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I've made two games from the same (with a few additions) base of images, which makes for a perfect test ground.

Simple question- which lands the best?

https://jay-650.itch.io/thismeansrobbery

or

https://jay-650.itch.io/this-means-war

The war (battle royale) one:The robbery one:

Note: the story is completely different- I was initially thinking of overwriting the first with the second, but I figured it'd be better to run an A/B test by having two.

Note 2: Figured it's too self promotion for the general discussion.

I think that's a million dollar question that nobody has the full answer to. From what I know:

1- Constantly improve it (good games multiply the effect of marketing)

2- Once its good enough promote it on as many platforms as allow it, and do so consistently (haven't really got to this stage yet though)

Thanks for this - I'll try to make as many of these changes as I can.

I'd like to know:

What's broken in the homepage?

What's missing?

What makes the game boring?

What would make the concept cooler?

etc

Basically I'm looking for how to make a V2 that's way better.

It's https://jay-650.itch.io/this-means-war

(Almost forgot to add the link)

Hello community, I figure there's a niche or two for VN's that aren't dating simulators, but I don't know where they lie. So what do you think? What concepts or themes would you like to see explored in a game?

P.S I'm new to the forum here- I think this is the right place to post this