Very Decent demo but something has got to be done about the VA's.
Some of the lines feel like they're read without any emotion or context for the scene. And the VA for Imogen has a tendency to read out sound effects instead of..well..acting.
Gloria's VA feels flat in almost all her deliveries.
Verity is the only one who gives a consistent performance throughout.
Also maybe an option to disable the male va's all together since while doug's VA gave a funny performance, it takes me out of the scenes sometimes and kills any tension or mood for any of the steamier scenes.
7/10
good proof of concept, lots of room for improvement.