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Looks great! I really like the escalating plot danger. I find the “Helping Hands” section to be a bit hard to read due to the small sized text.

Thanks so much for taking the time to give some feedback! If I could do it all over I definitely know where I'd cut to make more room for Helping Hands -- both literally for size and to give them a little more shine (personality, complications, etc.) Looking forward to reading yours! :)