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Oh, btw, here's some typos I found:

This is my also my office. #2 'my's

Eventually landing on a page that contained a small part of story for kids.

of a story, no?

I couldnt help but notice her sharp fangs getting closer and closer.

couldn't, no?

At one point I called some of them potions, but she corrected me and told me they were chemicals

Missing a period at the end

I didn't know where to go, so I just ran in every direciton, until I found the main door

direction, no?

{cps=30}You could introduce me to them..{/cps}{cps=4} {/cps}{cps=30}If you want.{/cps} ##only two dots

I cannot forgive myself for making such mistake.

such a mistake, no?

I've just finished the TL and updated the files.

I believe everything should work just fine. Replace them, new build distribution yadda yadda. yeehaw

Whenever ya release it I'll delete this page.

¡Muy bueno trabajar con usted!¡

It's the fourth time we meet in these circustances, huh? (translating the same game)

 Ain't that neat

I dunno if you get a notif whenever someone comments, so just in case!

Okay, so for the names: "The Girl", "Father", "Angry Mob", "Guard", "Both" and "All"

I'm gonna need you to add a _() on them, so:
define g = Character ("The Girl", color="#ffffff")

becomes

define g = Character (_("The Girl"), color="#ffffff")

define t = Character (_("Father"), color="#cab97f")

define m = Character(_("Angry mob"), color="#cab97f")

define x = Character("???", color="#b75caf")

define y = Character (_("Guard"), color="#b75caf")

define b = Character (_("Both"), color="#b75caf")

define z = Character (_("All"), color="#b75caf")

That should be it, sorry for not noticing sooner (ó﹏ò｡)

https://itch.io/game/accept-admin/4204336/12815682

I've made an itch.io page (you can check it in my profile) for us to communicate and share files (I'll delete it when all is good and done)! The link is for you to become an owner of the page, so that you can send the files.

(also, if you'd rather, I could make a social media page in blue sky or tumblr, I just dunno if any of those can share files)

This is so absolute cinema!

My favs are Farjo (I love archivists and the tism (look, after the barbie doll, headphones just have that effect on me)) and obviously Adorinda cuz she's such a girlboss

I love how each character uses different language. Fajro becomes more talkative after his CG. Vesperta speaks fancy before the break in character. 

Vesperta "And since you've been staring this entire time at my mouth, I'm gonna assume you're thinking one of two things." And then she proceeds to never mention the second thing. I do have a feeling, tho

The calalipulapis... They are SO a reference to club penguin. I don't even care if they are not, but the blue ones like balls, really? THE SAME AS CLUB PENGUIN PUFFLES (and no, I realized this before seeing the blue puffle that commented here)

You really wanted this to be a musical, huh? Stronger Than You would play in the hallway (I'm not sorry)

Typo Time!

"must of my fun come from creating" most comes, no?

"renpy.jump ("mad"+str(renpy.random.randint(1,4)))" Yet there's only two possible variants. I tried a few times and it seems this can lead to an exception! 2/4 chance of just error message. But I didn't get it when I played, so oh well

Btw, did you use any psychological framework when making this? It's like, so good. The possible fears are so real, it-  I'm sorry I don't know many synonyms of good.

I've invited my friend over so he can play this fufufu~ Excited to find out his biggest fear!

Did not realize match 3 could be this fun!

(Gigi's level is the hardest one aaa pain-peko)

No because the bag with the book literally says "67" though????

(Also: Everyone in this is so stylish!! I'm stealing the girl on the left's looks!)

Are you sure you fixed it?

But yeah, at least one person did solve it!

#If you go to the reviews, I go cuckoo there

And of course the one on display is the understudy!

This VN is so damn good, like holy!

It deals with so many topics, and gives a good hard stare at them (Though I do feel the grief talk was set aside rather quickly, but such is way Ama would deal with it, can't stop to grief with all the stress she puts herself through.) . Amaranth's self-sacrifice as an unnecessary trait, that tends to lead to bad outcomes. I myself struggle with that, holding such high standards that you just have to do everything yourself, however tiring. Your identity being formed from that struggle: "I just can't let go of the responsibilities that define me, that give me a sense of identity beyond these roles."

