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I've completed the last chapter. Will there be no continuation at all? I'm sure no one expected this ending, but it's still okay. It turns out that there is an open ending here. Although I still have questions about the characters' decisions and conclusions, oh well, it doesn't matter. It was a good experience. I hope you'll want to write more VNs, which we, the readers, will be able to see and read.  ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Omg, it released now!!! Gonna watch! Gonna watch!!! 

I forgot to add the top husband candidates.

For Yoshi, I think the best choice would be 1)Kol, then 2)Nasir, 3)Zed, 4)Razix, and 5).Loro

If for me personally, then: 1) Zed 2) Nasir 3) Razix 4) Kol 5) Loro

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Spoiler with an explanation if you're interested in why I arranged it this way.

1) Kol.  According to the plot, it is more logical and more right for Yoshi to be connected with Kol. Kol gets more exposure than others (in other candidate routes, he's more of a problem/obstacle to the relationship; he's not discussed or talked about at all). In his relationship with Yoshi, he finally realizes what's important to him and that he could have always acted differently (even though Yoshi's tirade about being afraid of killing a pirate was nonsense). Yoshi's choice affects Nasir's relationship with Kol leading them to a familial-friendly relationship rather than one-sided love (Which still seems like a fluid feature to me, depending on Nasir's preferences in other routes).  For me personally, he wouldn't have been a candidate, since under Yoshi's conditions, I would have been intimidated and would have had minimal contact with someone who rules through fear. Nevertheless, I passed his route first.

2) Nasir. Yoshi and Nasir are two engineers and have a kinks on each other. The only problem is that their relationship revolves around each other, separating them from the rest of the crew. Personally, Nasir wouldn't be such a good fit for me due to his controversial kinks and occupation, but nevertheless, he's similar to Razix in his flirting without the gaslighting.

3) Zed. A real sniffer. But seriously, none of this would have happened without imprinting, since Yoshi's line of work is different from Zed's, and the second always tries to protect the first when the first doesn't need protection and can protect himself. Zed would be perfect for me personally, since I like his personality and his needs. He's also the cutest one here.

4) Razix. He's too vulgar for Yoshi. Yoshi and Razix's relationship in the story was almost a disaster when Razix decided to jump ship with Yoshi. What's a crew without a pilot? However, Yoshi changes Razix's nature, as he switches from spontaneous affairs to imprinting. At the time, it seemed to me that Razix was better suited to the other candidates' routes. He wouldn't have been right for me, although he could have convinced me to have an affair.

5) Loro. Well, he didn't even appear that often in his own route, but nevertheless, relationship with him was almost the only one that lasted longer than with the others. I finished him last. For both me and Yoshi, he seems more like a father figure or a mentor. Yoshi's line of work doesn't intersect with his at all, nor does mine. When his wife was mentioned in the story, I felt terrified.

I read this novella fairly quickly after completing one of the candidates. Since everyone had the same plot conditions, most moments could be skipped without rereading. However, some characters had issues with others. These crews are supposedly family to each other, but their relationships are still too intense. If they were just a team, their intense conflicts could be overlooked, but this isn't a team, it's a crew. Crews can't and shouldn't have conflicts, especially ones that lead to fights.

I like this novella, but for me, the behavior and traits of some characters here are too off-kilter and seem to change depending on your choices.

I want to give a spoiler to explain what I think is wrong here and what I will change.

Nasir's behavior.

If you choose Kol, the walkthrough reveals that Nasir loved Kol as a partner, not as a brother. However, if you choose Nasir, you learn that Nasir enjoys being on top and has a kink for Yoshi's small size and the role of a daddy-boss.

Kol's behavior.

When choosing him, it turns out he had his eye on Yoshi from the first time he met him and has a kink for Yoshi's small size. He always has a positive opinion of Yoshi. However, when choosing Zed, Razix, or Loro, he's categorically against Yoshi on the ship.

Sharp jealousy and a fight for "territory" around all candidates.

As I said earlier, the relationship seems illogical after two days, but nevertheless, the candidate character will immediately experience severe jealousy if anyone interacts with Yoshi.

Yoshi's tastes and behavior.

