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Ahh, I really loved this. I love Kin. She's a friendo. Saying things in other languages half to mess with people half cuz they feel like better words, ahh. 

I love the background of this page, their different expressions are cute heheh.

The whole sprite system gave so much more control and expression to each character. (and my storage space with fav games thanks it!)

The manga sections are so fun! My favorite character was KiRA☆RiN, I just oh so love when two freaks match! Reminded me of many, many happy times where I found someone as weird/different as me. Chuuni is life (I love Kin's Okabe Rintarou pose ahahah). (There's so much beneath the surface in this game, ya can feel the love)(As baby hands, then no hands, then prosthetics.)(They are such cute babies) (why are the "I"s lowercase though??? huh...)(Why does she not have a birthday art??? Just cuz it's april fools shaking smh my head)

In a way, Kin's friends are literally: High Trust, low reality (Kira) and Low Trust, high reality (Nikki) hahah

The extras are all so cool.

I love the one with the desk (which I assume is about Ueda Aoi's psyche given the whole loving Kyouko, saying darling, the fact that in one cg he's literally writing the start of that rant and offering everything vibes), and "yeah, I do still think about you, even if it hurt to love you" is relatable.

The writing is just so good. I love the leitmotifs getting different. "his figure" instead of "my". "a mirror full of cracks" instead of the perfect one with no fingerprints.

The bonus room is so well made!!! Loved it!!!

Whatever happened to the french translation? I saw it in the credits and figured I should try and see how he handled her being half french and Kira's they, but it's not there? ^{I just learned control+h does this wha}

I loved this game a whole lot!

Daisy, Daisy

Gimme your answer, do

I'm half crazy

all for the love of you

It won't be a stylish marriage

I can't afford a carriage

But you'll look sweet

Upon the seat of a

Bicycle built for two

This is so damn good. I love the secret special VA!!!

You know, this reminds me a lot of a tumblr post I saw. About how all of life came from the sea, but we never really evolved past it. We just learned to hold the sea inside us. All of our bones are wet, our skin is irrigated. No matter how much we try, the sea has left a permanent mark on our biology.

This is actually fire though???

I don't really understand why, but this... It attracts me. Like it itself is a dark presence... This definitely has unflame

Wow Holy [REDACTED] what in the actual [heck] wow, wow WOAAAHH but whyy my poor olga............. AAAAAAAAAAAAA holy [mackerel] This is [baloney]

Well, now that I got that off my nerve, bear with me:

   The year is 2003. A chatlog remains in two computer screens, connecting a witch and a... For now, an acquaintance:

   Natalwa03: Heeey, Olya... Are you gay~?

   JustOlga: Yes, it is quite a jolly year to be gay.

   I have made several of these jokes. I love how language gets warped through time. This is a treasure trove of joke prompts.

I love that Olga never calls that shitpiece Sasha afterwards.

her immortality depends on like, feeling of wholeness. a finger heals pretty quick cuz everyone notices the unwholeness. So, her being NUMBED when the worse Val did her thingy just makes so much sense.

All troughout I keep looking at the main title screen tryna think wherre the heck it owudl appear. Never did, it was worse. Holy.

This is literally just 

I think I found some typos! Nothing too egregious, but I do write a lot in my nonsense list

TYPOS

"you have your sister covered for you and ran."      #cover, no?

Does sleeping well last night makes you suddenly all-knowing, Brat?     #make you, no?

I cook this time.     cooked, no?

Just walk with us when we get to it don't listen to anything that calls your name     # after it, shouldn't there be a comma?

as soon as he's about the hand the bag of gold,     #TO HAND, NAY?

...Speaking of parents., what's your parents like, Mika?     weird comma, also what are your parents, NAY?

I crouch in the much and finds fresh claw tracks.     Find, no?

The kid summons a tomb outta nowhere         Tome, no?

I keep hearing you shout through the walls. They aren't exactly... thin.    # Don't you mean thick?

trying to pretend that I didn't just pissed myself silly      #Piss myself, no?

He's really good his part members didn't realize he tried to poison them with it.         There's... something missing there, I'm sure

as Gerald is concious again.         conscious, no?

Late Xaretros Emperess.       Empress, no?

Oh, his eyes flicks one at me. What, he trying to gouge a reaction? Because this girl has seen worse.         gauge, no?

Damn, he remember all that?         #Nvmd, this makes sense. She going crazy I don't expect her to think right

SANCITFY    # SHE going crazy, so it's fair game

BARIER         #tomato tomato

run off back when you summon your tentacle monster.         summoned, no?

things, that oughtta counts for something right?          count, no? comma before right, right?

