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I honestly just thought they were hired off of fiver and weren't given a lot of context for the scripts. The compliants I issued in the past make much more sense now that I know it's AI.

I've already said but I'd recommend finding VAs who do work for free if voice acting is something you're completely set on being in the game. 

One for each of the main three so they're at least distinct and then just have some of them voice the extra characters that may appear. 

Again, Reddit and Casting call club have a host of upcoming voice talent who would be more than happy to do work for free if budget is a concern you have.

From other reviews, its been made apparent the voices might actually be Ai generated. 

Is this true? 

If so I would advise getting rid of them all together. There are subreddits and sites like casting call club where you can find VA's willing to do work for low pay or even for free. I would recommend searching there if the voices are intended to stay part of the game. You'll get better performances that way 

I appreciate you hearing folks out!

Just to elaborate a bit for some of my feedback, my specific issue.

With Gloria: My guess is for her deliveries was to sound unbothered and casual regarding doug's actions. That's a solid idea, my problem with the execution is often the way some of her lines are delivered don't often match the way they seem to be written when paired with the way her in game model emotes. And can often feel less grounded and stiff.. 

For Imogen: I Would maybe recommend looking through some audios on the subreddit r/gonewildaudios for examples of how VA's typically read certain sound effects for actions like blowjobs or moans. as well for references to good sound libaries so the game itself can have more sfx for lewd and tame scenes. And some of her line reads during lewd scenes also sometimes feels less intense or more playful than the in game animations would suggest. 

Verity I really have no notes for other than sometimes her audio quality sounds a bit muffled compared to the other two. Her acting is actually perfect. Shes very consistent with the way she reads with the voice for her character. 

Finally I think some of the music choices during some of the actual sex scenes often clash with the mood. But that I feel is more subjective and down to creative decision than anything.

Thanks for taking the time to read, always appreciate a dev who's open to notes. Really liked the demo and I look forward to following this projects development.

Very Decent demo but something has got to be done about the VA's.

Some of the lines feel like they're read without any emotion or context for the scene. And the VA for Imogen has a tendency to read out sound effects instead of..well..acting. 

Gloria's VA feels flat in almost all her deliveries.

Verity is the only one who gives a consistent performance throughout.

Also maybe an option to disable the male va's all together since while doug's VA gave a funny performance, it takes me out of the scenes sometimes and kills any tension or mood for any of the steamier scenes.

7/10

good proof of concept, lots of room for improvement.  

So far really like everything. A few small nitpicks would be things like the ui for navigating the house feels a bit bland for how good this games animations and character art are. Having it be awkwardly off to the right feels a bit weird. I think having a labeled mini map i think would be more aesthetically pleasing.

Second thing would be the sound design for the expansions themselves. I'd use sounds that better emphasize the inflation effect, like tense stretching sounds and the final pop having more "boing" to it.

Other than that I really like everything else. the phone ui is good, like i said before the art is great, i like the voice acting, the concept is fun and the minigames and their respective animations are really fun.

8/10

I really like the proportions for these models! My only note would be maybe a brighter more cartoony rendering to match instead of the more grounded look. The shading and colors on these models look a tad muddy. I think a good fit would be something similar to the game Under contract or even Dispatch for a less niche reference

There's been a bug for the last couple releases where I've had to restart my saves from scratch. Is there a way to fix this? Or could you maybe provide a link somewhere to slots with full completion 

I love the game, just hate having to replay it from the very beginning just to see the continuation and unlocking all the stuff I've already gotten before.

Unfortunately gonna have to say I'm resending my support. 

The writing for the first game was already iffy and while I had my hopes for the sequal, just don't think it'll get any better considering the use of ai. If it's used in the art, I have no reason to believe it won't be used in the writing 

Hope future projects of yours move away from having AI be part of the process at all. Peace ✌️ 

Felt you should know. Just because you got cooked in the comments don't mean you were wrong. 

