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Wow, you really got triggered, huh, ¿dog with no bone? I complain about the game because that's what reviews are for. If you can't handle criticism, you have no right to voice your opinion. People like you should be banned from the internet for your lack of patience, your inability to stomach criticism, your immaturity, and your ineptitude haha

I understand the concept of using a cliché cuz it's interesting, but come onnn give the stereotype at least one contradiction. Personality diversity is everything, I'm serious. I hope you improve that part of your game. And as for being rude, take it however you like, but keep in mind that I didn't mean to offend you

ignore her, the girl is 30, she's probably a basement dweller lmfao

She didn't even deny not having friends, lmao I can't believe this

 I swear, I've left worse comments than this! But look at it however you like, I didn't mean to be aggressive.

Nah, she isn't racist. She's probably just a loner or smt

suit yourself ig

just because something is free doesn't mean I can't judge it. There's no way you can be so xenophobic just because of a game!! I also know Spanish, and I bet that, despite everything, I write it much better than you do. I played it, I didn't like it, I reviewed it. The creator opened the comments so people could write about it. come on, learn to handle some criticism!

lmao they didn't mean any harm, they just can't straight up tell you how pathetic you sound

I agree so much with what you said!!That’s exactly what I mean and complain about. I don't like bad character writing, it ruins the narrative. We can all improve that, and yet the creator decided to overlook it. He has the right to do so, just as I have the right to complain, I don't like it. And regarding English titles, of course many popular games do it, but it seems so bland to me that they keep doing it... So many languages, even the creator's native one, can yield interesting titles, but no one makes an effort, that's annoying too.

There's a very clear difference between a cliché and a satire, you're referring to satire, but that's not the case. I said their characters are clichés because their designs are boring, deal with it. And to answer your comment, I don't just like novels, I adore them. And if I don't like one, I simply say so.

I am hopeful that what you are telling me is genuine, but either way please try to improve your spelling, it is really awful.

The story is interesting, I rarely see an MC with her own unique design rather than a generic one, but that's the only good thing. English name but the game is in Spanish? You got my hopes up. And then with the typical character tropes, femboy, emo, nerd... how boring. Add some spice! All you change is the hair, clothes, and poses. They're all duds! At least give them an original personality. I don't mind fan service, but you can't improve if you don't open your mind at least a bit, everything is so cliché.

I gave it a try and the story is actually pretty intriguing! The pacing is great and it gets straight to the point, but some of the writing falls apart logically. Even crazy, reckless scenarios need some grounding. Why doesn't the main character freak out when seven-foot-tall clowns with fangs climb onto their balcony? "Because they're hot" doesn't really cut it when they just met less than a week ago. I’ll cut it some slack since it’s still a work in progress, but the character reactions need a lot of work.

Now, for my biggest critique: circus history is incredibly rich! A quick search will give you endless inspiration. Right now, the direction feels a bit like a rushed Lore Olympus webtoon move, but honestly, even flatter. I know the plot is based on a well-known story, but there are so many creative and diverse designs you could have explored... right now, everyone kind of looks like the recolored Baldi meme.

Lastly, the voice acting is honestly pretty bad and tough to listen to at times. I really hope you guys can fix this and smooth everything else out in future updates!

I liked that it was somewhat long, many demos don’t even have that. But it's very noticeable how you copied the programming from Nightbound and basically traced the background from Freak Circus. Add to that the fact that the Spanish script has a lot of spelling mistakes. I understand not having perfect spelling, but it's pretty weird that the English translation is almost flawless. So it's one of two things: either you're completely better at a foreign language than your native tongue, or you used AI.

Then there's what I dislike the most: removing the back button. Some games have a reason for doing this, but this one doesn't. They only do it to stretch out the playtime, which is annoying and tedious. Why should I have to save at every single choice if I can just go back a few seconds? I hope everything improves in the next update.