Did she just winked at me?         Yes. It's wink tho

"dissapears" when they get paid. 

cumstain isn't a profanity... huh

sometimes it says Gohlydiggar instead of Gohldyggar

So cool! I loved the UI with the flavor text!

I love the "abs-olute saint" joke and the "Absassin" one too.

I imagined Severin with a bri'ish accent speaking like a lord, Mika like a high-pitched streamer girl and Gerard is too obvious. Gerard is sooo hot.
I love the dialogue, it's so well-written. It's real funny.

The last game I played of you was Imsonia's Window (What do you mean that was 3 years ago???)

This was so cute!!! I love the extra flavor text luma has if you're wearing the green outfit. I LOVE THAT YOU CAN CHANGE OUTFITS WHAT IS THIS

These graphics are so different from standard rpgmaker! It was so surprising.

Hint for the 1 game over I got: "Do not eat candy, you will get a tummyache" -Heru-Isim

TYPOS:

Picturebook fairytale about Umiyuki

"Did I startled you?" #startle

Book series first edition earth

"This book doesn't have picture" #pictures

Velo bonus room

"I hope enjoyed my story" #missing "you"

Oh, btw, here's some typos I found:

This is my also my office. #2 'my's

Eventually landing on a page that contained a small part of story for kids.

of a story, no?

I couldnt help but notice her sharp fangs getting closer and closer.

couldn't, no?

At one point I called some of them potions, but she corrected me and told me they were chemicals

Missing a period at the end

I didn't know where to go, so I just ran in every direciton, until I found the main door

direction, no?

{cps=30}You could introduce me to them..{/cps}{cps=4} {/cps}{cps=30}If you want.{/cps} ##only two dots

I cannot forgive myself for making such mistake.

such a mistake, no?

I've just finished the TL and updated the files.

I believe everything should work just fine. Replace them, new build distribution yadda yadda. yeehaw

Whenever ya release it I'll delete this page.

¡Muy bueno trabajar con usted!¡

It's the fourth time we meet in these circustances, huh? (translating the same game)

 Ain't that neat

I dunno if you get a notif whenever someone comments, so just in case!

Okay, so for the names: "The Girl", "Father", "Angry Mob", "Guard", "Both" and "All"

I'm gonna need you to add a _() on them, so:
define g = Character ("The Girl", color="#ffffff")

becomes

define g = Character (_("The Girl"), color="#ffffff")

define t = Character (_("Father"), color="#cab97f")

define m = Character(_("Angry mob"), color="#cab97f")

define x = Character("???", color="#b75caf")

define y = Character (_("Guard"), color="#b75caf")

define b = Character (_("Both"), color="#b75caf")

define z = Character (_("All"), color="#b75caf")

That should be it, sorry for not noticing sooner (ó﹏ò｡)

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I've made an itch.io page (you can check it in my profile) for us to communicate and share files (I'll delete it when all is good and done)! The link is for you to become an owner of the page, so that you can send the files.

(also, if you'd rather, I could make a social media page in blue sky or tumblr, I just dunno if any of those can share files)

This is so absolute cinema!

My favs are Farjo (I love archivists and the tism (look, after the barbie doll, headphones just have that effect on me)) and obviously Adorinda cuz she's such a girlboss

I love how each character uses different language. Fajro becomes more talkative after his CG. Vesperta speaks fancy before the break in character. 

Vesperta "And since you've been staring this entire time at my mouth, I'm gonna assume you're thinking one of two things." And then she proceeds to never mention the second thing. I do have a feeling, tho

The calalipulapis... They are SO a reference to club penguin. I don't even care if they are not, but the blue ones like balls, really? THE SAME AS CLUB PENGUIN PUFFLES (and no, I realized this before seeing the blue puffle that commented here)

You really wanted this to be a musical, huh? Stronger Than You would play in the hallway (I'm not sorry)

Typo Time!

"must of my fun come from creating" most comes, no?

"renpy.jump ("mad"+str(renpy.random.randint(1,4)))" Yet there's only two possible variants. I tried a few times and it seems this can lead to an exception! 2/4 chance of just error message. But I didn't get it when I played, so oh well

Btw, did you use any psychological framework when making this? It's like, so good. The possible fears are so real, it-  I'm sorry I don't know many synonyms of good.

I've invited my friend over so he can play this fufufu~ Excited to find out his biggest fear!

Did not realize match 3 could be this fun!

(Gigi's level is the hardest one aaa pain-peko)

No because the bag with the book literally says "67" though????

(Also: Everyone in this is so stylish!! I'm stealing the girl on the left's looks!)

Are you sure you fixed it?

But yeah, at least one person did solve it!

#If you go to the reviews, I go cuckoo there

And of course the one on display is the understudy!

This VN is so damn good, like holy!