I was massively disappointed when I was informed these games use AI for the art. Had a feeling but didn't wanna assume

Its no wonder a lot of the art for the characters are inconsistent, poses look stale, or some stuff just looks "off" 

With word the game will be going 3D, I'm with the others for the worry of losing the charm of the more simple get expressive 2d art style

But I also completely understand that this is the route to go if we want animations. 

So with that in mind, I'd recommend using models that aren't too realistic. A lot of erotic games people tend to find unappealing because a lot of them use the rather ugly doll like human models.

I think more simplistic rigs and cartoony ones would be better suited and help keeping the games look more unique 

And still giving ease for animations. 

There was actually a video I saw just a couple days ago going over simplistic polygonal models for the sake of unique looking styles (It was about the models found in Megaman legends if anyone would like to check it out) and I think thats what I would keep in mind for a game like this.

Really enjoyed the update overall, looking forward to seeing more as always. Its actually really cool how good you are with keeping up with all the feedback and player input 

And the turnover time for these updates is really impressive too.

I would say maybe a mix? 

Have different levels surrounding Jennifer and her husband and maybe some of her friends become different levels where you can do things on shopping trips, lunches, maybe Ethan could have a job as a bus boy where he runs into a friend of Jennifer who's heard of his "talents" while shes already on a date with her own husband.

Etc.

last thing to add to something I said before. With Jennifers satisfaction maxed, maybe instead of making you cum on her face, if you've played well enough, she'll allow you to pick which final position you'd like to finish with. Leading to multiple unique ending cg's for each level

Great update! Love the sounds though i would add an ability to adjust the volume for the voices and the music since for the breast fondling the music drowns out the moans. 

Additionally, maybe have it so the moans become more intense the closer you get to finishing a bit.

Last thing on the sound (and this one is more a nitpick) is maybe finding different moans for the jerking off segment. Heavy panting paired with seductive giggles and quick fapping sounds instead of reusing the blowjob audio. maybe even have her whispering little commands for you to hurry and give it to her. 

Something else would be adding a freeplay gallery that unlocks as you complete segments that allow you to replay them as you wish for as long as you'd like swapping between intensity levels.

Now all that aside. For more complex ideas, I think a fun mechanic would be to add a bit more real time engagement in the sex. For example, during the doggy style section, give the player the option to spank Jennifer to increase her patience meter quicker at the risk of making her moan loud, thus potentially  attracting the husband to the room.

Along with this, if you plan on going further with more levels, I'd make the game play loop be balancing pleasing Jennifer and not getting caught. Maybe for the first level, actual sex scenes are optional to get rather than part of main progression. You only get full sex with her if you've pleased her enough (Through playing with her breasts or eating her out) before the level has come to an end

That way you can save more positions to be required for later levels. Maybe be able to convince her to do anal, titjobs, cumming in her raw (Condom on or condom-less depending n how you preformed) 

different levels could have more interactive scenes through the house, like fingering her at the dinner table, having sex in the shower, or even in bed next to her husband.

overall, I liked this update, and I look forward to wherever you take this project.

I much more enjoy this version of the game. Only thing now would be including basic sound effects and maybe stock moans to use. 

For feedback, it does feel like some of the dialogue is gone from the previous version? I would maybe have it happen as you're filling the bar. Maybe anytime you max out her patience bar

Looking forward to seeing how it turns out!

I second EVERYTHING that this guy pitched. Covers basically all my thoughts too

While convenient, the warning meter removes all strategy from the game. It's essentially just a cheat mode that makes the check husband option irrelevant.   

Is there a cheating aspect to the story? (I.e you the player taking Sayaka from a relationship she's already in? Or her rejecting a potential suitor her age in favor of the player)

Will there be a mobile port?

Begging someone to make a VN with this character

Will you ever consider finding dedicated VAs for the characters during certain story/lewd scenes?

I don't remember how long ago it was, but I recall there was an idea to rename the game to Cafe Estro. Is that still happening in the future or was that scrapped?

Are there plans to add other forms to the villains like Buu or Cell?