It makes sense that he would be flirtatious or shy when, in one of the first dialogue choices, he talks to the Union Commander. Another question is why he's so against the pirate, but not against a two-day relationship? Especially when interacting with Razix. (His jokes aren't just flirting for the sake of humor - he doesn't gaslight.) So I find this odd, even if he's simply disgusted by the very fact of  a "pirate-lover".  When the candidates first met Yoshi, they were ready to kill him. (He also had no need, but he had the choice of an aggressive response at that moment.)  Simply relying on the first impression and the fact that the characters are bounding together at first glance - it does not look very logical and friendly.

Personally, I would increase the time of character interaction from 2 days to at least a week. It might also be nice to have a 2-on-1 relationship here, but of course, here everyone specifically falls in love and gets involved 1:1. It's just that if the plot were twisted like in some kind of dorama, then it would be entirely possible to stretch out the time and make the conflicts more logical, but here it turns out that the characters are getting angry at each other over all sorts of trivial nonsense. For example, instead of forcing Yoshi to choose one candidate right away, everyone should connect with him through individual tasks that still pop out form part of the overall plot. 

How I see that:

First, Yoshi repairs the promised Kol's Auto-Cooker and cooks food with him, discussing relationships with different races while not forgetting about muscle flexing and, of course, the "half-break". Then, he repairs the doctor's beds in the infirmary while discussing family and past relationships, and giving that joyful hug afterward. Then, Yoshi goes to Nasir to return the tools and helps replace the core with those strange poses and movements, not forgetting to compliment the smell of sweat... At pre-last, he's taken by Zed to replace the ship's gun and practice shooting a little so that Zed can sniff off Yoshi. And last - Yoshi taken away by. Razix for diagnostics and scanning with flirting.  

After all these interactions, it would be logical to give Yoshi a choice. It's just that if you look at what we have now, there were no initial steps to establish a relationship. The characters were forced to get closer and fell in love with each other purely physically. 

Already in the process, after the choice, the characters would simply talk and interact with each other without a booklet of questions that immediately tells everything about the character. Overall, it's a good novella. I liked some of the jokes.

For me, this novella was already sad from the very beginning of the playthrough. The ending just finished me off even more. But not critical in a bad way.

I don’t like developing relationships through alcohol and other similar nastiness. However, the characters here are already over 40 years old to do such nonsense. Okay, you can close your eyes to this... But in principle, the relationship between JJ and Walter is strange for me. I'm not talking about the subordinate/boss trope. 

Spoilers...

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The reason for Walter's crush was off-screen and described as a long-standing attachment to JJ's character. Is the reason for JJ's love - the sudden appearance of something cheerful in his life? Like, I understand that there is apathy and depression in life, but dude had a bunch of sex partners and strange situations. I see this crush as just a random thing for him. Although it is very strange that JJ never had fun at parties, if he only needed to get drunk to have fun. And if the problem is only in the partner’s personality, then that’s also strange. I don't mean that this made the novella bad, I just felt like it was left unsaid. I will conclude once again - I believe that Walter became JJ's joy and happiness in life, but how it happened was unsaid or not formulated correctly, so it seems like Walter is just JJ's fling (especially with some games).

Their relationship was short on JJ's part and so Walter's loss, from his perspective, seems more like something hurtful and unfair than something too bitter and heartbreaking. On top of all this, the fact that JJ had a bunch of partners in the past is offensive and this is mentioned more than once. This is already to the point that I think that because of such a wealth of experience Jj's, what is needed for him is not the same thing (another sex), but hugs and romance. Fortunately, this is shown here in long kisses and dates with a hyperbola in price.

This novel made me think about my values. For example, if I found myself in a situation where my love object - the only ray of happiness in my life - died, then I would definitely not be able to live on. I would die of grief on the spot. This is how attached I am to my values... It hurt me that Walter ended up dying, especially because the novella is told from JJ's perspective without JJ on screen, making it feel like Walter is speaking to the reader.

A good novella, but very sad.

Im not medium, seer or priest to see the future, but I kind of thought that the main characters would end up like that. More precisely, I even counted on it.

