more of myself in him with each update 😅

Interesting concept 😌 but as previously stated, the translation could use some work

What an incredible 1irst build! 😁 really blown away by what xou guys have created 😌 love the world, love the art, love the writing ☺️ Stunning, I can't wait for more~ 😋

Certainly interesting, especially after chapter 2 😌

Jsbtw, there's a couple Russian sentences in the English translation

I really like what xou guys are going for with this VN, however, despite having 4our routes, only 1ne of those has a proper top, and as a bottom, it kinda deters me from the other paths. This is not meant to insult any of the characters based on their personalities, as they are all nicely done, moreso that as a player, it's nice to have a choice between being dom or sub

I want to thank and compliment xou on implementing the ability to choose between being dominant or submissive, as most VNs really struggle with this. After skipping to get all the sprites, I realised how simple yet clever this solution was! 😋

Great work as always, I love where the story's going! 😁 Happy new year~

😭💔 I can't handle how heckin' adorable Rhoun is! Why is he so cute!? 😳

Really fun idea! 😁 The transition from being free to imprisoned felt a little unnatural, but I'm interested to see where xou take this 😋

Amaaazing work so far! 😁 The concept is a lot of fun, the novel itself is very well written, and I absolutely adore the cast~ 😋 I'm super excited to see how this story develops 😌

Wow, just... Wow 😌 what a wild journey this has been, and it's only just begun! 😁 Thank xou so much for all the hard work xou've put into creating Lyre. Here's to the next chapter ☺️

I am completely ENAMORED by the story! 😁 The tale has evolved so wonderfully and I absolutely adore everything this VN has become~ 😌

I love the little animalistic behaviours xou've included in Loken's personality, and honestly? Sometimes my heart can't handle how freaking adorable he is~ ☺️

Oh, and I'd like to log an entry for Takhi's colourful vocabulary. I'm not sure if xou've already used it yet or not, but I think her calling some1ne a "cum fart" would be very fitting 😋

Amazing work, seriously. The pacing feels natural, and the writing always flows so nicely 🙂 It's so easy to become lost in this world xou've created 😌

Super excited for the date! Must 😐 have 😯 knot! 😳

no problem, and thankx for letting me know. I'll keep my eyes open for it in the future n_n

The names are a bit confusing, as the heading for each character's dialogue box is still in Chinese (much like the text on the phone), but the VN is really cute and is shaping up to be a fun story! 😁

Sounds like a good plan 🙂 I'm sure xou'll see a difference from when xou started xour VN and when xou complete it 😋Just keep writing/drawing 'n xou'll get there! 😌 xou're talented, so just keep at it 😉

I think xour VN has a lot of potential! 😁 The characters are well contrived, and I really like some of the interactions between them. However, I do think the VN could use a good polish.

Most of the scenes are a bit too short to fully encapsulate all of the emotions and/or importance of the moment. Focusing on every other scene in the same way that xou did the sex scene will really help to express these moments better 🙂

Ahw 😟 what a shame xou don't plan to continue this, as it was a real nice read and has a lot of potential. Hopefully xou learned something from this project to put into another? Either way, thankx for sharing, I really liked what xou wrote 🙂 I hope xou decide to release something else in the future 

Loving the direction~! 😁

Thankx :3 gonna be hard to follow each route with only 5ive slots

Please tell me xou plan to add more save slots? "^^_

Wait... Is the MC a girl? :(

I can't seem to access Parker's Day 9 & 10 despite playing Version 0.11.30i 🤔 it ends on Day 9 for me 😟

Everything from writing to art, from music to direction, Devil's Gambit is epic in every sense of the word; A masterpiece in the making.

Gosh, Richard is just so.... perfect! ☺️ his accent, his dad-bod, his domineering nature, his caring side [squeals in fanboy] 😍

[visible excitement] 😳

Oh wow, the VN runs soooo much more smoothly now! 😯 I only play every few updates, so this is a real nice surprise! Thank xou for going through the effort to get it running so beautifully~ 😁 looking forward to spending time with my handsome muscled meow without any lagging~ 😋

Sad to see this go, as it really has an insane amount of potential, but I can understand xour reasons. Best of luck with the new project, here's to another year~ 😉

Xou know, I don't know why no1ne else has done this yet 🤔 there are a couple VN's that are similar to or based on tabletop games, but none that quite encompass that feeling of adventure, nor any that have the risk that fans love and hate with bad dice rolls 😋 really enjoying what I've read so far~ ♥️

Not sure if this has already been suggested or not, but it might be nice to be able to hover the cursor over each of the stats and get a little description for them, like: luck, health, knowledge.

Thankx for responding! 😁 It's really silly, but I like to keep my saves all nice and neat, so I appreciate the heads up! 😋 I'll just stick to my current good, bad, and neutral slots and keep seperate files so I don't miss anything 😌

I loved this latest update, btw! Xou're doing an amazing job 😊 xou really know how to -nail- them sex scenes~ 😉

Hey~! 😁 Quick question: While I know that paths branch off into good, bad, and neutral, how many actual character based routes will there be? I like to keep my saves organised, so I was just wondering 😋

Heh, well they are devilish birds 😉 in a single day, I watched 1ne steal my chips and throw my friend from her back 😅

Why do xou have a grudge against ostriches?? 🤣

Hurrah for Maelbjorn! 😁 That handsome fella deserves all the love in the world~

Really well paced and incredibly hot~ 🤤 as a smut writer, I know that finding a balance between the story's length and the detail xou want to add usually ends with xour tale running waaay longer than xou originally planned, so I really must applaud the pacing 🙂

These short tales have just enough information for us to become immersed, are short enough that we don't lose interest, and are juuust the right length for readers to get off~ 😉

Amazing work xou guys, really good change of pace from what's common in visual novels 😌

I always find myself listening to Versailles around the time xou guys release a public build, which is incredibly ironic, yet very fitting~ 😁 and considering they have a song called Masquerade... 😏

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I LOVE the direction this VN has taken! 😋 The emotions are really well set 😌 Though, with xou guys introducing such a large cast while a psycho chases us down, I have a bad feeling 😅

Keep up all the good work! ☺️

Me too! >_< I think it's somewhere in the 1irst of Max's cutscenes in the baths, the 1ne with rune moon, general gunner, and the blue heeler, (in that room with white pillars?) as all the clues lead there, but I still can't find Alon :/

Looving what I've read so far! 😁 It's hilarious, cute, hot, filthy, and a really nice read! 😋 Great work all round~

Great start! 😁 This VN oooozes potential 😌 Excited to see where xou might take it! 

No problem 🙂 always happy to help another writer. I think xour VN has a lot of potential! 😁 The sprites are cute and the story's fun, so I'm eager to see where xou might take this~

Sounds great! 😉 Looking forward to the changes xou've made and even more so to spend time with each of the boys~ 😋 keep up the good work!

Xou're an incredibly diverse writer and it really shows with this project 😌 I love the MC, he's so laid back and chill 😅 the approach to this story is so much fun and I can't wait to see where it goes~

Well, xou're doing a great job 😁 there's a few things I'd change here and there, but I really like the direction of the story. My favourite part is learning about the world (and spending time with the boys, obviously~ 😉).