There is no perfect formula to raise babies, because there are so many paths for them to take. Babies are not defined by their parents like princess maker games often treat it. Kids grow and their environment, familiar and not, is what shapes them.

Take the first and second endings: Both outstandingly different approaches to parenting and yet in both Sheela is an amazing little bundle of joy. It also deals with their inherent traits, Sheela's talent for magic which is only not honed in the third ending, due to being essentially an orphan (come on, Wernicke sucks. Bro's named after a brain region). There are so many ways parents can screw up, that don't end up meaning game over. Above all, life goes on.

I hope Ralph, the little rapscallion, is doing well.

I love Amaranth's comparisons all the way. "They raided a charity shop for weapons", "bottomless goblet". Her fantasy idioms are so real and so very funny to me, amusing. The comedy in this is magnificent, the bit about Goddess and how Raoult doesn't say it with an uppercase G, how the elf-beastmen war ended, "HELL YEAH. I STILL GOT IT", mana as cheese ahahahha. The writing is really funny and charismatic to me.

The breakdown at the inn really was impactful, the VAs did wonders to express the emotions felt, and the solution? To get help. To not try and bear everything alone, to reach out.

Just one more thing: The only ending that doesn't fit the Capitalized Conglomeration of Characters (Alphabetical Alliteration Arrangement) is ending 4: From Loss to Love. The break from the mold must represent something, tho I'm uninspired and can't interpret anything rn

Typos and Their Treatment: "We're bad parents who focuses" Shouldn't it be focus?

"In the end the, elves and"

"I've seen him done this before" Shouldn't it be do?

Aww man, happy new year. Yeah, it's true, y'all's games really have gone so far, huh?

It's real nice to think of that evolution, just gotta keep going.

Gottagetthenewitems letsgo

"We'll be releasing Jest Messters' updated demo before the year ends!"

There's a 20% chance of Jest Messters' updated demo releasing tomorrow!

These are the best types of comments! I relate so hard to this comment right here

This VN makes such good use of the visual novel medium

The whole metaphor with sound was really nice

I've been wanting to play this game again for so long and I've just now found it (last time I played was 5 years ago)

HECK YEAH!!!

poor pluto

Still stand by this btw

I need cooking tips with Pastille and Timber!!!

That potato thing... Why was that so easy to understand through text??? And hOW COME IT'S SO GOOD???

All my goddamn potatoes have increased quality now, insane

C-Could you make a pix? (it's fine if not)

I tried buying coffee on kofi but it didn't go through...

Everybody gets enchanted, charmed by the absolute siren of a trailer that was. I too, have fallen victim to it. It's just way too good

I-I think... M-Maybe there's something weird in my computer but now I could only choose Luz's route. Well, that's the one I wanted anyways so all good!

Oh nyo! You've fixed the typos... I had a huge file with typos. Eh, who cares

Hoy-hoy, boa noite! C-could you gimme a lil hint... I somehow can't get Luz's route. Are there some really specific conditions I must meet? (The fact the DockDock joke changes depending on whether Syun knows about it already is insane! I had but a slimmer of hope it would change, and it actually did. Wow) Anything else like that? I would not believe that in a demo such a thing would work. The attention to detail is insane

Also, Kie's small image on the cellphone isn't a file in the demo apparently. Maybe it's karou or something?

I really loved the game! The characters feel real, they have a lot of depth. Another great addition to the series (O-O, lake appeared!)

Rikka is so awesome, I wish I could be cheerful like her!

Syun is very handsome... His smile is so heartwarming 

Komi reminds me tulpamancy is apparently a thing? I'd like to see Luz's thoughts on that. Voice of Komi: Angel Haven Rey. Really... Did you choose the VA cuz of the name, Meiri, be honest

Lion is actually so cool!? I love him saying "I can see just fine without glasses" cuz it's the same cope I say (in reality, we are both batshit blind)

Kie is literally painted like a brazilian flag what the hell. His and Syuns freaks match!