Spoilers. Gosh, gifs from Berek07 is good that I understood better what was happening there. I am not a fan of sports and fights, so I did not fully understand how it was.

Personally, I didn't see enough communication between the characters. I just see that they often crossed paths and had their fetishes for each other. For me, this is a very strange relationship, where partners fight painfully and after the first heart-to-heart talk - go to have sex and agree to do it in public. When Lyra spoke about solving the problem, there was no solution at all. That's why she's not a lioness, but a bitch fr.

In any case, the final picture was very tasty. "Took his prize"~ He is belong to him now. 😋😋😋😋

I hope that maybe gifs from Berek07 would be used or at least be pined.

Also I thought maybe Demons looks like that " (Pinterest) "

I'm glad for you if you've never been afraid of your orientation since childhood. This moment is life moment. Only with a happy move to a very favorable environment can I agree that this is an experience that is only possible in games. About jobs I said only truth. 

I don't know about routes, but I was just trying to be kind and grateful to Brad, so I listened to him and didn't act like an impulsive teenager.

Ahh uhh ohh I like it but have to complain. 

Bullying/humiliation and fear-disclosure are life's things. When people around you tell you from childhood that you are the "world's evil". I cried at these moments. 

Stereotypes and behavior patterns are too exaggerated for me. Like movements and gossip. Also I think that in some places the dialogues were very rude. Like telling someone on the second day of meeting them, “I didn’t expect you to cook well,” and "I expected better". It just seemed to me that the main character was shy and kind, but his speeches like that kill everything.

I would argue with some aspects of the choice. It's only in a story like this that working for a company without pay is choosing a man for your bed. In reality, the company will load you up as a volunteer as much as possible, sometimes throwing in work that requires qualifications. And if you refuse the job, they will tell you to leave, since they are supposedly trying to gain work experience for you. Honestly, work experience at jobs is not really a question of past careers, but rather how a person connects with a job. 

I think I've said my piece. It was difficult to read on the phone in vertical mode.

Oh yes, men you can touch. Yum yum BUT WAIT... There is one more choice or u can choose all at once???? It's certainly FUN, but it's strange if you have a relationship with one person and lie with everyone.

I mean you couldn't send a message because of the Glitch. it was a joke .

If bipeds existed before the catastrophe and lived with humans, then this means that they could interbreed with each other - Therefore, sometimes children can be born with the traits of their ancestors.

 I don't think Glitch was waiting for Alex specifically, but Alex just stumbled upon him. Alex could have also stumbled upon another demon, like Glitch.

Bruh, I sure it was GLITCH!!!

But, maybe u should add spoiler thing, idk.

Gaia... I don't know what it is too. When I first meet it from story I tho it was one of the demons creatures. The novel doesn't directly show what demons look like, but there is a demon in one frame. If you brighten the frame of Aeron's house when its burn, you can see the demon in full growth. They don't look like mechanisms, but rather like nightmarish creations. I thought they looked more like the robots from "The Incredibles" but they definitely don't. I thought that magic here is like radio emission, but that doesn't explain teleportation, so let it still be something supernatural. I also think that Gaia can be like a guard.

Why its kinda hidden, I didn't add some filters. Im sure its Glitch!

I won't care how the novel ends. I'm ready for anything. I'm also not sure Glitch will be able to manipulate Loken that quickly, especially when Alex and Byte are around. Honestly I don't understand Glitch's motive for being "God". I thought he just wanted a physical shell of meat and flesh for all his fellows. 

Mylo can't be with a demon if that's what you mean. 

I believe that there will be no good ending here, but in an ending like this - no.

The idea is good, but for a second...

Spoiler.

Loken has nowhere else to live. His village has become a Blackzone. Drevora (did I spell it right???) cannot be a leader without people. So Loken will lose his authoritative protection because of this. He lost his father figure. Takshi and Nitro are friends in some sense, but not a holding factor. He gets very attached to things, and now everything has been taken away from him. If Alex dies, so does Loken too. He can't stand it. Alex also from his side. He depends only on Loken now. He has a student, but this student was traumatized so early that he completely changed his opinion about everything around him. That's why Alex has a strong connection only to Loken and Byte.

