The story is interesting, I rarely see an MC with her own unique design rather than a generic one, but that's the only good thing. English name but the game is in Spanish? You got my hopes up. And then with the typical character tropes, femboy, emo, nerd... how boring. Add some spice! All you change is the hair, clothes, and poses. They're all duds! At least give them an original personality. I don't mind fan service, but you can't improve if you don't open your mind at least a bit, everything is so cliché.
There's a very clear difference between a cliché and a satire, you're referring to satire, but that's not the case. I said their characters are clichés because their designs are boring, deal with it. And to answer your comment, I don't just like novels, I adore them. And if I don't like one, I simply say so.
I don't know why there's so much complaining. The only weak point I see in the game is how superficial the personalities are that they use to define the three characters. Elian especially—he's supposed to be goth, but the first thing I see is a KISS poster and a very flat, slightly alternative personality.
And as for the language, don't even bring it up. Most games are in English, and a lot of them barely even have a Spanish translation. So if you don't like it, maybe go play something else.
I agree so much with what you said!!That’s exactly what I mean and complain about. I don't like bad character writing, it ruins the narrative. We can all improve that, and yet the creator decided to overlook it. He has the right to do so, just as I have the right to complain, I don't like it. And regarding English titles, of course many popular games do it, but it seems so bland to me that they keep doing it... So many languages, even the creator's native one, can yield interesting titles, but no one makes an effort, that's annoying too.
I understand your frustration, and it's completely normal to feel that way sometimes. You have every right to share your opinion, that's true. However, I think that instead of presenting it as a complaint, you could perhaps make it as a kinder suggestion. It's often easier to encourage people to do their best through constructive feedback rather than criticism.
Personally, I really admire visual novel creators. Programming, designing, creating characters, and building an entire story can't be as easy as it might seem from the outside. Just a suggestion!;p
Omg,if you don´t like it,don´t play it. Nobody want your opinion if you´re going to be rude. Nadie te ha preguntado lo que piensas, encima de que eres un gringuito que simplemente quiere joder y molestar a los creadores por el simple hecho de que algo esta en español, HAY MUCHOS JUEGOS EN INGLÉS que puedes jugar, tipo, vete a otro lado y ya! Nadie te fuerza a jugarlo, encima de que es gratis, y que la persona detrás de este buen trabajo trata de hacerlo bien y sin bugs... es demasiado grosero, solo no vuelvas a jugarlo Y YA.
just because something is free doesn't mean I can't judge it. There's no way you can be so xenophobic just because of a game!! I also know Spanish, and I bet that, despite everything, I write it much better than you do. I played it, I didn't like it, I reviewed it. The creator opened the comments so people could write about it. come on, learn to handle some criticism!
Pues no se nota que sepas español con solo el simple hecho de quejarte DE TODO, literalmente te estás quejando como un perro sin hueso solo pq es una historia muy "cliché", si no te gusta PUES NO LO JUEGUES Y YA, hay más titulos y TODOS son en inglés. Tú eres el xenofobico por el simple hecho de q un simple juego tenga un nombre en inglés, no soportan ver a un juego con algo así pq luego saltan como changos así q ya calmense y no lo jueguen Y LISTO.
Wow, you really got triggered, huh, ¿dog with no bone? I complain about the game because that's what reviews are for. If you can't handle criticism, you have no right to voice your opinion. People like you should be banned from the internet for your lack of patience, your inability to stomach criticism, your immaturity, and your ineptitude haha
Hi, I think your main problem was the characters' cliché personalities. Yes, they're clearly stereotypes, simply because some people like those specific character types. Do you like femboys? Well, there's one, go for him. Despite that, I think each character has their own backstory that gives them extra depth. The game isn't finished yet, so there's much more to see from the characters.
Regarding the name, yes, haha, I admit it. I used the English version simply because I thought it sounded a bit better. My apologies.
Finally, it's perfectly fine to have your own opinion about otome games. However, I think your comment came across as a bit harsh. Constructive criticism is always welcome, but expressing it more kindly could help avoid discouraging other creators.
I understand the concept of using a cliché cuz it's interesting, but come onnn give the stereotype at least one contradiction. Personality diversity is everything, I'm serious. I hope you improve that part of your game. And as for being rude, take it however you like, but keep in mind that I didn't mean to offend you