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A "cosmetic error" in CH1P8.4 :

"Back?" Maud's expression shifts through several emotions too fast to track. "

: in a form of an accidental quotation mark in the end of the sentence.

Is the code on CH1P2.1 :

You take 
Energy Drink

<<link "Energy Drink">>
<<set $drinkChoice to "energy drink">>
<<run setup.setTrait('calculated', ($deflecting || 50) - 1)>>
<<goto "CH1P2.2">>
<</link>>

: corrent?

Or should it be :

<<link "Energy Drink">>
<<set $drinkChoice to "energy drink">>
<<run setup.setTrait('calculated', ($calculated || 50) - 1)>>
<<goto "CH1P2.2">>
<</link>><

: ?

Also is it intentional that choosing coffee and the Jake "Something's eating you.."-conversations take way from Intuition and add to Methodical?

##BUG REPORT##

Spelling mistake in CH1P20.Theory1_DrinkSuccess.

 Maud grins. Picks up her glass. "Told you $firstNameC's clever."

No big deal, just missing a space between a variable and the following word.

No problem, always happy to help ❤️

I wouldn't call myself tech savvy, but I do dabble LOL I'm better acquainted with Twine than Renpy...but trial and error.

Not sure what caused the problem (the unwanted .rpy file) but after deleting it the game seems to working fine (so far at least).

There is only one game folder and at first the game would only open .txt file, not Renpy. I doubt the problem was caused by the remains of an older version...but of course I could be wrong. I am using the Itch.io App though...so problem might be related to that.

I tried removing the 00layereditimage.rpy instead, and the game is working.

I tried removing the 00layereditimage_ren.py and this the traceback for the error that followed (but now at least it initially launched Renpy):