I can believe in Byte's death, since he has a demonic origin and if the goal is to destroy Soulcreek, then Byte will also cease to exist. Otherwise, everyone will die from loneliness and apathy.

Alex will lose his cheats for ignoring biological needs from Byte's death and will be very upset, but will be able to live on with Loken. Loken won't care about Byte after the end of the battle, and if he does, then not so upset as if lost father figure.

zip means that this is a file in an archive. You can open it and see what folders are there. Although most likely it just needs to be renamed from zip to apk.

Типа Джозеф сам по себе имеет суицидальные наклонности. Окончательно он бы себя добил если бы гг умер. Ридж после смерти Старейшины может держаться только за Джозефа и даже где-то проскакивало, что он тоже убьет себя и всю деревню. Как-то так... 

Так в руте Джина Лео и Коку снова сходятся.

Ридж работает на ферме не для возврата доверия, а для возмещения того, что награбили его родители.

Рунана по животу? Почему не сиськи? Всё равно мало! Это будет больновато со спины его обнимать. 😖 Вот тот момент с Джозефом и им там... Мне стало очень интрегующе, если бы гг был "шлюховатым" (как в каких-то других работах, где гг супер магнитная-шлюшка) - типа сказал бы в тот момент на флирт(? он вроде всегда серьезный, но это депрессия)-шутку Джозефа что-то вульгарное... Я за разнообразие по согласованию.

В руте с Джином Лео не помогал. Его "верю тому что вижу" слишком расплывчато, в особенности, когда гг после отравления с симптомами гоняет по судам и терпит за 2 дня годовой стресс. Ещё и за несколько дней до отравления проваливается через пол. Вроде обсуждали братья с гг крепкость людей по сравнению с вивернами, но чёт всё равно он забил на это, считая, что гг сделал мало. Газлайтющий химбо, которые надеется, что его флирт будет всех пугать и смущать, а не будет принят и отражен. 

После уже финальной моей оценки для себя - мне лучше всех подошел бы Рунан (хобби/работа, менталитет), а хуже - Джозеф (глубокая депрессия и апатия с двух сторон, которая бы закончилась массовым суицидом)😋😋😋

but he is like brother to MC...

OMG this VN is so good! Haha, I like Maёva's lullaby "Тили-тили-бом" 😈🎵🎶. Some jokes made me laugh at night, like MC's wet dream about Xiao.  Also I like the way how each of the relatives raised Xiao. (I enjoyed watching him get bullied 😋) I mean its funny tho and he is like "help me, Im big smart silly bear plush 😣))) 

No, no, no! I do LOVE VN! Im just sad about cheating while married. 😥 If this were an open relationship in marriage, then I think there would be no point in hiding the real name. 

Yeah, the story is short... but...

OH. MY. GOD... IT WAS SOO EMBARRASSING and confusing feelings (?) 💫💫💫🤕

Spoilers... I just can't not to do that Im soo excited and confused (?????!)🔥

The MC became the reason why the man cheated... I am against cheating in marriage. This made me angry and sad... It's just horrible to do that in a relationship, especially if there are children.😡😡😡😤😭

Daddy turned out to be not only a daddy, but also a dad... I don't see anything wrong with the fact that a dad ended up fucking his own biological son... It also sounded terrible... But what is happening here is not heterosexual incest. I think this is okay... I'm going to die now... It sounds even more creepy with each sentence. But I feel like it and this is my logical conclusions. 😶😶😶😶 I just met some people who didn't hesitate to kiss their relatives on the lips. 

I thought that they would cross paths on the second day, not the way it happened, but as if he turned out to be the main character’s uncle. It's like they were introduced to each other as relatives, but they already knew each other and were having fun.  The open ending with stars in the eyes of the main character did not give me hope that everything would be fine. It just looks like two divorces in the future. Two families each have a childs of their own... I just hope they don't say anything about sex to anyone anywhere. It's very difficult to think through the possible outcomes... Also a very suspicious bisexual nature... He doesn't cheat many times before, does he? Why he has that mind stuff?? 🤔🤔🤔

I find it strange that the MC asks for his phone number, especially if he knows that he has a daughter, and therefore a wife. Then, for some unknown reason, he gave the MC a number, but said a fake name. I understand that the MC is too much attached to him after good fun, but God, how the stars aligned for him that the first stranger he decides to lay eyes on and then fuck with - it turns out to be his biological dad. 