It deals with so many topics, and gives a good hard stare at them (Though I do feel the grief talk was set aside rather quickly, but such is way Ama would deal with it, can't stop to grief with all the stress she puts herself through.) . Amaranth's self-sacrifice as an unnecessary trait, that tends to lead to bad outcomes. I myself struggle with that, holding such high standards that you just have to do everything yourself, however tiring. Your identity being formed from that struggle: "I just can't let go of the responsibilities that define me, that give me a sense of identity beyond these roles."

There is no perfect formula to raise babies, because there are so many paths for them to take. Babies are not defined by their parents like princess maker games often treat it. Kids grow and their environment, familiar and not, is what shapes them.

Take the first and second endings: Both outstandingly different approaches to parenting and yet in both Sheela is an amazing little bundle of joy. It also deals with their inherent traits, Sheela's talent for magic which is only not honed in the third ending, due to being essentially an orphan (come on, Wernicke sucks. Bro's named after a brain region). There are so many ways parents can screw up, that don't end up meaning game over. Above all, life goes on.

I hope Ralph, the little rapscallion, is doing well.

I love Amaranth's comparisons all the way. "They raided a charity shop for weapons", "bottomless goblet". Her fantasy idioms are so real and so very funny to me, amusing. The comedy in this is magnificent, the bit about Goddess and how Raoult doesn't say it with an uppercase G, how the elf-beastmen war ended, "HELL YEAH. I STILL GOT IT", mana as cheese ahahahha. The writing is really funny and charismatic to me.

The breakdown at the inn really was impactful, the VAs did wonders to express the emotions felt, and the solution? To get help. To not try and bear everything alone, to reach out.

Just one more thing: The only ending that doesn't fit the Capitalized Conglomeration of Characters (Alphabetical Alliteration Arrangement) is ending 4: From Loss to Love. The break from the mold must represent something, tho I'm uninspired and can't interpret anything rn

Typos and Their Treatment: "We're bad parents who focuses" Shouldn't it be focus?

"In the end the, elves and"

"I've seen him done this before" Shouldn't it be do?

Aww man, happy new year. Yeah, it's true, y'all's games really have gone so far, huh?

It's real nice to think of that evolution, just gotta keep going.

Gottagetthenewitems letsgo

"We'll be releasing Jest Messters' updated demo before the year ends!"

There's a 20% chance of Jest Messters' updated demo releasing tomorrow!

These are the best types of comments! I relate so hard to this comment right here

This VN makes such good use of the visual novel medium

The whole metaphor with sound was really nice

I've been wanting to play this game again for so long and I've just now found it (last time I played was 5 years ago)

HECK YEAH!!!

poor pluto

Still stand by this btw

I need cooking tips with Pastille and Timber!!!

That potato thing... Why was that so easy to understand through text??? And hOW COME IT'S SO GOOD???

All my goddamn potatoes have increased quality now, insane

C-Could you make a pix? (it's fine if not)

I tried buying coffee on kofi but it didn't go through...

Everybody gets enchanted, charmed by the absolute siren of a trailer that was. I too, have fallen victim to it. It's just way too good

I-I think... M-Maybe there's something weird in my computer but now I could only choose Luz's route. Well, that's the one I wanted anyways so all good!

Oh nyo! You've fixed the typos... I had a huge file with typos. Eh, who cares

Hoy-hoy, boa noite! C-could you gimme a lil hint... I somehow can't get Luz's route. Are there some really specific conditions I must meet? (The fact the DockDock joke changes depending on whether Syun knows about it already is insane! I had but a slimmer of hope it would change, and it actually did. Wow) Anything else like that? I would not believe that in a demo such a thing would work. The attention to detail is insane

Also, Kie's small image on the cellphone isn't a file in the demo apparently. Maybe it's karou or something?

I really loved the game! The characters feel real, they have a lot of depth. Another great addition to the series (O-O, lake appeared!)

Rikka is so awesome, I wish I could be cheerful like her!

Syun is very handsome... His smile is so heartwarming 

Komi reminds me tulpamancy is apparently a thing? I'd like to see Luz's thoughts on that. Voice of Komi: Angel Haven Rey. Really... Did you choose the VA cuz of the name, Meiri, be honest

Lion is actually so cool!? I love him saying "I can see just fine without glasses" cuz it's the same cope I say (in reality, we are both batshit blind)

Kie is literally painted like a brazilian flag what the hell. His and Syuns freaks match!

Luz is... Thank you for the decision to voice act her saying "princess". (hope the VA is not reading this...)

The details of the VN are really good. The changing fonts, changing dialogue boxes... Those details all are so good!

Jumbled mess of incoherence:

Rikka's smile is so cute!!! She has a seal face! She's uwuing in real life!!1! (Is she fifty though?)