Luz is... Thank you for the decision to voice act her saying "princess". (hope the VA is not reading this...)

The details of the VN are really good. The changing fonts, changing dialogue boxes... Those details all are so good!

Jumbled mess of incoherence:

Rikka's smile is so cute!!! She has a seal face! She's uwuing in real life!!1! (Is she fifty though?)

Rikka made me remember "I was a teenage exocolonist" and when I checked... It's cuz the protag of that one has blue hair with a yellow strand... Damn, my brain be going places.

I find it funny how the whole path of Syun traveling is shown when he goes out. Also, the transitions are really nice

I relate to @ponfusedtranslator, except I am @happytranslator (Fun fact, one day I sent an email to sadtranslator, angrytranslator, all the ones whose gmail actually existed. I haven't heard back just yet!)

I love the social media so much... Miki Mochipeeve... Meredith Gay...

Lion's whole route is... 

One time I went to see the extra dialogue Luz had in the savefiles and she said "You're back again. Addicted to me?" and like damn, I got called out

Damn, the warm light at the afternoon of feb 26th. That was just so wow. Also, the goddamn song... Same as in terasene, her light. Ah, remembering was really nice

I danced the macarena while looking at the mirror and whispering komi just for funzies, you know, and then... "-mi komi"(read in portuguese)... Fell right in that trap, I did

This looks really funny:

Syun is actually... pretty hot, appearance-wise

The CG of the club's anniversary here in this page scares me? It should reassure me, but I don't believe you, not one bit (Low trust meter)

is the book-giving girl a reference to anything?

Typos (my love language is pointing out typos. No, but yeah this is me showing appreciation, sorry if it's weird):

(Btw, maybe you fixed some of these or maybe I'm wrong about some of these. Sorry if anything! It hardly matters since it's still the demo)

The whole thing with Kie's small picture can be seen if you go to any of his phone messages and check history right afterwards!

The thought shows "shouldn't be here", yet the history says "Shuldn't be here"??? (right after "(Maybe the contest is a bust. No one signed up?)

"She always knnows what I'm thinking" two "n"s

"If it's the heath death of the universe" heat

"Luz is the everyone listens to..." the one

"Lion made those! He could make animal any Rikka asked for." any animal

"The dramatic scenarios she painting were far from reality" she was painting

"Her questions did make me a think, though" me think

"and moments where I thought I was about to relive the plast." past

"just delete it at all already" it all

"The members of the have been understanding," the group

"I heave a feeling I knew what Lion means." have

"I went from living in my room with little to not human contact to going out" little to no

"Why is that my own voice sounds so far away?" is it

When Syun is thinking "... a Kamige. And he's a creative writing student. So...!" Didn't you mean a nukige? Or did you want to spare the ignorant one from searching on google and finding weird stuff

Makes sense Rikka is hearing a humming:

(Creepy Komi also happens with Luz)

Right after "You take your dates to bridges?/" Rikka's sprite jumps or something. (in the trust convo)

"Her questions did make me a think, though"

Luz's route (gotta love her Minas Gerais notebook):

(Komi wha-)
"I understand how your guilt must be weighting on you" not weighing?
"needs warning, ho cancels last minute, and makes everything just a little more complicated" ho? who?
"I know exactly that people think of me" Factually correct. Did you mean "what" instead of "that"?
"giving away nothing our the previous interaction"
"An one bedroom, one bathroom apartment" Apparently, it's "A one" cuz of phonemes??? I got so conflicted with this one

Lion's route:

"As Lion glanced at the phone, reality intruded, and a gasp escaped him lips"

"I want to tell his where, but a bone-chilling"

"I told his about the stories and projects I began" Why are these pronouns switched?

Okay guys, hear me out on this one... what if, yes, I know, just, just listen...