THIS IS WHY I DON'T BELIEVE IN THESE DATINGS THROUGH SEX, ESPECIALLY IN A PUBLIC PLACE WHEN YOU DON'T KNOW WHETHER YOU'RE FUCKING WITH A MARRIED PERSON OR NOT. 😠😡

I like this VN, but such an open ending and betrayal in marriage bothers me. The sex scene was very arousing and embarrassing. 

Oi, I forgot to mention. Why tho main attraction start to ask MC about his age again infront of MC's mom? He wants to be a couple with her again? Or to understand that he really fucked his own son? Im not sure that MC will have fun with him after that for a long time or ever. At best, he will just see him occasionally. It’s just unlikely that the MC’s mother would want them to see each other, although on the other hand, the MC is not a child and can be considered as separate family.

This vn is so adorable 😍 but on the other side is sad. I see main human personage as an ordinary xenophile. In the beginning if the main dragonman character was a normal human, then he wouldn't have caught the main human character's attention. His flirting is no different from the flirting of people in a bar as I see... The main human character is simply interested in him because of his race. Of course, later they will become closer mentally, but still... I'm just jealous 😔 I won't have a furry husband.

Oi, as mobile user I was struggling to find save button and almost think that it's have auto-save. I think it should be left expanded for mobile users.

Разработчик не несёт ответственность за перевод на русский язык. Как так плохо можно переводить, @N4h0b1n0 ??? Из Яндекс переводчика всё скопировано? Читаю диалоги, а они с ошибками и местами остаются на английском языке. Вечные женские и мужские глаголы тоже тут присутствуют. Попытка была видимо сделана в переводе, но вот именно, что - попытка-пупытка. Ладно бы единичные случаи опечаток, но подряд... Это кошмар. Пришлось дальше на английском читать, так как диалоги начинали сбиваться с пути своей искусственнностью. 

Есть Word, в который можно вставить весь текст и проверить на орфографию. На сколько помню, скрипты на этой платформе - прекрасно читаются и открываются для копирования в формате текстового документа... Просто нет слов. 

Hahahaha.
I don't really like this kind of violence, but it's somehow deserved. Although later it's too much. Why doesn't the prince ask to kill him?

I find it a bit strange - opportunity to decide what to do for other characters who are not the main character. I also don't see the point of the answer options in some places. I like the art, although I don’t fully understand the plot. Apparently this is just a relationship simulator, and only with one candidate... If people want to have some fun, then they need to be more modern and do it together. Room for one more.  😏😏😏😏

Перевод на русский вообще не оценил. Это точно русский? У меня нет вопросов к разработчику, так как я вижу кто переводил. Орфографические ошибки с опечатками и перевод ... Перевод такое ощущение, что будто сделан был через Яндекс переводчик, в котором вообще нет перевода синтаксиса предложений. Как-то на "абум" всё переведено было. Из-за этого диалоги выглядят, как те самые диалоги из учебника по английскому за начальные классы - слишком искусственными. Также, как минимум, текст можно было скопировать и засунуть в word или другой редактор с проверкой орфографии. Те же "ла"/"лась" в глаголах означающих, что действие было сделано девушкой - можно было бы автозаменой выборочно изменить на "л"/"лся", чтобы гг оставался мужского пола.  

Ещё я сравнил текст в диалоговых рамках с переводом и без... Как же предложения скачут... Очень тяжело читать из-за этого. Читаешь предложение до точки, а там оказывается опечатка и была запятая. В итоге причастный оборот превращается в отдельное предложение в новом фрейме.  Дополнительно проскакивают буквы из другого языка (так думаю оригинала, на котором говорит разработчик). Досадно конечно за перевод такой "кое-каковый", хотя в принципе "сохронить" можно и так, но лучше исправить.

Не знаю... Как-то всё равно не скибиди доп доп, когда он от гг отворачивается и долгое время обижается. В других роутах (а именно с Джином) он также себя плохо проявляет.

