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These are the best types of comments! I relate so hard to this comment right here

This VN makes such good use of the visual novel medium

The whole metaphor with sound was really nice

I've been wanting to play this game again for so long and I've just now found it (last time I played was 5 years ago)

HECK YEAH!!!

poor pluto

Still stand by this btw

I need cooking tips with Pastille and Timber!!!

That potato thing... Why was that so easy to understand through text??? And hOW COME IT'S SO GOOD???

All my goddamn potatoes have increased quality now, insane

C-Could you make a pix? (it's fine if not)

I tried buying coffee on kofi but it didn't go through...

Everybody gets enchanted, charmed by the absolute siren of a trailer that was. I too, have fallen victim to it. It's just way too good

I-I think... M-Maybe there's something weird in my computer but now I could only choose Luz's route. Well, that's the one I wanted anyways so all good!

Oh nyo! You've fixed the typos... I had a huge file with typos. Eh, who cares

Hoy-hoy, boa noite! C-could you gimme a lil hint... I somehow can't get Luz's route. Are there some really specific conditions I must meet? (The fact the DockDock joke changes depending on whether Syun knows about it already is insane! I had but a slimmer of hope it would change, and it actually did. Wow) Anything else like that? I would not believe that in a demo such a thing would work. The attention to detail is insane

Also, Kie's small image on the cellphone isn't a file in the demo apparently. Maybe it's karou or something?

I really loved the game! The characters feel real, they have a lot of depth. Another great addition to the series (O-O, lake appeared!)

Rikka is so awesome, I wish I could be cheerful like her!

Syun is very handsome... His smile is so heartwarming 

Komi reminds me tulpamancy is apparently a thing? I'd like to see Luz's thoughts on that. Voice of Komi: Angel Haven Rey. Really... Did you choose the VA cuz of the name, Meiri, be honest

Lion is actually so cool!? I love him saying "I can see just fine without glasses" cuz it's the same cope I say (in reality, we are both batshit blind)

Kie is literally painted like a brazilian flag what the hell. His and Syuns freaks match!

Luz is... Thank you for the decision to voice act her saying "princess". (hope the VA is not reading this...)

The details of the VN are really good. The changing fonts, changing dialogue boxes... Those details all are so good!

Jumbled mess of incoherence:

Rikka's smile is so cute!!! She has a seal face! She's uwuing in real life!!1! (Is she fifty though?)

Rikka made me remember "I was a teenage exocolonist" and when I checked... It's cuz the protag of that one has blue hair with a yellow strand... Damn, my brain be going places.

I find it funny how the whole path of Syun traveling is shown when he goes out. Also, the transitions are really nice

I relate to @ponfusedtranslator, except I am @happytranslator (Fun fact, one day I sent an email to sadtranslator, angrytranslator, all the ones whose gmail actually existed. I haven't heard back just yet!)

I love the social media so much... Miki Mochipeeve... Meredith Gay...

Lion's whole route is... 

One time I went to see the extra dialogue Luz had in the savefiles and she said "You're back again. Addicted to me?" and like damn, I got called out

Damn, the warm light at the afternoon of feb 26th. That was just so wow. Also, the goddamn song... Same as in terasene, her light. Ah, remembering was really nice

I danced the macarena while looking at the mirror and whispering komi just for funzies, you know, and then... "-mi komi"(read in portuguese)... Fell right in that trap, I did

This looks really funny:

Syun is actually... pretty hot, appearance-wise

The CG of the club's anniversary here in this page scares me? It should reassure me, but I don't believe you, not one bit (Low trust meter)

is the book-giving girl a reference to anything?

Typos (my love language is pointing out typos. No, but yeah this is me showing appreciation, sorry if it's weird):

(Btw, maybe you fixed some of these or maybe I'm wrong about some of these. Sorry if anything! It hardly matters since it's still the demo)

The whole thing with Kie's small picture can be seen if you go to any of his phone messages and check history right afterwards!

