This is really just a demo. I'll try to continue it as best as I can, but if there's no interest, then I won't put effort into something people aren't having fun with.

Honestly, most games don't get a lot of feedback or recognition, just because there are so many of them.  I really think you have to create for yourself first.  Make something that you want to make because you want to make it.  I know it can feel like you're shouting into a void, but like any other hobby, you should do it first and foremost because you enjoy it.

That said, I'll try to give yours a shot when I can and leave some feedback.  I want to be more active in doing that here, but I am recovering from RSI right now, so I can't play a whole lot.  How long is the demo?

If you're looking for general feedback and you have the time, making some small games for game jams can also be a good way to get started.  Jammers tend to be more active in playing and commenting on each others' games, I find.  Plus, it's good practice, not just for making games but also for finishing them.