Я прошёл все роуты. Вот бы их можно было защитить на послезавтрашнем ВКР...

Топ мужей этой новеллы (как вообще кратко назвать эту новеллу??) по моему мнению и объяснениям:

1. Джин. Отношения с ним помогают решить его проблему из прошлого без создания новых проблем. Внешний вид позволяет без проблем и препятствий засасывать и трогать его 😆😏 Он один из персонажей, с которым если не взаимодействовать, то он никак не изменится и его проблема останется с ним. Отвержение гг им после инцидента было очень аппатичным из-за его характера, но логичным (ну типа если поставить себя на его место)

2. Рунан. Отношения с ним решают его проблему с одиночеством и недопониманием. Новые проблемы появляются немного, в связи с тем, что он единственный повар на всю деревню... но его подменяет его друг(?) на некоторое время (пусть и так, что лучше бы вообще ничего не делал). Внешний вид не везде позволяет его лапать, но засасывать всё ещё можно и нужно 😏😏😏😏 Также, как Джин - если с ним не взаимодействовать, то он не изменится, хотя не до конца понятно в каких отношениях он со своим другом(?), так как тот может спокойно ходить и готовить в доме Рунана, но чёт не очень похоже, что они сошлись бы. Отвержение гг им было болезненым, но он должен быть сильным (так как теперь у него больше обязанностей), поэтому быстро понимает, что гг не причем и старался как можно сильнее сделать всё как можно лучше.

3. Джозеф. Отношения с ним помогают вылечить его депрессию с детства и проблему с одиночеством, хотя вроде как если ничего и не делать с ним, то ему достаточно Риджа как семья, но всё равно этого как-то мало при том, что он постоянно себя травит... Внешний вид позволяет трогать, трогать, трогать его везде 😏😏😏 Хотя с поцелуями может быть проблема из-за шипов, но не было на этом акцента. Очень сложно осознавать, что он и Ридж живут как изгои, которые пашут для всей деревни, а все всё равно продолжают на них косо смотреть. Если не брать их во внимание, то лучше полностью не замечать, что очень трудно. Отвержение им гг было не просто аппатичным, но и депрессивным. Если бы я был гг, то это бы привело к двоеному суициду, если не к тройному и смерти всей деревни, так как никто там будто бы больше не работает в сфере сельскохозяйства.

4. Ридж. Отношения с ним помогают ему найти его арт-стиль(? типа того) и решить проблему с другими жителями (да-да, Гару). Внешний вид позволяет трогать и засасывать его везде 😏 Если с ним не взаимодействовать, то он вроде как справляется со всем сам, кроме артов (хотя как знать, всему своё время). В ветке с Коку он находит общий язык с Гару. В ветке с Джозефом он становится лучшим другом гг. Типа так он справляется с проблемой общества других жителей. Если вообще никак не видеться с Риджем, то думаю, что он итак когда-нибудь смог бы поговорить с Гару через Коку (Коку сам по себе хорошо решил проблему Риджа, даже без вмешательства гг) Отторжения им гг было не долгим, он оказался умнее и более стойким, чем он спойлерил в ветке Джозефа. 

5. Коку. Отношения с ним помогают ему? Его отцу... Отношения с ним помогают его отцу понять, что его сын уже давно не аленький цветочек, а тот самый цветок из "Становясь волшебницей"))) Ну честно, но мне нравится... Если гг с ним не встречается, то Коку прекрасно снова сам по себе сближается с Лео. Наличие гг рядом с ним только помогают ему понять что у него есть психическое расстройство. Внешний вид позволяет трогать его везде, но проблемно засасывать 😭😏 Оторжение им гг было странным, так как он имеет психологическое расстройство. По-сути отторжения во все и не было будто бы. Наоборот это только сильнее привязало его к гг, но на тот момент это было ненормально.

