This is really just a demo. I'll try to continue it as best as I can, but if there's no interest, then I won't put effort into something people aren't having fun with.
Honestly, most games don't get a lot of feedback or recognition, just because there are so many of them. I really think you have to create for yourself first. Make something that you want to make because you want to make it. I know it can feel like you're shouting into a void, but like any other hobby, you should do it first and foremost because you enjoy it.
That said, I'll try to give yours a shot when I can and leave some feedback. I want to be more active in doing that here, but I am recovering from RSI right now, so I can't play a whole lot. How long is the demo?
If you're looking for general feedback and you have the time, making some small games for game jams can also be a good way to get started. Jammers tend to be more active in playing and commenting on each others' games, I find. Plus, it's good practice, not just for making games but also for finishing them.