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code:   
File "game/script.rpy", line 496, in script     layeredimage player: AttributeError: 'RawLayeredImage' object has no attribute 'properties'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Traceback (most recent call last):   
File "game/script.rpy", line 496, in script layeredimage player:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2231, in execute self.call("execute")     ~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2195, in call return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)            ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^   
File "renpy/statements.py", line 379, in call     return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy", line 811, in execute_layeredimage rai.execute()
~~~~~~~~~~~^^
File "renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy", line 798, in execute     properties = { k : eval(v) for k, v in self.properties.items() }
File "renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy", line 798, in <lambda>     properties = { k : eval(v) for k, v in self.properties.items() }                        ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
AttributeError: 'RawLayeredImage' object has no attribute 'properties'

## BUG REPORT ##

After the update, the game won't launch.

Here is what the traceback says:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While loading the script. Exception:
...1\sweet-valentine-chocolatier-prototype\SweetValentineSpring-1.0-pc/renpy/common/00layeredimage_ren.py
and
...\sweet-valentine-chocolatier-prototype\SweetValentineSpring-1.0-pc/renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy conflict, and can't exist in the same game.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Traceback (most recent call last):
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 376, in bootstrap renpy.main.main()
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^
File "renpy/main.py", line 435, in main
renpy.game.script.load_script()  # sets renpy.game.script.     ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^
File "renpy/script.py", line 421, in load_script     self.load_appropriate_file(".rpyc", ["_ren.py", ".rpy"], dir, fn, initcode)     ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/script.py", line 962, in load_appropriate_file raise Exception("{} conflict, and can't exist in the same game.".format (" and ".join(i[1] for i in rpyfns)))
Exception:
...\sweet-valentine-chocolatier-prototype\SweetValentineSpring-1.0-pc/renpy/common/00layeredimage_ren.py
and
...\sweet-valentine-chocolatier-prototype\SweetValentineSpring-1.0-pc/renpy/common/00layeredimage.rpy conflict, and can't exist in the same game.

Uuuh...thanks for the info! I'll need to do a total rerun at some point to see what options are currently hiding from me.

No problem, always happy to help! Sorry about the confusion...I should have been more precise when describing the bug, and I definitely should have mentioned where I found it.

Just tested the new version and now it works like a charm...at least the route I chose.

** I tried a different way of doing things : I chose to go straight to Matt, after which I was sent to Diego, after which the patch came to an end and totally missed the "wandering" part... Just to make sure, is that how it's suppose to work? Same thing happens if I chose to go to Diego first.**

Thanks for the great game. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see where you'll go with it. Loved the training session "mini-game"...though the total randomness of it did cause some grey hair...me being a perfectionist and all LOL

I tried opening the game straight from the file without using Itch.io App, and unfortunately the problem persists.

Here are my dialog choices (shortened to avoid spoilers) in order:

• Wander around...
• Go and see...
• Stay... 
•  What is... 
•  Try to... 
•  Ask... 
•  Are you really... 
•  Leave... 
•  What exactly... 
•  When did it... 
•  You had something... 
•  I'm calling... 
•  SENDS ME STRAIGHT TO MATT 
•  Look d... 
•  Go... 
•  Are you... 
•  Didn't I... 
•  Your... 
•  ... 
•  I can't... 
•  I can't,... 
•  We were... 
•  I don't know... 
•  That can't be... 
•  Actually... 
•  AUTOMATICALLY SENDS ME TO DIEGO
• Actually...
• Let me...
• SENDS ME BACK TO THE BEGINNING OF THE DIALOG WITH MATT

Here, I tried some other dialog options...

• Wander around...
• Go and see...
• Stay...
• What is...
• Try to...
• Ask...
• Are you really...
• Leave...
• What exactly...
• When did it...
• You had something...
• I'm calling...
• SENDS ME STRAIGHT TO MATT
• Look d...
• Go...
• Why...
• Matt...
• YOU'RE...
• Sorry...
• Stay...
• END OF PATCH

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

• Wander around...
• Go and see...
• Stay...
• What is...
• Try to...
• Ask...
• Are you really...
• Leave...
• What exactly...
• When did it...
• You had something...
• I'm calling...
• SENDS ME STRAIGHT TO MATT
• Look d...
• Go...
• Why...
• Matt...
• YOU'RE...
• Sorry...
• I can't...
• There are...
• I...
• SENDS ME TO DIEGO
• Actually...
• Let me...
• SENDS ME BACK TO THE BEGINNING OF THE DIALOG WITH MATT
  

## BUG REPORT ##

Endless Loop

* I first chose to wander around, then the game send to me to Matt, then to Diego, then back to Matt, then again to Diego, then back to Matt, ... *

=> I tried different dialog options and finally after a few rounds of going around I managed to get out of the loop by chance, by choosing totally different dialog options when talking with Matt

P.S. I'm using the Itch.io App, in case it makes a difference.

