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I really like this one. It's a good mix of a "number go up" game with a story. The premise is fun and the pregnant art is attractive. Very solid.

You're great at drawing. The grayscale drawings have soul. "Analyzing" client scene was hot. Loved the epic fail facial expression. I'd like to see more black and white drawings of Gillana in game. Drawings of her doing her different work outs, having sex in the gym, having sex with different clients, having sex while pregnant, and her everyday life with a giant belly. A gallery of unlocked art would be nice to have.

There's a bit too much clicking in the UI right now. Your art is amazing but most time is spent looking at gui buttons without any drawings on screen. I'd like to always see her, like the stat screen shows her. It felt satisfying to spend points buying expensive workouts but the other clicks were more like chores. Buttons didn't stay in one area so it was hard to move mouse around to click them.

The +1 month advance caused slow pacing. Maybe advancing +3 months could speed up the game? I wish events popped up automatically on advance without having to click the social menu each time. I didn't like seeing the same event more than once in the same run.

The writing is good and felt emotional. I want to read more about her. It would be cool to have a rival pregnant muscle girl surrogate for her to compete with like an athlete but idk it's your story. This idea is fantastic. You did a great job on it and I hope to see more of this develop.

Your game has SOUL. Sincere authentic SOUL. The black muscle girl surrogate island idea makes me excited. The dream of being free after a life of warehouse work makes MC relatable. Calm, soothing beach audio. The patois dialog is fun. I wanna see h-scene CGs of these characters if possible, just like the cover art, a whole VN full of CGs like that.

The art style takes me back in time. Nostaglic for decades ago when I made drawings in mspaint with a computer mouse. No antialiasing, no pressure sensitivity, no line width, no shading. Your art style instantly caught my eye because of that. I think it is great because it has that retro mouse art feeling. It stands out. Gloria rules

Critical feedback:

Contrast is too high. Darker skin girls are hard to see when the backgrounds/sky/UI/clothing is so much whiter/brighter than skin. In photos this is called "blowing out the exposure". Keep the whitest white and the blackest black on screen at any time, closer together. Don't lighten their skin itself. The black skin is great try to adjust the situations that the same person's skin is "photographed" in (it's a drawing but computer screens are like cameras). For example, the girls in the hotline bling music video

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The important parts of anatomy are working. Face, lips, tits, belly, butts are cute, sweet, hot and lovable. Good job on those. Details like muscles and the hands could benefit from more practice with references. I like muscles mostly on the legs with only slightly muscular arms, to keep a feminine look. More Squats than curls. The book "anatomy for sculptors" by zarins uldis is an anatomy book I look at every day. This site has some good searchable references for muscle girls/black girls/pregnant girls.

https://www.3d.sk/photo_sets/search/query//thumb/small/orderBy/chronology/catego...

Don't get discouraged. Anatomy is a journey that never ends. Please keep working on this one. I hope you develop it more and get the full game across the finish line.

Your game is fun. When I lost, I wanted to try again. Trying again got slowed down by tutorial, equipping starters, buying one item, and linking starter item. I wish all that was faster to setup on a new game so I can try again faster. I wish I could auto-equip and link the best combination of items with a single click.

The chips are strong but aren't sexy, wish that stat was on a sexy item. Slave wipes aren't sexy cause they remove bondage. I wanna see the bondage. Backpack is too small to play with. Basic starter items are more powerful than later game expensive items, took away sense of progression. More items than unique art and the same art for different items was lame.

It was confusing to buy a second link. I had to avoid link items when I only had 1 link. Wish 2nd link didn't take up a backpack slot. A dps meter or text log of fights would help me understand what is happening. Good music. Sometimes the game lags for five or six seconds when starting fights.

The game feels hard and random now. Often lost after only making few decisions. No way of knowing what the right decision is other than to replay the game. Felt like if I don't mid-max each choice of what to buy, I lose. I often felt like I was playing the game the wrong way, but after beating it, feels like just luck. Mirror/almost mirror matchups were boring. A randomized enemy with the exact same art/outfit as the player avatar was very lame and it should be easy to code it to not generate an exact copy of player's avatar.

The gameplay sometimes clashes with art. I want to look at the girls, but I gotta watch the numbers go up/icons/tool tips to learn how to win. I wanted to try the cool new items, but had to pass because of stats. If I didn't need a cool item's stat, already had 1 link, not enough money, full backpack, etc I didn't get to "goof off and see what happens" cause its all too hard.