6. Лео. Отношение с ним помогает ему решить проблему камингаута(????), ну может ещё проблему принятия, что бояться это нормально... Хотя обе проблемы решаются и без наличия в его жизни гг с помощью Коку. Внешний вид позволяет трогать и засасывать его везде, но его газлайтющий флирт убивает. В этом плане Джозеф и Коку намного лучше. Что будет с ним, если забрать Коку себе - ничего не сказано. Надеюсь, что в продолжениях это дополнят. Отторжение им было наиужасным и глупым опытом. Он верит тому, что видит, но продолжает "бояться" гг, чтобы потом вместе принять, что они оба боятся. Часть с Коку в этом роуте была только тяжёлой 

Я судил строго по изменениям в лучшую сторону и вообще влиянию на их жизнь через отношения с ними и наоборот. Также момент отторжения гг.

I know. 

Hohoh, "daddy pickle"))) Yes, it was "ah" moment, especially when the main character touched it. 

I really like Joseph. For me, he is in 2nd or 3rd place in the ranking of husbands in this game. In 1st place is of course Jin, and 2nd is Runan or Joseph because they have roughly the same problems with loneliness and responsibility for the whole village. Although Joseph is probably 3rd place, because if the main character were me with my mentality, then after Elder's death and Joseph's rejection and the desire to be left alone, I would have killed myself and judging from what happened next, Joseph would have finished himself off too. 😖😭

Мне тоже. Кроме Лео... Если бы в игре был не гг, а я, то я бы уже напал на Лео и как следует его вытрахал 🤗😋😊 даже будучи "податливым низом" (кайнда нот инту сленг).

Просто он единственный получается, кто рассеивается с начала до конца. Его тупое оправдание про страх мне вообще не зашло после его "флирта". А также его черта верить только тому, что он видит, но при этом всё равно злиться и отстроняться от гг. Хорошо прописал разработчик злость гг, но моя злость от этого так и не прошла. Лео - единственный кого мне не было жалко, а просто хотелость заткнуть, привязать к кровати и насиловать 👁️👁️, припоминая каждый "флирт" (например, таже сцена на водоёме) и личную боль... До чего доводит чтение ночью до 4 утра...

Ладно, теперь это Коку и Джин... 

Коку будто смесь Лео и Джина в отношениях. (В хорошем смысле) Как же он активно берёт гг, но увы его папка застал их на утро вместе через окно... Почему... Я сюда влетел на этом моменте. Сексов не будет!(((

Он весь в мать! Хахахахаа))) 

Я понял что за "пекло" имелось в виду. Ещё и "клетка верности "... 

Спойлер был не для тебя, а для людей, которые додумаются перевести то, что мы пишем. ХД

"Правильный" я имел в смысле того, что гг так поможет решить более глубокие проблемы. Например, кошмары Джина и одиночество Джозефа, типа так. У того же, например, Лео проблема личная связана только с... камингаутом? который он всё равно проходит даже без гг. 

Мне стало интересно как в будущем "отполируют" дни и сюжеты, так как пока что видеть Лео, который в начале был против того, чтобы Геральд вытаскивал гг из реки, а затем сам присосался к гг и спас охотника, который его ногу порезал... Я так понимаю судебная разборка у всех одинаковая? Ладно, подождём увидим.

А почему  "признавайся"?((( Спойлеры...

...

Наверное, Джин. Я прошел пока что только его и сейчас его брата допрохожу. Немного не правильно в моем случае уже выбирать кого-то, когда ещё не прошел остальных, но просто я чувствую, что сюжет с Джином будет более правильным, так как главный герой помогает ему справиться с кошмарами (поможет, наверное до конца после завершения разработки). Так-то у меня Daddy issues, и я думал выбрать "огурчика"-Джозефа, но в итоге решил начать именно с Джина, даже не с его брата. (Брат его меня честно выбешивает. В сюжете с Джином он лучше показывается в недолюбливании ГГ банально своей глупостью, в то время, как в своем сюжете он видел всё, что случилось, своими глазами, но всё равно отстраняется от ГГ) Другие кандидаты кроме Коку - слишком прямолинейно намекают на секс, но не сексятся сразу (((((())))))))(()()()(  Также в сюжете с Джином Лео и Коку сойдутся. Джин при смерти Старосты немного ввел меня в апатию своим отстранением, что будь я на месте гг, то, приняв всю ненависть его, ушел бы тихо и убился, как гг и сделал при неудачном суде.
Может сюжет с Джозефом тоже будет более правильным, так как у того проблемы как и у Джина - в настоящем. Пройду - узнаю, пока что я предполагаю, раз правильно понял суть менталитета гг.

