i'm really glad you like, I was definitely feeling the vibe so I left it in :D For the genre of lofi I figured it probably shouldn't belong but ahh whatever it was fun to write lol. Appreciate the tips, i'll experiment with that too! Thanks for listening !
Thanks for the feedback, I kinda thought the sax was a lil too aggressive as well for the lofi mix but decide to keep it anyways. Maybe i'll remix a version without it. Thanks for listening! :)
Total vibe I love it!! this is really well mixed too I could hear everything so clearly. I thought for a sec the background was kk slider haha. Really great track!
Thanks! This is indeed my first time working on a chiptune track. tbh it was listening to Cjees tracks on the other Jams we joined that inspired me to try lol. Definitely a bit of a learning curve for me to navigate the sounds and composition because they can get kinda harsh together if you use too many notes. Thanks for listening to the track :)
Really nicely layered sounds that provide a cool atmosphere, the clock, whatever that noise is thats right behind the ticks I love it. Thanks for sharing I enjoyed this!!
Its really cool to see a composition that includes vocals, the whole thing I can see is really well thought out! The pickaxe as the percussion, the lyrics, and the mood all tie in together really nicely. Cool jam!
Love how you can actually hear the shovel and pick, this is such a cool blues track! Honestly, listening to some of your work is what inspired me to try out chiptune, although I took one look at Deflemask tutorial and said nope! Vsts it is for me lol. Nice work!!
This is a fun little track, Im digging the flamenco style guitaring! I have not played DF but the voice reminds me of when I used to get my azz beat in Street Fighter 2
Man this is so good!! I too am a big fan and draw inspiration from David Wise. Totally resonate with the memory thing, one time I wrote a song and I was like wait? This is just like Aquatic Ambience 🤔
I wanted to add different percussion but I'm not very good at programming drums yet. I think its something i'll focus on for my next projects, thanks for the feedback!
Truthfully I added sleighbells because I cannot program drums for the life of me yet haha. Glad you like it! I found that sound on accident by messing around with the setting on a viola. Appreciate the criticisms and compliments, thanks!
That was cinematic and really set a dark mood and an eerie ambiance. When the whispers came in i got goose bumps 😳Fantastic piece to listen to, nice work!
Cool intro, i like how it slowed down and went into something else! I wish the horns at 2:05 were a touch louder. Your bass work is incredible, the bass melody that happens at 2:20 is so good. At the end tho, I feel we didn't need to return to this slow section of the song, especially after hearing some super dope hype melodies. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the song, good work!
I like where you took the song and I quite like what you did with the guitars , but the intro was a tad bit too long and repetitive. It would have been really cool to see you build up the song that takes us into it. Overall nice work!
What a beautifully orchestrated piece! I love your sound selection and how it all builds up. The timpani drum really does great work and it really builds an atmosphere. Very nice to listen to and fits the theme quite well, nice work!
Wow, you knocked it out the park with this one! It brings me back to those old RPGs. Great build up on the song. I am a big fan of the sparklebell melody with the other bell when they come in at 0:57
Really well composed track, it was very enjoyable and I wish it was longer. I think the pizzicato string need to be brought forth just a little bit. I'm wearing headphones and I can barely hear them.
Really enjoyed how the drumming went from the downbeat into the upbeat in the intro, and then the song takes off! My only minor criticism I have is that I don't like the tone of the crash cymbal used, but overall the song is awesome, nice work!!
Really good melodies in this song, that part at 0:20 thru 0:25 is amaze. I noticed in many of your songs you like to take the song on a brief walk into the darkside before bringing it back (0:30-0:45) which is an interesting idea in many songs, but for a waltz that was really cheerful it felt like a brief moment of anxiety before coming back to reality. I enjoyed the ending, it had a strong finish! Overall good work, I liked it :)
You're doing a great job of bringing out the sounds and balancing the melodies with the limited channels on a tracker. Really great stuff, love to hear it!