I wish enemy girls had more novelty/character. DohnaDohna had special girls with short erotic backstories to get player to care. Lore to make me care about cool enemies tied up among the randomly generated tied up enemies. Seeing the enemy nude for 3 seconds at the start of the fights deflates excitement. Rather not see her nude until at the end for victory.

More art would make the game hotter. Especially not "paper doll" art in the battle pose. It would be cool if victory rewarded with a CG of the girl tied up in a hot pose. I wish the game had a specific antagonist girl we could fight multiple times and put illustrated CGs of her losing as a reward for beating the game. Not illustrations for every fight, but more art as the reward for beating the game.

Weird writing pov? I want to feel heterosexual masculine power in a game about tying up girls. I don't wanna read about being the tied up girl. Reading "you" are the submissive girl ruins the power. I would like to have an option to play as the casino tying up the girls or a male main character tying up girls. It wouldn't change any gameplay, but would make everything less emasculating.

Great demo. Amazing potential. I'm excited to see it develop.

I never seen kaplay.js before. Good performance and game loaded instantly. The gameplay was too slow and too easy for me. Without skill shots, dashes, or fast movement, I didn’t have much to do. Slowly walking to pick up xp from harmless enemies felt like a chore. The enemies didn’t get tankier or faster moving fast enough to be threatening. The ring of damage killed enemies too easily.

idea guy idea:  Add long-range artillery skillshots to vampire survivors. Mix kog’maw from league of legends with ravagers from starcraft 2. Player has to kill far away enemies with artillery, but is harassed by weak close up enemies. Weak close up enemies die easily, but are there to distract and waste your artillery cooldown on nearby enemies instead of far away important enemies. Defend multiple far apart bases with skill shots while staying alive in vampire survivors. Enemies run towards bases and player.

Or just copy Bunny survivor. Buns: Bunny survivor is my favorite VS with skill shots game.

I enjoyed exploring the horny girls on the weird old computer.

Gui is beautiful, relaxing to look at.

Whipping game is confusing but hot. idk what the white scribble crosshair is?

Reading the writings/drawings is fascinating.

I wish the resolution was higher or not anti-aliased because the blurred pixel text hurts my eyes.

Figuring out how to emulate a gba game was irritating. Please keep the aesthetic but code it as a web game I can click play on instantly.

The pixel art is excellent but infrequent and too softcore to be a "bdsm porn masturbate-able flash game", feels more like those itch.io domino club art experiences

This is not a virus. I scanned it with Virustotal just now. Here are the results:  https://www.virustotal.com/gui/file/85db873b4546b89a798b3b8f35747dafd99a55a748ac...

The results do not say "2 viruses". The results say 67 companies scanned the file, 65  companies detected no viruses, and 2 companies detect virus.  No virus is detected according to Malwarebytes, Avast, AVG, McAfee Scanner, Kaspersky, or Microsoft. 65 of the 67 companies scanning it say it is safe.

Maxsecure and Antiy-AVL are the only companies accusing it of being a virus. I have never heard of them before today.  Why do those two say that? I don't know what to tell you.  This is a zip file of an export from the open source defold game engine.

Here is a reddit thread of MaxSecure detecting virus "Trojan.Malware.300983.susgen" on cd-rom games from 1999:

https://www.reddit.com/r/antivirus/comments/wlkud8/trojanmalware300983susgen_fal...

This is not a virus. I scanned it with virustotal just now. Here are the results:  https://www.virustotal.com/gui/file/85db873b4546b89a798b3b8f35747dafd99a55a748ac...

The results do not say "2 viruses detected". They say 67 companies scanned the file, 65 companies detected no viruses, and 2 companies detect virus.  No virus is detected according to malwarebytes, avast, AVG, McAfee Scanner, Kaspersky, or microsoft. 65 of the 67 companies scanning it say it is safe.  Maxsecure and Antiy-AVL are the only companies accusing it of being a virus. I have never heard of them before today. 

Why do those two say that? I don't know what to tell you.  This is a zip file of an export from the open source defold game engine.  Here is a reddit thread of MaxSecure detecting virus "Trojan.Malware.300983.susgen" on cd-rom games from 1999:  https://www.reddit.com/r/antivirus/comments/wlkud8/trojanmalware300983susgen_fal...

Thank you for your feedback. I want to give them dialogs, add more progress meters, more animations, and finish the third monstergirl. I sculpted an insect girl for the cooking level, but couldn’t get her together for the deadline. After I rest and recover, I want to make more with these monstergirls.