The thought shows "shouldn't be here", yet the history says "Shuldn't be here"??? (right after "(Maybe the contest is a bust. No one signed up?)

"She always knnows what I'm thinking" two "n"s

"If it's the heath death of the universe" heat

"Luz is the everyone listens to..." the one

"Lion made those! He could make animal any Rikka asked for." any animal

"The dramatic scenarios she painting were far from reality" she was painting

"Her questions did make me a think, though" me think

"and moments where I thought I was about to relive the plast." past

"just delete it at all already" it all

"The members of the have been understanding," the group

"I heave a feeling I knew what Lion means." have

"I went from living in my room with little to not human contact to going out" little to no

"Why is that my own voice sounds so far away?" is it

When Syun is thinking "... a Kamige. And he's a creative writing student. So...!" Didn't you mean a nukige? Or did you want to spare the ignorant one from searching on google and finding weird stuff

Makes sense Rikka is hearing a humming:

(Creepy Komi also happens with Luz)

Right after "You take your dates to bridges?/" Rikka's sprite jumps or something. (in the trust convo)

"Her questions did make me a think, though"

Luz's route (gotta love her Minas Gerais notebook):

(Komi wha-)
"I understand how your guilt must be weighting on you" not weighing?
"needs warning, ho cancels last minute, and makes everything just a little more complicated" ho? who?
"I know exactly that people think of me" Factually correct. Did you mean "what" instead of "that"?
"giving away nothing our the previous interaction"
"An one bedroom, one bathroom apartment" Apparently, it's "A one" cuz of phonemes??? I got so conflicted with this one

Lion's route:

"As Lion glanced at the phone, reality intruded, and a gasp escaped him lips"

"I want to tell his where, but a bone-chilling"

"I told his about the stories and projects I began" Why are these pronouns switched?

Okay guys, hear me out on this one... what if, yes, I know, just, just listen...

What if aran is trans? LOOK I'M SORRY OKAY, I read things very literally. When it says "egg" what else do you want me to think? And what is the term for when someone is trans, just doesn't know it yet? They're called an egg. Furthermore, the thing grows and grows and he doesn't want to acknowledge it?? Come on (Also, in spanish, huevos can mean balls)

*cough cough* Anyhow, thank you Liara. Los dibujos se ven muy nice, Eroraen, enhorabuena!

He encontrado algunas typos:

"nostlágico"

"lágica" en hogar de "mágica"

LOS PARPADOS DE ESE JUEGAZO SON MUY BUENOS!!!11! No basta con que los personajes parpadeen (lo que para mi ya es encantador). Los CGs de Eroraen parpadean. Yo ni siquiera sabia que eso era posible. Yo habia lo olvidado. Y en Ivy parece que aumentaron los frames de solo 3 para más o algo así que se veen buenissimo!

Ivy... Es el único juego donde la silueta de Rebeca en el logotipo no se haz visible... En Serena, ella hasta estaba como moldura!

Hmm, hmm, la idea de um ECHELON que intercepta todo en internet si que da miedo. Uff, añadindo las IAs en la ecuacíon... Los sci-fy distópicos del pasado cada vez más hablan de la realidad. Que és realidad y que és ficcion?

Three years ago, I played all of Eroraen's games. Now I binge them again once more. Pero ahora, yo sé español

THERE IS SOMETHING YOU MISSED IF YOU DON'T SPEAK SPANISH. You know how fairies often speak in rhymes? Well, in the spanish version of Void of Desire, Lilieth literally does that. Whenever you summon her, she has a little limerick and all. She really be spitting bars. English is just such a hard language to make rhymes in.

Anyhow, creo que ese sigue siendo mi juego favorito de Eroraen. Me gusta Lilieth muchíssimo, y las charlas son tan naturales. Todas las referencias a los otros juegos! Ahh, que bendicion.

"Cariño" es tan mejor que darling o honey. Mejor palabra del español! Gracias, Eroraen!

Alguien más ha notado que ella tiene 6 dedos en su pié en la escena del trono?

