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Exactly!! The Doomed Defender is well... doomed. They will take more attacks / damage than anyone else. Their friend's will love them... until... well... you know...

Woot!! Cheers!!

hahaha

The opening of this is so good. These few short sentences in the beginning say so much with saying so little. 

Soooooo... is this Fred from the new Scooby Doo? https://scoobydoo.fandom.com/wiki/Fred_Jones_(disambiguation)

Wow!! Did you like print this out, draw on it and re-scan it? Very clever either way!

Wow!! Did you like print this out, draw on it and re-scan it? Very clever either way!

I would love to see this in a different font for the body of text

A little bigger than a A4

Cool concept. I would love a period lighthouse as opposed to a modern one.  I would love a sentence or two setting up the Land Locked Lighthouse would be a fab, a myth or fable about it that travelers tell.

Great idea!! Love a building that moves through space. Would love of  sentence or two describing why magic moves it. Would love to  see a black n white + pink n yellow version. Would love to know if there is a way to stop the temple from moving or destroy the temple in some conflagration by destorying the prism or something. 

Great start. Needs a little more detail (like trap damage). Also, feels a little modern, like it exists in the 21st century, things like the trash dumpster. Maybe replace the trash dumpster with a well or an cesspits 

Can we get a free version to rate?

This is great!! A single monster that is an adventure in and of itself! So good.

I already sent you my notes on Reddit. Great work!!

Really great start. I love that you give us 4 dif versions of the project. For the final, I would love a dif font for the body of text. The Chomsky-esq font is great for titles and headers but is hard to read when it is the body of the text. The love the high level concept. I want some deets on the man in the iron mask; it can just be a single sentence.

No worries. I feel the crunch.

It is soooooo good. I would love for the layout to be a little more Mork-ified. I would love a piece(s) of art for the hare, mouse and the tea cup. I would love a sentence or two describing the origin of "the curse of the hatter", and front load that at the start of the adventure.

Really good. I just want a little more. A small map of the island or the ship. Maybe stats for the wicked monks. Instead of saying Midsommer, maybe just  a sentence or two describing Midsommer-esque events.

I want  a little more... like a table of possible plots of the fish people... just a little more juice. Also... if we can re-name the chanter monster something else, that would be fab.,

Very fun encounter to drop into any adventure to give ur players a fright!

Very silly and fun. I want just a little more juice about this class, a little more of what makes it tick. Might only be a single sentence, but I want it :)

I want more!!

Is it possible to get a free version for the jam?

Fun little adventure. I want a little know a little bit more about the troglodytes. Even just  a single sentence. Are they raiders? Refugees?  Are they all siblings, like a single clutch of Trogoldytes? As for color, I the green is cool, but I wish it was BnW, yellow and / or pink. I love the MB color palette, it instantly lets you what you are reading. In a full size book, you can totally break the color palette, but in a single A4, I feel you need to stick to the palette. Now... what are we going to do about that giant follicle?

This is might be my favorite thing I have read during the jam. I wish the numbering system of the city locations was laid out differently (essentially 10s place was the quarter and 1s place the ring / district). But otherwise this is an amazing product. It feels like Mork Borg, I will definitely be using this in my home game.

Oh, cool, its a Chicago thing!

Cool!! Shall Check Out!!

I just finished  a mushroom themed campaign for Mörkborg. I wish I had this when I started. 😂

Congrats!! What is ur zine called?