“Let’s write a bu-“
*Gets bronchitis and two colds.*
“LET’S WRITE A BU-“
*Writes personal projects.*
“LET’S WRITE CHEERLI-“
*Is also a slut for monster hunter.*
In other words we’re all lazy. I’ve had a lot of good ideas due to 4chan threads and Annon, so I’m a lot more confident in the Bimbo Cheerilee route being both sexy and fun to read.
Cheerilee link 7 and 8,
https://pastebin.com/63ghyf4r
96 days later.I'm so sorry
I'm gonna try to have link 9 and 10 done by the end of Monday.
That means I actually need to speed things up. I'm sorry, I have been screwing around instead of working on this. I do actually have a couple more of her normal links done. I was just gonna finish it off, post 1-10, then get to all the bimbo stuff. (Which is also what you told me not to do.) I'll post a couple more links in a second. Tomorrow and Monday I'll really get on it and see what I can give you.
I swear I'm not making situations for you to draw new pictures, although I guess that's inevitable in the long run.
I've been reading up on smut for research, which is going all fine and dandy on my end, but I'm wondering though if there's a certain date or time you want me to get material or stuff back to you guys. If there IS a date to shoot for, I definitely am okay with aiming for it. As it is I'm currently taking my time trying to make sure what I'm writing in concept is solid.
Don't want the situation to be where you're basically waiting on the bit of Cheerilee's bimbo path before you shell out a demo. Don't like the idea of keeping you guys waiting.
Cheerilee's Social Link 1-6.
https://pastebin.com/63ghyf4r
Probably gonna skim through it tomorrow with a fresh mind for any mistakes, but here it is!
Question about Bimbo Cheerilee. Does her Bimbo path start by reaching any specific level in her normal path, or is it completely separate from it?
Tell me if you want me to change anything about it!
Her height and appearance is intimidating. I love it.
Already interacting with Twilight was taken into account and was going to be reflected upon in social link 4, but as you guys pointed out, it's a bit of a silly thing to be asked to do if you have, say, already reached Link 10 with Twilight, or have made her go Bimbo already. Thinking of a good way to either reword social link 3 or simply redo it.
Alternatively, I could just make it so you can pick "I've taken her on a date to Sugarcube Corner," if you've already done that part. I was going to have that be an option in Link 4 of Cheerilee, with her being thankful, and showing very slight hints of jealousy.
Thought of how I'd like Link 10 to go, kinda just came to me out of the blue. Pretty happy with how it's coming together.
Family obligations came up so I don't have anything new just yet, but I'll make sure to give you guys something again by Tuesday.
"Pff, I've written like 2000 words in one day for short stuff. This should be easy."
*6 hours later, 4 AM.*
"OH MY GOSH WHY I AM STRESSING OUT ABOUT MAKING THE FIRST SOCIAL LINK PERFECT JUST SET A OUTLINE FOR HER PATH AND GO FOR IT ALREADY-"
So I'm part way into Social Link 3, slowly moving a faster rate as I go. I spent most of the day in front of the computer staring the page, brainstorming ideas. I have a lot of little things I feel are good that I'm tying together.
Here's her normal, non bimbo route so far: https://pastebin.com/63ghyf4r
I'm planning in Social Link's 5-7 for her to make a study group in contrast to Harshwhinny's (assuming that'll actually even be a thing.) A lot of the students attending it will be boys who have a crush on her. Reason why, is going vanilla you end up boosting her confidence a lot and get her to interact with the students in a way that makes her feel less out of place. If you go bimbo she's a teacher in a secluded study group with a bunch of boys who like her.
So, is this going the direction you want? More of something already there? Rewrite it? I'll take any advice and orders you guys got. Won't hurt my feelings if you pull me off this, but I am having fun here, and I hope I get a shot at something else if so.
Pretty determined to finish thing and start working bimbo. I'm gonna have to research a little bit on what's a good type of descriptive narrative to use possibly, but I've had a couple good ideas for multiple things.
I need to sleep, will start back up when I awake.
Love the designs, by the way.
Using a mouse to save/load.
Deleted my save folder, lemme go step by step as a just in case thing:
Clicked through intro, named self Dipdo.
Clicked Guts option.
Clicked "Sorry, wanted to go somewhere silent."
Clicked "Make a game of it."
9/7 Monday Afterschool, saved on 1st, 2nd, and 3rd file, in that order.
Closed game, opened game.
All three load, so far promising, let's push it a little more in just in case.
Spend Time with Twilight, click "I was hoping to follow your lead and study." then "Ask what's bothering her."
Save on just the first file, close game, open game.
Clicking on first save causing game to sit at title.
Clicking New Game now loads first save.
Being a fan of SMT1, another theme that could also help is having one NPC determined to make everyone into Bimbos, while having another determined to undo any bimbo magic done so far, you would interact with these two a bit more, making them the Chaos and Law Heroes respectively. The game series also has a law god and a chaos god, a being in the violet room that turns things into bimbos for you, and another being you could get into contact with to undo bimbo magic.
Hello, I'm Pickleless! I'm a writer on FIMfiction, a big fan of Annon, and bimbo stuff in general. Checking my FIM account, you would see I'm a comedy writer, not a smut one, but I have a lot of free time right now, and it doesn't look like that'll change anytime soon. I would love to contribute to this in anyway possible. Heck, I wouldn't mind using this as an excuse to start learning code or drawing if this stays alive and I get good enough to contribute something worthwhile. At the moment though, I'm just a writer and I'd like to give a hand if you'll have me.
Since reading this I was trying to think of a good excuse for why the main character has this power and where he could have got it. Since everyone else is throwing out their ideas I figure I should just pitch mine as well off the bat. Dev said he's only seen season 1 so I'm gonna cover some canon stuff at times.
So, in canon, just about every character in the human world is a counterpart to someone in Equestria. Since that's the case, why not have the main character be a counterpart of a Changeling? Changelings in MLP are creatures that feed off love, and use it to power their magic and make it stronger. In this game, Twilight seems to be a mix of her human self and pony counterpart, I also assume she originates from the human world. Since this isn't following canon too closely, why not have Sunset steal the Element of Friendship as she runs away into this world for the first time? She bumps into the Main Character, and drops the element. The main character picks it up and it jump-starts his changeling magic and makes it more 'friendship' based, adding to the dating sim aspect. The Element of Friendship could also be a pendent in this version instead of a crown so he could wear it at all times and not have it be visible or stand out.
MetaKnight suggested having the Lust Statue being the entity who you use in the Violet Room, with you being it's chosen one to spread lust and whatnot. In canon, Starswirl banished the Sirens into the human world so they weren't Equestria's problem anymore. You could have the Lust Statue be an entity that was turned to stone like Discord, and banished. Combined with the changeling and crown thing above, it would also make more sense why it would choose you as it's chosen one. The Violet Room could be a place it made so it could reach you easy without having people bother or mess with it.
Even if you're not fond of this idea, I still would love to help brainstorm, and help write ero scenes that you need or want at the moment. So please don't hesitate to ask!
After testing out loading/saving stuff, it seems the issue is this:
Make save 1
Make save 2 (current save, making save 1 the second most recent save.)
Close game, try loading save 1, error, just goes back to the title.
Loading the save 2 or a save 3 (save before 1 or 2) works just fine.
Trying to load the botch save, and then clicking new game will load that botched save instead of making a new game.
Also, upon gaining access to hanging out with Twilight in the evenings, the dialogue for doing so ends up looping forever for some reason.
Trying Bimbo Magic twice on Twilight two more times past the fourth (and currently final) time when it's weak/no broken hearts swapped her picture for Cheerilee's.