Hah! TAKE THAT YOU FOOL! I AM NOW ABLE TO READ THEM ALL IN ESPAÑOL MUAHAHAHA, O MEJOR AÚN JAJAJAJ

October 31st is the 10-year anniversary, huh? Right when the early access for Syrup 2 is out, I see you, I see you

I've replayed it and the whole demo. It's real nice to see all the characters again...

I have a custom poster in real life with a bunch of stuff I love and on the very top corner I have Pastille and Periwinkle flying in a broom, Ahhh

"I do hope you've finished the rest of the game and didn't get sidetracked on the puzzles!" Hahah, yeah. I finished the story...

Damnit, it knows

Hey you, don't forget to rate the VN if ya liked it!

Yeehaw! That was so good! I laughed a lot, thank you Neim!

As always, *chef's kiss* gotta love the writing

[SPOILERS INCOMING, SPOILERS OF ALL FLAVORS AND SHAPES- I mean shapes and sizes]

As is customary, here lie the ramblings of a huge fan:

README.MD is something, alright Hahahah, I haven't opened it and I am cracking up

NEIM LOOKS SO MUCH MORE BEAUTIFUL!!! My gurl got a glow-up yes! Slay!

You cannot just enter somebody's house by the window and say good evening, dude, what the sigma

I love Rico (he literally just picked chalk, but I love him already)

I wanna punch the pink-haired man (its the first frame he appeared in)

(Ohhhhh, wait, ohh, now I remember why I hate this guy. Yeah, okay. I remember that I discovered dev writings on script.py purely because I wanted to alter the story cuz of him. It's that guy)

Holy, the complex stuff really got an update, huh? I remember when the hardest thing was parsec and now we're talking quaternions, ay?

Ahahah, of course Rico is still a milkdrinker

"doesn't technically doesn't have a rule" yeah, buddy sure

Ms. Markdawn? Wasn't it markdown? nah, I must have marked down the wrong name

"let me a new" missed an "introduce" there

Memey music is pretty good!

"Palymr" instead of "Palmyr"

They can both do XD face, ya love to see it

Rico still has a hammer. I love it so hard.

Oh yeah, the dates say "Common". does that mean this will have routes? I don't remember...

Ah, the infinite building a dormitory project that is never built is one I've fallen victim to

Hmm. Diaries to record memory in case of forgetfullness. I've read about a guy with amnesia (Anterograde, can't form new memories) whom the doctor forced to write, but he just got baffled afterwards cuz he didn't remember writing it

"Will I still remember what the original tastes like?" And that, my dear Neim, is why I have TPPM saved in my google drive.

T-they're in the t-third day of high school having integrals? I-I'm scared

I don't remember lynne being this chunni...

I'm so bad at topology, ties are a nightmare. (my shoes are constantly untied, at this point I've accepted my curse and instead hide the laces) I love that the sprites actually match the tie situation

Wind ensemble? Google says "A wind ensemble is that there isn't the same kind of broad cultural knowledge about what a wind ensemble actually is." *checks website* "One the challenges we have as a wind ensemble is that there isn't" ohhh

Heck yeah, Rico, get off the chess club! Chess clubs always suck anyways *mumble mumble*

How come Neim doesn't know she's supposed to say "Nani!?1?" and spontaneously combust? ... Toilet plunger? I can feel... Huh, no skibidi mention? I guess that's... Yeah, wow, feels good.

This whole politics situation is... pretty weird. Out here either politicians say nothing and continue destroying the amazon rainforest or they say they'll preserve it and continue destroying it

NO NEIM DO NOT GO TO MHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Oh yeah, I made a poster a while back, printed it out and all that, and right at the left bottom corner is Neim smiling, just in front of Lilly Satou. A jumbled mess that poster is. I love it

Did I ever mention "meia" means sock in portuguese?

No day transition this time?

The existence of logistics option and also the thing before about our interest implies... Will Neim have her own route? That'd be nice!