I keep getting an error when I try to update the game:

:I'm using the Itch.io App, in case that makes a difference.

What does "Did you cheat in the labyrinth?" refer to ???

Agreed

Unfortunately, at least I have no definite answer for that. It is always risky to download anything into your computer... However, while using Itch.io, and more precisely the Itch.io App, you can unable itch.io sandbox (Preferences --> Security & privacy) and while it is not perfect and does not actually prevent you from downloading malware, it does at least attempt to minimize the potential harm they can cause.

If someone smarter has a better solution, I'm all ears.

Two more accounts posting "Update" messages with links containing Malware :

emikn4

and

Timmdd26

: do NOT click the links!! The messages are scam and the links only contain malware!!

Yet another MALWARE message has been mass posted on game chats.

Sender's account :   Emizo   (A member registered  Feb 08, 2025)

This is what the SCAM message posted looks like : 

 UPDATE AVAILABLE — NEW VERSION OUT NOW! The latest update has been released and is ready to download: → https://www.patreon.com/file?h=144282237&m=569842956

For your safety and to ensure you get the correct build, please download only from official links like this one.

 UPDATE DETAILS:

• Fixed several bugs reported by players
• Improved stability for a more reliable experience
• Added new content and small feature upgrades
• Refined UI elements and visual details
• Minor gameplay improvements and optimizations

Update now to enjoy the upgraded and smoother version!

: This message is a scam!! There is no update!!  NO DOT click the link on the message, it is malware!! Repost all the messages you come across!! I have reported several and I have sent a message to the support@itch.io.

Stay safe everybody!

Such a beautiful template. Best book-looking one I've seen so far. It'd be nearing perfection if only the text alignment was justified instead of left.

I couldn't load my save either. Whether it was a bug or a feature, I don't know.

## BUG REPORT ##

Cannot continue past Turn 694 :

* * * spoiler alert * * *

Error: <<if>>: <<else>> must be the final clause

<<if $Niaforgiveness > 14>>\ You two eye each other, truly look at each other. Maybe it’s because you’re sick that you’re too tired to look away and she feels she can be as vulnerable as you feel. Synchronicity in someone feeling as bad as you look in feverish delirium. She precipitously stands up, turning around and walking to the window, her heeled boots the only loud sound in the room. She crosses her arms as she stands there, bent straight and head slightly tilted back. “I was… am scared of you,” she admits. It doesn’t shock you as much as you would think. Every one is scared of you which is why you’re treated the way that you are. She just proved to not an exception. <<if $Esteem == "Worth">>\ “That’s not really that surprising,” you reply. <<elseif $Esteem == "Worthless">>\ “I know.” <</if>>\ “I thought I could handle it,” she says softly, mostly to herself. “I guess I stupidly thought it wasn’t as bad as people said it was. I never saw one of your… fits before. Then Orla…” she trails off. Her head tilts forward. “I thought I was strong. You think you’re so invincible when you’re sixteen don’t you? You watch some horror movies, some medical documentaries, your mom leaves you and your dad scares the shit out of you and you think you can handle anything,” she says thickly. “Yeah,” you say, although you can’t say you ever thought you were that strong. You just kept going without ever stopping to think about what it took to go through all you’ve been through. “I stopped knowing how to handle you. Fuck, that sounds horrible,” she inhales. She takes a lock of her hair in her finger. She snorts, “I’ve been horrible. Do you know how shitty it feels to want to save lives but knowing that I didn’t join this investigation for the missing girls, or the dead girls and boys? I did it for a completely self-interested reason. What morals do I have to stand on?” “Nia?” “I stopped knowing how to take care of you when you got worse. I thought I was strong enough to hold you, to carry you if necessary while you wanted to tear the world apart but I was weak and I’m sorry I didn’t call. I’m sorry I didn’t write. I’m sorry I wasn’t there. I’m sorry I wasn’t your best friend. I’m sorry if you thought I hated you. I’m sorry because for a moment I believed I did,” she says in a voice that sounds too shaky to be the girl you know. She looks over her shoulder at you and perhaps it’s the fever but her eyes look glassy. The winter light outlines her, lighting her coils and she looks angelic. “I’m sorry because I believe I did what was right for me. But I didn’t do it the right way. Even if I had…” she stops and fully turns to you. She looks heartbroken as she concludes, “I would’ve missed you just like I did for two years and just like I did since you’ve been back.” <hr>\ * [[“I’m sorry too.”|Page 589-A2][$sorrynia to true]] * [[“I can’t forgive you, not yet.”