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Nice game! This is the first narrative game I've seen in this jam.

Here are some ways it can be improved (mostly nitpicks):

-You should y-sort the sprites to make sure they are rendered in the correct order

-The transitions between times of day felt really abrupt

-The movement speed felt a little slow, so a sprint button would be nice

-The dialogues felt like they ended before you could really get to know the other characters (but I'm sure you would have written more if you had the time)

Overall a pretty solid game and the art was quite well made!

I would love if you could check my game out! I will rate yours right away

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also please read the very short description before playing)

Pretty fun, fast paced and well designed game! My only critique is that the tutorial is a little hard to understand. I think you could get better results by writing the tutorial in your native language and translating it to English.

The idea of this game was pretty interesting and it was overall quite fun. Here's some ways it could be improved:

1. Visuals: The player character is pixel art, but the rest of the game is not. This looks visually inconsistent, so when you use assets from the internet, make sure that they stylistically fit with each other.

2. It was initially unclear to me that double pressing q and e would flip gravity 180 degrees, so I got stuck on a level for a while. It would be nice if the tutorial explained that.

3. The random holes in the ground that would open up and kill you are annoying and feel unfair. If the intention is not to infuriate the player, then the holes should at least be marked so that you can expect them.

The movement is so janky that it somehow loops back around becomes fun. Figuring out how it works was like a little puzzle

If you're curious about raising cookie prices, I actually created a formula in the game so that the number of cookies sold is lower if the price is higher

I played your game and left some feedback! I would appreciate if you could try out mine as well: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also please read the short description before playing the game)

Overall a really good game and fits the theme perfectly!

What I liked:

-Great visuals, audio and atmosphere. The game feels really polished and I encountered no bugs.

-I appreciate that you added an option for lower end PCs, because my computer can't handle unreal games very well

-Interesting and addicting loop despite being very simple

What could make it better:

-The reverse movement feels more like a minor annoying inconvenience than an actual punishment so I think it should be removed or replaced with something else

-I feel like it would be nice if there were more types of cookies/powerups to make the game even more chaotic

I just rated your game! I would love if you had the time to check out mine as well: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also please read the very short description before playing)

What a cute game with a great artstyle! Broke everything in the house but at least I got my tasty bones lol

Your game was super fun! I would appreciate if you had time to try my game too: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also please read the very short description of my game before playing)

Super polished and juicy game! I love how powerful the gun feels.

Just rated your game! I would love if you could try out mine as well:  https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also, please read the description of my game first before you play it)

Nice idea! Could use a little more polish, but I'm sure this game has a lot of potential

Very polished and unique game! I love how it gets really crazy really fast. I struggled with the shooting tail mechanic a little at first so I think it should be a bit more lenient

I would love if you could check my game out! https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

(Also please read the description of my game before playing)

The part at the end where you could destroy everything was super satisfying! I managed to navigate my way around the maze pretty easily using some reference points, but it would be nice if the game showed where you are on the map

I would really love if you could check my game out, I will rate yours right away! https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

I'm 3rd place on the leader board! (for now). For a rage game, this isn't too frustrating, but the one thing that kind of a annoyed me is the very shaky and janky camera.

Really polished visuals and interesting gameplay! It would be nice if there was an in game tutorial, the explanation in the description helped me understand how it worked, but it took me a few minutes to get the hang of it

I hope you can check out my game as well! I will rate yours as soon as I can

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

The visuals were really nice and the sound effects created a really spooky atmosphere.

I just wish there were options to lower the graphics settings because the game ran really slowly on my medium-end pc.

Your game is probably the one I found the most addicting in this jam. Congrats!

Amazing game! I was sadly unable to reach level 50, but I might play this more later, it's really addicting!

The only small issue I had with this game is that one time I was using the shotgun and reloading wouldn't refill my ammo, so I was no longer able to fire. I think this is a bug, but thankfully I wasn't too far in.

Pretty adorable game! There were some minor physics bugs like temporarily getting stuck on walls, but overall it was short and sweet.

I happen to have already rated your game, but here's some feedback on how you can make it better.

What I liked:

-The story was interesting and the ending was quite mysterious and open to interpretation

-Risking making another call for a better score is pretty good design

What could be improved:

-At first I didn't really understand what the numbers in the ui meant and was pretty confused on why I was losing. It didn't take me long to figure it out but some more clarification would help

-The game sometimes felt a little too dependent on luck. Maybe could be fixed with some subtle behind the scenes number manipulation to make the player feel luckier than they actually are

-It could use some more sound effects and polish to make the game juicier. You could take some inspiration from the game Balatro, which has excellent game feel.

Overall a great game. Despite taking me several attempts to beat, once I got the hang of it it was quite a fun challenge!

Oh, you're right I apologize! I just forgot about that line in the tutorial

Rated your game! Hope you have time to check out mine as well: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

Very cute visuals and I love the exponential growth. Aside from some minor bugs (like for me for some reason sugar always showed up at 0.0), this game is excellent!

Pretty fun game! I enjoyed being able to fly around the castle.

The only thing I would change about this game is I would make the enemies a little bit stronger, because the huge number of enemies causes lag and also makes the game feel more like a test of how fast you can click.

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839 Rated your game!

I would really appreciate a rate a comment

Loved the voice acting :) I wish there more questions but the game was fun regardless

Awesome game! The dialogue was pretty funny and I enjoyed the fast paced gameplay.

I would love if you checked my game out! I will try yours right away.

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

A pretty impressive game! I really liked the fact that there was some variety in the enemies. Could use some more polish on the ui and sound effect, but still a great game nonetheless.

Quite enjoyable despite its short length

I would love if you checked my game out: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839

It's a game where you run a biscuit company and can invest in the stock market.

I will check and rate yours out right away!

Feels simple and fun and well balanced. The only way I think it could be improved is with more sound effects for better game juice

Pretty fun and satisfying! My only criticism is that it gets a little hard to find boxes after you've collected most of the ingredients.

I would really appreciate if you could try my game and leave a comment!

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-14/rate/3851839