Lynette mentions hammers and rico doesnt even bat an eye? That's suspicious...

Geez, they're so needy this time around. Can't even sit with the driver

WAIT SHE'S ACTUALLY GOING AHAHAHHAHAHHAHA

"It feels like looking through an Ultra HD 4K lens..." Girl, that's... That's just real life (except for us, wearer of glasses)

"I just wish we could gather together and have a beer sometime." Mr. Asthrey crossover with Re:Curse when!?!?!? I keep forgetting she doesn't know the big reveal yet, so I'm just waiting for the bomb to drop on her...

Oh we got into rico's route. So our choices actually mattered? I-I thought this was a demo and choices would be cut off...

EWWW IF WE DONT CHOOSE NOBODY WE GO TO NIX'S ROUTE???????? Nevermind, he just also chose logistics

Can't believe I searched up "vitis maculosa serpens" thinking "omg I'm about to be gaslighted by a virtual character Rico, nonetheless!" and proceeded to be gaslighted by Rico anyways

Man, the plants they have here are way too wild, I wanna go to this forest. I love observing nature

This remembered me about the "gray letter". Man, that was so cool.

Lynnette, I need that picture of the OTP for research purposes, please!

Oh, I genuinely thought I'd go to Lynnete's route. Completely forgot about Seth

Hi Zetsubou

I played this game under Anwynn's recommendation and I became obsessed. I am obsessed. I will make a discord server when SG2 hits the stores. No, you cannot stop me.

Sable is now a part of my consciousness. I have a slot in my brain dedicated to musing on Sable and Fafnir, cuz the Sables are the best characters.

SABLE ROUTE BABYYYYYYY

Sable, role model

The one and only kinnie

I love him so much

YES

Oh! My favorite milkdrinker is still looking as short as ever.

"Do you still remember Phoenix?" I don't remember him being that handsome woah!

Very much looking forward! Punniest mess is one of favorite games ever!

After 4 years I wanted to replay this. Huh, so the creators of hug that gator. Amazing.

What do you mean? Birds are real?

Steam release? Damn, yall go far! So many more fans to talk to...

For some reason the link gets redirected to part 1?

"next few months or so"

24 is a few, I guess lmao. Damn good prediction skills hahahah. AAhhhh its finally here!!! YEEHAW!

Parrying god! Also, no matter how bleak it seems, you have a choice! The ending❤️❤️❤️

Wenke club when?

Je t'aime le humour des médecins bwahah

Muito bom esse pessoal br aí

Es extraño ver un vampiro débil, pero despues de rev pescar, el me gusta mucho ahre

Aku mencitai necromancers

Tá, depois de shakar todas as languages aí, tenho que decir: Adorei, muito bom. The endings are literally heaven. "Mortinho da silva" HAHAHAHhaha. No meio dum textão de inglês essa benção. "Não, pow, uber vai escutar pow. Tá ligado quando eu trabalhava no IML" KKKKKKKK bom d+

I love how wenke has 3 fingers, Rev has 4 and Sua has 5.

Why did they go so hard with the recipes in one route? I mean, I like it, thanks for the recipes

B

NOOOOOOOOOOO

If you get a draw, you get a glimpse into the world you'll reincarnate into. For 1079 it is pretty sweet

Hahahah, that would've been useful yeah ( tho tbf I probs wouldnt have used it anyways, "Its a short game" I'd reason to myself)

I was playing LunarLux (super good btw) and theres a bunch of references to code bunny (posters and whatnots) so I thought it was a sign to finally buy it. What delight to come here and see its finally on steam! Yeehaw :D And then to see the dev's profile and brazil mentioned

Me gusta mucho la voz del michi

Absolute cinema, as in, literally just cinema. Why would you possibly make a VN in rpgmaker?????? What?² (I gotta respect that!)

The art is nice, very nice, story feels uh... It's def a story alright. I accidentally pressed F12 and screwed myself over halfway through, dang it.

