I really enjoyed this game, and I’m glad I stumbled across your work for the first time. I was curious about how much influence the choices would have, so I went out of my way to find both endings—and I was pleasantly surprised to see that the decisions truly mattered. That sense of agency made the experience feel rewarding.
The writing stood out as refreshingly strong, even with a few quirks like the heavy use of the word phlegm. The character interactions were especially compelling: Iggy and Genzou’s dynamic kept me hooked, while Iggy’s friendship with Berek felt authentic and grounded. Some of Berek’s early dialogue left me puzzled, but that scene quickly developed into something memorable. The exchange between Genzou and Orlam was probably the weakest, not because it was poorly written, but I’ve seen similar "vampire master berates offspring" interactions before. Even so, the story as a whole left me very satisfied.
Visually, I appreciated that the character designs broke away from the usual genre tropes—often just two anime twinks—and instead leaned into more atypical traits. That said, I think your style could be pushed further, since many of the designs share repeating features like similar noses, ears, and curly hair. Exploring more variation could make the cast feel even more unique.
Overall, this was a refreshing and engaging experience. The writing, choices, and character work all came together in a way that kept me invested, and I’m excited to see what you create next!