What if aran is trans? LOOK I'M SORRY OKAY, I read things very literally. When it says "egg" what else do you want me to think? And what is the term for when someone is trans, just doesn't know it yet? They're called an egg. Furthermore, the thing grows and grows and he doesn't want to acknowledge it?? Come on (Also, in spanish, huevos can mean balls)

*cough cough* Anyhow, thank you Liara. Los dibujos se ven muy nice, Eroraen, enhorabuena!

He encontrado algunas typos:

"nostlágico"

"lágica" en hogar de "mágica"

LOS PARPADOS DE ESE JUEGAZO SON MUY BUENOS!!!11! No basta con que los personajes parpadeen (lo que para mi ya es encantador). Los CGs de Eroraen parpadean. Yo ni siquiera sabia que eso era posible. Yo habia lo olvidado. Y en Ivy parece que aumentaron los frames de solo 3 para más o algo así que se veen buenissimo!

Ivy... Es el único juego donde la silueta de Rebeca en el logotipo no se haz visible... En Serena, ella hasta estaba como moldura!

Hmm, hmm, la idea de um ECHELON que intercepta todo en internet si que da miedo. Uff, añadindo las IAs en la ecuacíon... Los sci-fy distópicos del pasado cada vez más hablan de la realidad. Que és realidad y que és ficcion?

Three years ago, I played all of Eroraen's games. Now I binge them again once more. Pero ahora, yo sé español

THERE IS SOMETHING YOU MISSED IF YOU DON'T SPEAK SPANISH. You know how fairies often speak in rhymes? Well, in the spanish version of Void of Desire, Lilieth literally does that. Whenever you summon her, she has a little limerick and all. She really be spitting bars. English is just such a hard language to make rhymes in.

Anyhow, creo que ese sigue siendo mi juego favorito de Eroraen. Me gusta Lilieth muchíssimo, y las charlas son tan naturales. Todas las referencias a los otros juegos! Ahh, que bendicion.

"Cariño" es tan mejor que darling o honey. Mejor palabra del español! Gracias, Eroraen!

Alguien más ha notado que ella tiene 6 dedos en su pié en la escena del trono?

Hah! TAKE THAT YOU FOOL! I AM NOW ABLE TO READ THEM ALL IN ESPAÑOL MUAHAHAHA, O MEJOR AÚN JAJAJAJ

October 31st is the 10-year anniversary, huh? Right when the early access for Syrup 2 is out, I see you, I see you

I've replayed it and the whole demo. It's real nice to see all the characters again...

I have a custom poster in real life with a bunch of stuff I love and on the very top corner I have Pastille and Periwinkle flying in a broom, Ahhh

"I do hope you've finished the rest of the game and didn't get sidetracked on the puzzles!" Hahah, yeah. I finished the story...

Damnit, it knows

Hey you, don't forget to rate the VN if ya liked it!

Yeehaw! That was so good! I laughed a lot, thank you Neim!

As always, *chef's kiss* gotta love the writing

[SPOILERS INCOMING, SPOILERS OF ALL FLAVORS AND SHAPES- I mean shapes and sizes]

As is customary, here lie the ramblings of a huge fan:

README.MD is something, alright Hahahah, I haven't opened it and I am cracking up

NEIM LOOKS SO MUCH MORE BEAUTIFUL!!! My gurl got a glow-up yes! Slay!

You cannot just enter somebody's house by the window and say good evening, dude, what the sigma

I love Rico (he literally just picked chalk, but I love him already)

I wanna punch the pink-haired man (its the first frame he appeared in)

(Ohhhhh, wait, ohh, now I remember why I hate this guy. Yeah, okay. I remember that I discovered dev writings on script.py purely because I wanted to alter the story cuz of him. It's that guy)

Holy, the complex stuff really got an update, huh? I remember when the hardest thing was parsec and now we're talking quaternions, ay?

Ahahah, of course Rico is still a milkdrinker

"doesn't technically doesn't have a rule" yeah, buddy sure

Ms. Markdawn? Wasn't it markdown? nah, I must have marked down the wrong name

"let me a new" missed an "introduce" there

Memey music is pretty good!