I think I saw 2-3 typos. "adolescants". But whatever

Also, je ne pas parlar français, pourquoi vouz gotta rub salt on my wound, man? Ah, yeah, the red roses substitute leader speaking like a true bro from da hood was a nice aspect, even if it only happened once. I like the characters and their personalities, but the story just feels like a jumbled mess. There's no context and stuff just blows up and happens.

My fav is the mounsieur cuz I am a masochist. Damn it I gotta learn french

Treat, you say. I see you, I see what you mean

Still stand by this btw

Oh man, the art is so pretty!

I enjoyed the writing, the boom booms were lovely. I like the new priestess and the giant guy heh. I hope they become a cool friend trio.

"but none of this symptoms did go away" Shouldn't it be "these"?

"Blunted from grief and helpnesses..." Shouldn't it be helplessness?

"Or maybe it won't, at it will drag him into the underworld." Shouldn't it be "and" or "as" instead of "at"

Spacebar button be life. Also, love the title

still waiting for the remake tbh

Damn you, Else. Why you gotta make me feel, man? Ahh, ahh, konayachi + else = bliss. It's funny cuz Alli was being all sad in the start and I was like "Man, Konayachi plus Else is pure bliss." GOD I LOVE YOUR WRITING AAAAAA (The fluffing "ah yes, I can feel the doppler effect on the vehicles" bahahhahahah) The characters and their interactions... The slap comedy... The friends totally immersed in themselves forgetting about the world outside... I recently had a moment like that, but instead of running in the rain it was running in a street, man, so damn good.

Ah, add a gallery!!! I really wanted the title screen without the buttons... It makes for a great wallpaper!

My favs are Kael and Alli. I thought we'd get a cute scene with each participant, but there wasnt one for revka, was there? Xander reminds me a lot of someone I know heh. "Yap" hahah

The foreshadowing to the hills scares me... I appreciated the music, btw

Typos:

"As the three began to pack up and leave" not really a typo, but like, which 3?? There are 4 people, why just 3???? WHO DIDNT PACK UP???

"there's a man who was listening intently." Shouldn't it be "there was"?

"I'm stuck in this cycle of constantly" Shouldn't it be "I was"? This also happens in that one letter "I feel like I'm stuck in a limbo,"... coincidence, I think not.

"It's too much pressure to draw things the way it is." Shouldn't it be "the way they are"?

"There's no way she'll" Shouldn't it be "she would"?

"and somehow forgot there are other people"  Shouldn't it be "forget"?

"busyness"  Shouldn't it be "Business"?

"What would Nate say if he's here?"  Shouldn't it be "if he was here?"?

"If we do, then we'll be considered gods."  Shouldn't it be "If we did, then we'd be considered gods."?

"He looked at me with those eyes-" Shouldn't it be "- his eyes" or removing "- eyes were"?

"I hope that we could be a home to you, Allison."  Shouldn't it be "can be a home"?

"(When was the last time I feel so safe"  Shouldn't it be "felt"?

"I thought there's finally another girl"  Shouldn't it be "There'd finally be"?

"I haven't receive any"  Shouldn't it be "received"?

"if many people are after his"  Shouldn't it be "were"?

"doesn't like talking about his personal life."  Shouldn't it be "didn't like to talk about"?

"The action I wished I've done,"  Shouldn't it be "I wished I'd done"?

"feeley-feeley"  Shouldn't it be "feely-feely"?

"And since my dreams have been"  Shouldn't it be "had been"?

"Is that what Xander's like back then?"  Shouldn't it be "Xander was like"?

"I guess doing something you love"  Shouldn't it be "does make a difference" or "something I love"?

"make sure you walk home with someone of blend in crowded places" lol what

"Words that I longed to hear, but I just didn't expect them to say it so suddenly."  Shouldn't the "it" be removed?

MY PROBLEMS ARE NOT GONNA GET THE BETTER OF MEEEEE!!! HECK YEAH!

Terima kasih banyak! (Tryna learn indo lol)