Fun little adventure. I want a little know a little bit more about the troglodytes. Even just a single sentence. Are they raiders? Refugees? Are they all siblings, like a single clutch of Trogoldytes? As for color, I the green is cool, but I wish it was BnW, yellow and / or pink. I love the MB color palette, it instantly lets you what you are reading. In a full size book, you can totally break the color palette, but in a single A4, I feel you need to stick to the palette. Now... what are we going to do about that giant follicle?