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Clever and eerie. Congrats.

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Thank you!

I'm not an expert about MB so I can't say if the PCs should know in advance that a particular mask is resembling that specifical god. However, the omens are very evocative!

Thank you so much.

Eccellente! Forse toglierei solo la sagoma che tanto non aggiunge nulla. Se riesci ti invito a usare un cartellone e usare un bambino (vero) per tracciare il contorno della silhouette: con me ha funzionato molto bene. Se poi ti va di raccontarmi dove l'hai giocato e com'è andata, includo volentieri i vostri nomi (se vi fa piacere) fra i playtester.

Credo sia un typo derivante da una precedente versione del regolamento.

In effetti non ancora. Dovessi realizzarle, metterei spazi bianchi per il setup e un minisunto delle mosse. Entro quando ti servirebbero?

Thank you! Definitely planning on expanding the text.

Ooh! Finally a nice layout version. Lovely!

Plenty of flavor in the subtext of this scenario. Love the idea of a "high ranks dungeon". Cursed masks are a bonus point. The map is not very clear and I don't understand how the isometric and the other one are related.

Thank you. Yeah, definitely an "advanced" version of the scenario will have more options, suggestions and maybe a custom mechanics.

Thanks. Pvp is an option i didn't think about in the first place. Maybe in a future version I can say that each PC comes from a different setting (e.g. a fantasy adventurer, a cyberpunk samurai, and so on). Will work on it!

Very well written and full of opportunities for the PCs to interact with. Liked the factions and the map. Good work.

Thanks. Out of curiosity, what were you expecting from the title?

Solid work filled with useful tables and aptly capturing the jam's theme. Liked a lot the procedural structure. A suggestion: remove the hp indication since it's a systemless scenario  (10 hp is high or low? just tell the DM if it's a tough enemy or not).

Very good graphic design. It's a bit like a contemporary dungeon - to the point that maybe the PCs need a reason to just not fly away at the first sign of horror? (I don't know Liminal Horror extremely well). As for the "why you're here" table, is it the same for all the group or is it possible to have different motives and starting points for each PC? (it could be fun).

Nails the theme and packs lots of different situations in few pages. It can easily become a mini-campaign.

Very evocative writing. I like the edgy creatures and the curses accompanying the magical object(s).

Thank you so much!

Very clean and clear formatting, both of text and graphics. Lovely cover and maps.

Best writing so far. The formatting is clean and useful. The theme is very evocative and the random tables are super creepy.

I usually don't like combat arenas but I liked  how you enriched the premise, like the downtime actions.

Thank you. The title immediately gave me western vibes.

Good text. The idea of alternating PCs is fascinating (reminds me somewhat The children of time).

Thank you!

Loved every part of it. The rumors table is nice and the rules for generating a random city is gold. You can easily create a whole campaign out of this, with an eerie mix of fantasy and body-snatchers sci-fi.

Yes, this was the intent. I was reading Corum when the jam started. :)

Spider hand is unsettling. Liked the fingers table and the procedural approach.

Perfectly channels the jam's theme. Not sure how the PCs are intended to be engaged in the first place. Loved the "Where is Dracaine?" paragraph that helps in thinking of the castle as a living thing. Some monsters are very scary, e.g. the collective souls.

It took me a minute to understand the post-its - after that, it's a clever idea, reminding me the multilayered structure of Triangle Agency.

Nice premise. I would have liked a bit more options for the players. Can't understand if it's meant to be played in a historical setting or this Nostradamus is a seer in a fantasy world.

Very creepy setting. Not sure if the letter is meant as a physical handout to be read by the players: in that case, they - at least my players - would ask for the whole text to be taken out from the envelope. :) May I suggest another way of letting them read only parts of the letter ? E.g. burnt paper. All in all, solid horror.

Gorgeous setting and very nice idea about a PC carrying the lantern. Not sure I've understood correctly how to read the map. Cover art is supreme.

Thank you. I'd like to expand it in the future, in structure as long as in a fancier layout.

Played it in a one shot and the setup perfectly recreated hard boiled vibes. One thing we added was a preliminary discussion about the ways lycanthropy works (do they transform at will? yes. must it be night? no. etc.). Thanks for the game.

Ouch! Very creepy.

Apart from the gorgeous illustrations, the setting has strong vibes and the scenario is solid. One of the best entries so far in my opinion.

The head-stealing feature is creepy!

Liked the reverse-time structure a lot.