I appreciate you hearing folks out!
Just to elaborate a bit for some of my feedback, my specific issue.
With Gloria: My guess is for her deliveries was to sound unbothered and casual regarding doug's actions. That's a solid idea, my problem with the execution is often the way some of her lines are delivered don't often match the way they seem to be written when paired with the way her in game model emotes. And can often feel less grounded and stiff..
For Imogen: I Would maybe recommend looking through some audios on the subreddit r/gonewildaudios for examples of how VA's typically read certain sound effects for actions like blowjobs or moans. as well for references to good sound libaries so the game itself can have more sfx for lewd and tame scenes. And some of her line reads during lewd scenes also sometimes feels less intense or more playful than the in game animations would suggest.
Verity I really have no notes for other than sometimes her audio quality sounds a bit muffled compared to the other two. Her acting is actually perfect. Shes very consistent with the way she reads with the voice for her character.
Finally I think some of the music choices during some of the actual sex scenes often clash with the mood. But that I feel is more subjective and down to creative decision than anything.
Thanks for taking the time to read, always appreciate a dev who's open to notes. Really liked the demo and I look forward to following this projects development.