Rikka made me remember "I was a teenage exocolonist" and when I checked... It's cuz the protag of that one has blue hair with a yellow strand... Damn, my brain be going places.

I find it funny how the whole path of Syun traveling is shown when he goes out. Also, the transitions are really nice

I relate to @ponfusedtranslator, except I am @happytranslator (Fun fact, one day I sent an email to sadtranslator, angrytranslator, all the ones whose gmail actually existed. I haven't heard back just yet!)

I love the social media so much... Miki Mochipeeve... Meredith Gay...

Lion's whole route is... 

One time I went to see the extra dialogue Luz had in the savefiles and she said "You're back again. Addicted to me?" and like damn, I got called out

Damn, the warm light at the afternoon of feb 26th. That was just so wow. Also, the goddamn song... Same as in terasene, her light. Ah, remembering was really nice

I danced the macarena while looking at the mirror and whispering komi just for funzies, you know, and then... "-mi komi"(read in portuguese)... Fell right in that trap, I did

This looks really funny:

Syun is actually... pretty hot, appearance-wise

The CG of the club's anniversary here in this page scares me? It should reassure me, but I don't believe you, not one bit (Low trust meter)

is the book-giving girl a reference to anything?

Typos (my love language is pointing out typos. No, but yeah this is me showing appreciation, sorry if it's weird):

(Btw, maybe you fixed some of these or maybe I'm wrong about some of these. Sorry if anything! It hardly matters since it's still the demo)

The whole thing with Kie's small picture can be seen if you go to any of his phone messages and check history right afterwards!

The thought shows "shouldn't be here", yet the history says "Shuldn't be here"??? (right after "(Maybe the contest is a bust. No one signed up?)

"She always knnows what I'm thinking" two "n"s

"If it's the heath death of the universe" heat

"Luz is the everyone listens to..." the one

"Lion made those! He could make animal any Rikka asked for." any animal

"The dramatic scenarios she painting were far from reality" she was painting

"Her questions did make me a think, though" me think

"and moments where I thought I was about to relive the plast." past

"just delete it at all already" it all

"The members of the have been understanding," the group

"I heave a feeling I knew what Lion means." have

"I went from living in my room with little to not human contact to going out" little to no

"Why is that my own voice sounds so far away?" is it

When Syun is thinking "... a Kamige. And he's a creative writing student. So...!" Didn't you mean a nukige? Or did you want to spare the ignorant one from searching on google and finding weird stuff

Makes sense Rikka is hearing a humming:

(Creepy Komi also happens with Luz)

Right after "You take your dates to bridges?/" Rikka's sprite jumps or something. (in the trust convo)

"Her questions did make me a think, though"

Luz's route (gotta love her Minas Gerais notebook):

(Komi wha-)
"I understand how your guilt must be weighting on you" not weighing?
"needs warning, ho cancels last minute, and makes everything just a little more complicated" ho? who?
"I know exactly that people think of me" Factually correct. Did you mean "what" instead of "that"?
"giving away nothing our the previous interaction"
"An one bedroom, one bathroom apartment" Apparently, it's "A one" cuz of phonemes??? I got so conflicted with this one

Lion's route:

"As Lion glanced at the phone, reality intruded, and a gasp escaped him lips"

"I want to tell his where, but a bone-chilling"

"I told his about the stories and projects I began" Why are these pronouns switched?

Okay guys, hear me out on this one... what if, yes, I know, just, just listen...

What if aran is trans? LOOK I'M SORRY OKAY, I read things very literally. When it says "egg" what else do you want me to think? And what is the term for when someone is trans, just doesn't know it yet? They're called an egg. Furthermore, the thing grows and grows and he doesn't want to acknowledge it?? Come on (Also, in spanish, huevos can mean balls)

*cough cough* Anyhow, thank you Liara. Los dibujos se ven muy nice, Eroraen, enhorabuena!

He encontrado algunas typos:

"nostlágico"

"lágica" en hogar de "mágica"

LOS PARPADOS DE ESE JUEGAZO SON MUY BUENOS!!!11! No basta con que los personajes parpadeen (lo que para mi ya es encantador). Los CGs de Eroraen parpadean. Yo ni siquiera sabia que eso era posible. Yo habia lo olvidado. Y en Ivy parece que aumentaron los frames de solo 3 para más o algo así que se veen buenissimo!

Ivy... Es el único juego donde la silueta de Rebeca en el logotipo no se haz visible... En Serena, ella hasta estaba como moldura!

Hmm, hmm, la idea de um ECHELON que intercepta todo en internet si que da miedo. Uff, añadindo las IAs en la ecuacíon... Los sci-fy distópicos del pasado cada vez más hablan de la realidad. Que és realidad y que és ficcion?