Really great start. I love that you give us 4 dif versions of the project. For the final, I would love a dif font for the body of text. The Chomsky-esq font is great for titles and headers but is hard to read when it is the body of the text. The love the high level concept. I want some deets on the man in the iron mask; it can just be a single sentence.
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Hey, thanks a lot for your comment ❤️🙏 I'm glad you like it :)
I must admit that I experiment with my approach to presenting the adventure/dungeon. As an ex-UX Designer, I care about readability, transparency, and so on in projects, but... I wanted something different. I wanted it to be hard to read, enigmatic, and only inspiring without clear answers. You have to decipher it and create your own ideas based on it.
Of course, I'm not sure how this experiment turns out, and I guess that for you, it's 50/50 success 👍