Great start. Needs a little more detail (like trap damage). Also, feels a little modern, like it exists in the 21st century, things like the trash dumpster. Maybe replace the trash dumpster with a well or an cesspits
Thank you! After posting it I realized there was a lot of information missing... I could have said it's up to the gm to make that up, but I just forgot to add it... haha! Thanks for checking it out!