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It's cute seeing you replying to me that I reply to you.

Thank you for trying out Russell 5. He's my hidden gem no matter how many times people call him boring.

"A boring room for a boring man." Uwu

Also, yes. I edited that Laila feedback with subtle pettiness but I wasn't trying to make anyone feel bad.

As long as people say sorry and listen there's no harm done in a genuine mistake.

People calling them token irked me.

Haha, if anything now Cerberus deserves even MORE head pats

You're fine. This is meant to be a place for discussion, so I do encourage you to let your thoughts out.

Anyway, going back to Patrice... Him trying to overcome his own weaknesses is kind of a priority. That's where his arc is focusing on. Day 5 was less about that, though. We have Joel and Patrice having a heart to heart, him working on the SSS and showing us his boxing skill.

Me? I didn't do anything. I'm innocent.

I just tried, it works on my end. Maybe try a different browser if you're on pc?

Edit : removed drive link

There's nudity, but no porn. Violence and blood.

Usually I let all reviews go because everyone's entitled to their opinion but "There's no reason for these characters to already be horny for each other" you see things that don't really exist. It was platonic, without any attachment at all. You read their banter as romantic which is unfortunate on your part.

I think telling the reader some things up front is fine (and apparently not enough), what you don't want to do is dragging it. That's why I focused more one liners, removing them altogether would make the story feel too fast and confusing. I get that it's not really your cup of tea, but it gets the job done.

Yup, only some alternative scenes but 90% linear

Hey Blue, thank you for the INSANELY long review lmao.

I'll answer what stuck out to me, like, Chris is short of Christopher. It's not stated yet, but since you find it fitting, that's good.

Him failing to notice the ber is a result of multiple things, not just the hearing. Manfrey is distracting him and annoying him, then... The neck wound is pretty deep, he wouldn't expect the enemy to stand again. Check Manfrey's CG with the shiny chocha, you can see the open neck. Felt justified enough. He's more of a spy than a frontliner so I can see why this would happen.

Lastly, Moon Blade's name. Roar also wanted to change it, gave me a whole list but nothing really stuck out to me.

Moon Blade sounds nicer than Blade of the Moon, it gets too wordy. Also... You can't fit that in the display name. So DeviantArt OC it is and will be uwu

Ah yeah, the ESL. Bruh. Do I look native speaker to you? Both you and Golden told me no :( 

As long as you understand the story, label that good enough.

This one is the most creative FVN out of this MayWolf batch! There are no sprites, it's all "CGs" so to speak and everything's handmade, paper-like, very cool.

I was surprised by how heavy the game was then I quickly realized why haha.

Unfortunately the story wasn't exactly my cup of tea, I prefer when the wolf actually exists.

Ok, so... I ended up only sharing half of my real thoughts please Blue don't incinerate me. The story had to grow on me because I couldn't get into it right away, the hook is missing, making the beginning of the game a bit of a slog to get through, it felt as though nothing was happening (Even if we were in the middle of a war).

Then we got around the halfway mark where you picked things up and I started changing my mind, but I think this is mostly subjective, never really been into war scenarios.

But I need to be objective, this is a really good work. From the UI, to the writing, the sprites, the CGs, the music, the BGs. Everything comes together perfectly and does exactly what you wanted it to do.

The wolf reminds me of those stopmotion characters and I really liked it.

We discussed this a lot already on Discord so I'll spare the copy paste, but if somebody is reading this I recommend the game. It's enjoyable, even if it has a fair amount of issues that need fixing. Pacing, character motivations, and the stakes need to be adjusted and this game will be a lot better.

Hm. I'll forward this to the coder, but idk what could be causing it to freeze

Edit : we believe it might be the animated icon acting silly. We'll be posting a hotfix later.

I don't think it's the games fault, we tested it multiple times and nothing of the sort ever came up.

Ill let Raykyu know, I guess LMAO

Maybe 🫢

Haha, it's alright. I have planned more variants in those scenarios as well, hope you look forward to them ✨️

As soon as I wake up, I'll post in the morning. (Around 7 hours from this post)

In early patches, Id give 0, +1 or +2 to a choice, but I realized that it was getting too convoluted so all the latest patches give 0/0/+1 so, overall each choice is a +1 if it's the right one.

The score is a hidden mechanic that can only be seen in debug mode, but that's for coding nerds and I'm not one.

There are two endings. If you're getting the "try again" button at the end then you got the wrong one. If all 3 choices lead to that, it means your score isn't high enough, either give yourself max affinity or click the try again, it will adjust your score to give you a good ending.

Hello, we have nsfw scenes planned, but currently none are in the game.

They will be pretty obvious so that the reader can decide to skip them or not.

Is something wrong?

Sorry about that, the burden of having so many routes comes with downsides

Nvm. Immediately got two scam comments, so I swapped to community type just to check if they still comment.

Clyde's route

Two for now, yes.

You will be asked with who you want to spend time with

It's not as complicated as it looks. You'll find that it's surprisingly linear and if you want a guaranteed good ending you can use the extra section.

Still pending

Hello, thank you so much for enjoying TFN! This storyline is left open-ended on purpose to connect it and finish the whole arc inside Moonlight Castle.

Yes, I have plans to pick Oliver back up.

I... unfortunately can't answer that, sorry.

I have estimated 14 days, but could be more/less depends on how the story naturally evolves.

I COULD REALLY USE A WISH RIGHT NOW

The itch moderators marked this game as sensitive from Day 1. It's gonna take a bit before the restriction is lifted.

Hello, I have two payments pending over 6 months old. Sent ticket, but received no answer  (278717) 

That's Night 5. It begins as soon as I complete the day cycle.

You definitely brought a lot of good points and I agree many of the issues stem from having to squish the story together to fit the word count. I did mention this before, but I thought 20k was the actual limit and my word doc told me 19.9k (which strangely turned to 18k in post). So... there's that, but if you enjoyed the story, that's the most important thing!

And you're right. Everyone's mean to Ryan uwu

He'll be back, promise 

Teach me everything but coding LMAOOOOO. I tried fixing it, didn't work.