Так мало хороших новелл, как эта... По пальцам пересчитать можно. Не говоря уже о том, что в некоторых новеллах даже английского нет или есть, но с ошибками такими, что я не понимаю что читаю. Некоторые вообще берут очень неудачное оформление, что текст режет глаза или его слишком много для одного кадра, что больше приходится скипать, чем читать... Я рад, что тут такого нет и есть возможность убрать вспышки, так как читаю я новеллы в основном только ночью.  С каждой хорошей новеллой, где есть вкусные арты и персонажи - я становлюсь всё больше ксенофилом. 

На самом деле мой больший любимчик - кот-домохозяйка после того, как его Старейшину убили. Надеюсь, что можно будет принять его предложение и убить как-то адмирала или сделать так, чтобы адмирал умер. Это должно помочь котейке.

Thank you for your hard work 🙏

I saw that message about life's problems. I hope everything works out for you and everything will be great! I really enjoy your novel. I understand age restrictions and the concept of NSFW. I just felt like this tag was posted too early due to development then. Anyway, thank you again for your hard working. 

Thanks for explaining. I was just very confused and thought what I wrote above or that the admiral's aim is lame. This then explains why he shouted his insane phrases.

Hehe 😊 I had no doubt. 

It's just that in the beginning everyone was too direct about relationships. It confused me a bit.

I didn't quite understand one scene.

Spoiler.

When there was a trial, the admiral wanted to shoot the main character. In the plot with Jin, Jin pushed the main character away? How the Admiral shot Elder? If I understood correctly, Elder was sitting behind the main character and if Jin hadn't pushed him, the bullet would have simply hit the main character?

Hahaha, hah...

At the beginning and from the description I thought that there would be something like a harem. Especially because of the dialogues with characters who openly "get into the main character's pants.". But alas, the 8th day of dispersal has arrived. I realized that this is not about a harem, but a choice of one of 5...

I got through to the story with Jin. It seems to me, even more, I feel that whoever I choose will still come to the trial of the admiral. But nevertheless, the plot with Jin should be the most suitable. I will answer myself later after going through the story with other candidates. 👀

Throughout the story there are a couple of problems for me... I don't understand the mentality of the main character. He has his own thoughts about some incidents, but still... I can't quite understand what he must think about this, and in some places I don't agree with his thoughts. I see him as a person who doesn’t understand what he wants and does, but he wants it and does it. 💫💫💫 

I like the housekeeper at the beginning and at the end. Especially at the end. 👁️👁️

I don't quite understand what is considered NSFW in the novel? That the characters are swimming in the river near the waterfall in just swimming trunks? Honestly, I didn't understand this. The adult moments that I encountered in game were: a little blood; a jerk-off scene without much visuals and description (just its presence); talk about sex; murder; housekeeper at the end (I would like to help him realize his dream).

Why -5 ? Oh! I forgot to mention, I did it as submissive bottom guy 😈😈😈 He was tasty prey after some hours of reading guides and etc how to deal with him.

Anyway, after that I accepted defeat on his territory and remained with him as a toy. So this is one of the possible endings.

Bruh, -3 votes? Main character literally said to yourself go ask Arion or Feliar.

Good, good 😈😈😈😈😈

I'm proud of myself. I fucked and raped Sabal brutally. I need more, but he's hiding from me.

Go to Arion (horsy-boy) and ask him. He will accept the quest. 

Dude, just read what characters say.

U can feed him beast cum and something else which make him horny 😈😈😈😈

I do mean use them for movement non for sex. I checked the distance time of my different companions and there is no difference whether I walk without them or with them - it is the same.

 I don't understand at all why they added the ability to have sex with animals... Well, at least it's all within the limits of the fact that they fuck the main character, and not he them.

I thought that with the help of the love potion it would be possible to trigger a special scene with Sabal, because no matter what I chose (defeat from loss of HP or from maximum lust) He always beats the main character brutally. So there hasn't been a plot line done with him yet?