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I really like the look of the map and the whole atmosphere of the module.

Some of text is a bit tricky for me to read:

• I think the two column panels by the map could use a dark background to help the text standout from the background (similar to the first page).
• The what happened on Elsinor III section could use a tad of right margin

The homogen hits a creepy sweet spot for me.

Ambient soundtrack AND character portraits!!! (extra credits)

The organism table is really cool for creating unique monsters. The green highlight on some the text might be a bit too faint - I had to strain my eyes a bit to read it. I like that the module has several elements that escalate overtime such as the integration tracker and the awareness table.

Looks great! I really like the escalating plot danger. I find the “Helping Hands” section to be a bit hard to read due to the small sized text.