"Palymr" instead of "Palmyr"

They can both do XD face, ya love to see it

Rico still has a hammer. I love it so hard.

Oh yeah, the dates say "Common". does that mean this will have routes? I don't remember...

Ah, the infinite building a dormitory project that is never built is one I've fallen victim to

Hmm. Diaries to record memory in case of forgetfullness. I've read about a guy with amnesia (Anterograde, can't form new memories) whom the doctor forced to write, but he just got baffled afterwards cuz he didn't remember writing it

"Will I still remember what the original tastes like?" And that, my dear Neim, is why I have TPPM saved in my google drive.

T-they're in the t-third day of high school having integrals? I-I'm scared

I don't remember lynne being this chunni...

I'm so bad at topology, ties are a nightmare. (my shoes are constantly untied, at this point I've accepted my curse and instead hide the laces) I love that the sprites actually match the tie situation

Wind ensemble? Google says "A wind ensemble is that there isn't the same kind of broad cultural knowledge about what a wind ensemble actually is." *checks website* "One the challenges we have as a wind ensemble is that there isn't" ohhh

Heck yeah, Rico, get off the chess club! Chess clubs always suck anyways *mumble mumble*

How come Neim doesn't know she's supposed to say "Nani!?1?" and spontaneously combust? ... Toilet plunger? I can feel... Huh, no skibidi mention? I guess that's... Yeah, wow, feels good.

This whole politics situation is... pretty weird. Out here either politicians say nothing and continue destroying the amazon rainforest or they say they'll preserve it and continue destroying it

NO NEIM DO NOT GO TO MHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Oh yeah, I made a poster a while back, printed it out and all that, and right at the left bottom corner is Neim smiling, just in front of Lilly Satou. A jumbled mess that poster is. I love it

Did I ever mention "meia" means sock in portuguese?

No day transition this time?

The existence of logistics option and also the thing before about our interest implies... Will Neim have her own route? That'd be nice!

Lynette mentions hammers and rico doesnt even bat an eye? That's suspicious...

Geez, they're so needy this time around. Can't even sit with the driver

WAIT SHE'S ACTUALLY GOING AHAHAHHAHAHHAHA

"It feels like looking through an Ultra HD 4K lens..." Girl, that's... That's just real life (except for us, wearer of glasses)

"I just wish we could gather together and have a beer sometime." Mr. Asthrey crossover with Re:Curse when!?!?!? I keep forgetting she doesn't know the big reveal yet, so I'm just waiting for the bomb to drop on her...

Oh we got into rico's route. So our choices actually mattered? I-I thought this was a demo and choices would be cut off...

EWWW IF WE DONT CHOOSE NOBODY WE GO TO NIX'S ROUTE???????? Nevermind, he just also chose logistics

Can't believe I searched up "vitis maculosa serpens" thinking "omg I'm about to be gaslighted by a virtual character Rico, nonetheless!" and proceeded to be gaslighted by Rico anyways

Man, the plants they have here are way too wild, I wanna go to this forest. I love observing nature

This remembered me about the "gray letter". Man, that was so cool.

Lynnette, I need that picture of the OTP for research purposes, please!

Oh, I genuinely thought I'd go to Lynnete's route. Completely forgot about Seth

Hi Zetsubou

I played this game under Anwynn's recommendation and I became obsessed. I am obsessed. I will make a discord server when SG2 hits the stores. No, you cannot stop me.

Sable is now a part of my consciousness. I have a slot in my brain dedicated to musing on Sable and Fafnir, cuz the Sables are the best characters.

SABLE ROUTE BABYYYYYYY

Sable, role model

The one and only kinnie

I love him so much

YES

Oh! My favorite milkdrinker is still looking as short as ever.

"Do you still remember Phoenix?" I don't remember him being that handsome woah!

Very much looking forward! Punniest mess is one of favorite games ever!

After 4 years I wanted to replay this. Huh, so the creators of hug that gator. Amazing.

What do you mean? Birds are real?

Steam release? Damn, yall go far! So many more fans to talk to...

For some reason the link gets redirected to part 1?