|Page 589-A2][$forgivenias to true]] <<elseif $NiaP>>\ You two eye each other, truly look at each other. Maybe it’s because you’re sick that you’re too tired to look away and she feels she can be as vulnerable as you feel. Synchronicity in someone feeling as bad as you look in feverish delirium. She precipitously stands up, turning around and walking to the window, her heeled boots the only loud sound in the room. She crosses her arms as she stands there, bent straight and head slightly tilted back. “I was… am scared of you,” she admits. It doesn’t shock you as much as you would think. Every one is scared of you which is why you’re treated the way that you are. She just proved to not an exception. <<if $Esteem == "Worth">>\ “That’s not really that surprising,” you reply. <<elseif $Esteem == "Worthless">>\ “I know.” <</if>>\ “I thought I could handle it,” she says softly, mostly to herself. “I guess I stupidly thought it wasn’t as bad as people said it was. I never saw one of your… fits before. Then Orla…” she trails off. Her head tilts forward. “I thought I was strong. You think you’re so invincible when you’re sixteen don’t you? You watch some horror movies, some medical documentaries, your mom leaves you and your dad scares the shit out of you and you think you can handle anything,” she says thickly. “Yeah,” you say, although you can’t say you ever thought you were that strong. You just kept going without ever stopping to think about what it took to go through all you’ve been through. “I stopped knowing how to handle you. Fuck, that sounds horrible,” she inhales. She takes a lock of her hair in her finger. She snorts, “I’ve been horrible. Do you know how shitty it feels to want to save lives but knowing that I didn’t join this investigation for the missing girls, or the dead girls and boys? I did it for a completely self-interested reason. What morals do I have to stand on?” “Nia?” “I stopped knowing how to take care of you when you got worse. I thought I was strong enough to hold you, to carry you if necessary while you wanted to tear the world apart but I was weak and I’m sorry I didn’t call. I’m sorry I didn’t write. I’m sorry I wasn’t there. I’m sorry I wasn’t your best friend. I’m sorry if you thought I hated you. I’m sorry because for a moment I believed I did,” she says in a voice that sounds too shaky to be the girl you know. She looks over her shoulder at you and perhaps it’s the fever but her eyes look glassy. The winter light outlines her, lighting her coils and she looks angelic. “I’m sorry because I believe I did what was right for me. But I didn’t do it the right way. Even if I had…” she stops and fully turns to you. She looks heartbroken as she concludes, “I would’ve missed you just like I did for two years and just like I did since you’ve been back.” <hr>\ * [[“I’m sorry too.”|Page 589-A2][$sorrynia to true]] * [[“I can’t forgive you, not yet.”|Page 589-A2][$forgivenias to true]] <<else>>\ She takes out the thermometer and calls out, “Imre.” Imre comes in and asks, “is everything alright?” Nia gets up and walks over to him. She’s at eye-level with him given the size of her heels. Before he can open his mouth, she slaps him hard across the face. His head snaps to the side but he quickly recovers, his face impassive while a red welt starts forming on his cheek. “And to what may I owe this act of violence?” he asks. She leans, “I told you to not mess with Birdie. I wasn’t fucking around and for some reason you don’t understand that. But I will make you understand it.” She looks over her shoulder at you and nods, “take your medicine and ask Wendy to make you some tea with honey.” She looks back at Imre and says, “asshole,” before walking away. Imre lightly touches his cheek and looks back at you. He doesn’t look at all affected; actually, you would even say he looks a bit amused. “Well done,” he says with a smile. <<if $Moral == "Ethical">>\ “I’m so sorry,” you say, “I didn’t think she’d do that.” Imre laughs lightly, “It’s quite alright. It will pass and I seem to have earned it.” He opens the door and says, “I wish you a speedy recovery.” <<elseif $Moral == "Corrupt">>\ You smile, “that’s what you fucking get for being an asshole. You should know not to fuck with me.” Imre chuckles, his eyes twinkling. “Yes, I can see that now. It takes skill to get someone to do the dirty work for you. Consider me thoroughly impressed.” He opens the door and says, “I wish you a speedy recovery.” <<elseif $Moral == "Amorality">>\ “I didn’t think she’d do something so quickly, I would say I’m sorry, but it’s not really my fault anyway,” you say. Imre laughs, “you are right. Never apologize for the action of others.” He opens the door and says, “I wish you a speedy recovery.” [[NEXT|Page 590]] <</if>>\ <<elseif $niar2>>\ “For?” she asks. “What do you mean what for? For this,” you gesture at her. “For keeping an eye on me for the past couple of days. I know you think it’s your duty because you want to be a doctor but thank you anyway.” “For one thing, I’m going to be a doctor,” she stresses, “secondly, I did this because you’re you. Not because you’re just anyone.” You feel your cheeks grow warm. It’s hard to handle such brutal honesty about love towards you. Nia says it as if it were just a fact of life. That of course she would do this, there isn’t any thought of her ever doing anything else. <<if $Niaforgiveness > 14>>\ You two eye each other, truly look at each other. Maybe it’s because you’re sick that you’re too tired to look away and she feels she can be as vulnerable as you feel. Synchronicity in someone feeling as bad as you look in feverish delirium. She precipitously stands up, turning around and walking to the window, her heeled boots the only loud sound in the room. She crosses her arms as she stands there, bent straight and head slightly tilted back. “I was… am scared of you,” she admits. It doesn’t shock you as much as you would think. Every one is scared of you which is why you’re treated the way that you are. She just proved to not an exception. <<if $Esteem == "Worth">>\ “That’s not really that surprising,” you reply. <<elseif $Esteem == "Worthless">>\ “I know.” <</if>>\ “I thought I could handle it,” she says softly, mostly to herself. “I guess I stupidly thought it wasn’t as bad as people said it was. I never saw one of your… fits before. Then Orla…” she trails off. Her head tilts forward. “I thought I was strong. You think you’re so invincible when you’re sixteen don’t you? You watch some horror movies, some medical documentaries, your mom leaves you and your dad scares the shit out of you and you think you can handle anything,” she says thickly. “Yeah,” you say, although you can’t say you ever thought you were that strong. You just kept going without ever stopping to think about what it took to go through all you’ve been through. “I stopped knowing how to handle you. Fuck, that sounds horrible,” she inhales. She takes a lock of her hair in her finger. She snorts, “I’ve been horrible. Do you know how shitty it feels to want to save lives but knowing that I didn’t join this investigation for the missing girls, or the dead girls and boys? I did it for a completely self-interested reason. What morals do I have to stand on?” “Nia?” “I stopped knowing how to take care of you when you got worse. I thought I was strong enough to hold you, to carry you if necessary while you wanted to tear the world apart but I was weak and I’m sorry I didn’t call. I’m sorry I didn’t write. I’m sorry I wasn’t there. I’m sorry I wasn’t your best friend. I’m sorry if you thought I hated you. I’m sorry because for a moment I believed I did,” she says in a voice that sounds too shaky to be the girl you know. She looks over her shoulder at you and perhaps it’s the fever but her eyes look glassy. The winter light outlines her, lighting her coils and she looks angelic. “I’m sorry because I believe I did what was right for me. But I didn’t do it the right way. Even if I had…” she stops and fully turns to you. She looks heartbroken as she concludes, “I would’ve missed you just like I did for two years and just like I did since you’ve been back.” <hr>\ * [[“I’m sorry too.”|Page 589-A2][$sorrynia to true]] * [[“I can’t forgive you, not yet.”|Page 589-A2][$forgivenias to true]] <<elseif $NiaP>>\ You two eye each other, truly look at each other. Maybe it’s because you’re sick that you’re too tired to look away and she feels she can be as vulnerable as you feel. Synchronicity in someone feeling as bad as you look in feverish delirium. She precipitously stands up, turning around and walking to the window, her heeled boots the only loud sound in the room. She crosses her arms as she stands there, bent straight and head slightly tilted back. “I was… am scared of you,” she admits. It doesn’t shock you as much as you would think. Every one is scared of you which is why you’re treated the way that you are. She just proved to not an exception. <<if $Esteem == "Worth">>\ “That’s not really that surprising,” you reply. <<elseif $Esteem == "Worthless">>\ “I know.” <</if>>\ “I thought I could handle it,” she says softly, mostly to herself. “I guess I stupidly thought it wasn’t as bad as people said it was. I never saw one of your… fits before. Then Orla…” she trails off. Her head tilts forward. “I thought I was strong. You think you’re so invincible when you’re sixteen don’t you? You watch some horror movies, some medical documentaries, your mom leaves you and your dad scares the shit out of you and you think you can handle anything,” she says thickly. “Yeah,” you say, although you can’t say you ever thought you were that strong. You just kept going without ever stopping to think about what it took to go through all you’ve been through. “I stopped knowing how to handle you. Fuck, that sounds horrible,” she inhales. She takes a lock of her hair in her finger. She snorts, “I’ve been horrible. Do you know how shitty it feels to want to save lives but knowing that I didn’t join this investigation for the missing girls, or the dead girls and boys? I did it for a completely self-interested reason. What morals do I have to stand on?” “Nia?” “I stopped knowing how to take care of you when you got worse. I thought I was strong enough to hold you, to carry you if necessary while you wanted to tear the world apart but I was weak and I’m sorry I didn’t call. I’m sorry I didn’t write. I’m sorry I wasn’t there. I’m sorry I wasn’t your best friend. I’m sorry if you thought I hated you. I’m sorry because for a moment I believed I did,” she says in a voice that sounds too shaky to be the girl you know. She looks over her shoulder at you and perhaps it’s the fever but her eyes look glassy. The winter light outlines her, lighting her coils and she looks angelic. “I’m sorry because I believe I did what was right for me. But I didn’t do it the right way. Even if I had…” she stops and fully turns to you. She looks heartbroken as she concludes, “I would’ve missed you just like I did for two years and just like I did since you’ve been back.” <hr>\ * [[“I’m sorry too.”|Page 589-A2][$sorrynia to true]] * [[“I can’t forgive you, not yet.”|Page 589-A2][$forgivenias to true]] <<else>>\ “You’re welcome,” she says neutrally. You both sit in silence as she finishes up. Once she’s done, she gets up and nods briefly towards you before leaving the room. <</if>>\ [[NEXT|Page 590]] <</if>>

I don't know. At least I haven't. I don't use Patreon so it escaped my mind.

I have been reporting their messages and sent mail to support and message through feedback. The ID of this tw*t is 

dev-games@itch.io

everyone please report their messages and DO NOT click the link!! So far there over 600 messages with the malicious link.

#BUG REPORT#

On Chapter10CL6, the link to next passage displays $playername instead of the MC' actual name.

Another thing I just noticed:

If you need to scroll down to read the whole text and you then press either the settings or saves button while being on the bottom of the page, the popup windows that open are not visible to you. It appears that they are anchored to the top of the text (box?) area. It is bothersome but not game breaking. It should be possible to have them always open at a certain place on the screen instead. If you find the time, code and energy to do that, it would be much appreciated. If not, that's ok too. Just thought you might want to know...as it seemed like something that is most likely not intentional, but instead a bug of some sort.

#BUG REPORT#

On Chapter8C23, check the italic tags around the word "us" on the answer linking to Chapter8C24C

#BUG REPORT#

Turn 519 - snarky/sardonic answer not working.

Turn 535 - irritable/stubborn answer, loops back to "Carter suddenly look tired. Older. He rubs a hand over his face, ...".

Turn 552 - Wrong pronoun, "She watches you for a moment more.", should be he.

So disappointed... Whoever this MC chick is, I couldn't care less, and quite frankly, if Keldran interested in her then I'm definitely not interested in him. What happened to my MC from the Academy Carols!? What happened to the "I will never forget you"!? What happened to the promises?! What happened to the love!?

When my old MC received the letter back without it ever reaching Keldran and Keldran disappearing to the thin air, do you really think he would have just let it be and forgot all about Keldran and not turn ever stone in the existence to find him?! Yeah, no...he absolutely would not have rested before he found him. As for Keldran...I don't think he would have disappeared without contacting the original MC, as he didn't seem like a total A-hole. Ugh.

Why not do an actual sequel and keep the familiar characters around? I'm sorry but I just can't like this game, as character vice it feels like betrayal. This feels less like a sequel and more like a spin-off, or a restart. And since I'm already invested in the original story, all this does is rub me the wrong way.

I agree. It would be nice for the MC's feelings to be acknowledged in some way. Angst, platonic love...I wouldn't mind either.

I am a woman. Being a woman sucks...big time. Being physically inferior, pretty much bleeding to death once a month, having to stress the F out of getting pregnant...all things that games extremely rarely take into account. Plus, I just don't get women...besides the things mentioned above, I struggle to find anything in common with any of them. Now, being stuck being a female in real life...why the heck would I wanna play as one in a game!? If I am going to escape the reality, I wanna do with style and as the perfected version of myself. What can I say, being a tomboy I just feel more connected to the male MCs. If I was male, I would 100% be gay. The only game where a female protagonist is a must, and that is only because the female VA is just so much better than the male...and well, Garrus, is the Mass Effect trilogy.

I did some digging and it appears that the problem only appears when playing in the Itch.io App, not while playing in a browser. In the App none of the bottom buttons (tumblr, music, bug report) do anything, but they work fine in browser.

The Bug Report -button was showing on the sidebar. It was gray but turned to white when mouse was hovering over. When pressed, nothing happened.

### BUG REPORT ###

The Bug Report -button did not work, so had to do this here:

 Da starts talking to you, but you can't understand what he's saying. Everything has become sort of muffled and hazy.

He sits you down on a chair and gently cups your face in his hands as he stoops down before you. His voice is soft and you finally notice there are tears in his eyes too; they make the blue hues within the hazel come out more.

You finally break from your stupor as Da hugs you close, and rocks you side to side as he speaks softly. He's saying 'I'm sorry' over and over.

Da starts talking to you, but you can't understand what he's saying. Everything has become sort of muffled and hazy.

He sits you down on a chair and gently cups your face in his hands as he stoops down before you. His voice is soft and you finally notice there are tears in his eyes too; they make the blue hues within the hazel come out more.

You finally break from your stupor as Da hugs you close, and rocks you side to side as he speaks softly. He's saying 'I'm sorry' over and over.

As you can see, the same text appears twice.

I share your pain. Blade is my absolute favourite character too...and my MC is also male. The next most intriguing character to me, and the one my MC might feel most connected to, is Halek...which brings us back to heart-break and unavailability.

I get it, art should always comes first. Plus it is your story and they are your characters, I'm just there to enjoy the ride LOL so whatever it is that you share with us, I embrace it with open arms <3 So that you for this treat!

<< now back to waiting for Cantata chapter 4>>

Let's just say that I may or may not have read through the Original a few times too many LOL It's not like I know it by heart...not all of it anyway... <3

It is a good story, and the extended ending was a nice a touch, so thank you for that <3 ...though I have to admit I always pictured my MC's and Heron's bedroom roles being the other way around...

## Bug Report ##

***Spoiler Alert***

Turn 143 : Heron

"Always have, always will. I will follow him anywhere," he smiles wryly, "even out of The City."

--> This is incorrect, I think. We are staying not leaving. It should say, if I remember correctly from the Original Version, something like "even to rebellion."