Hi, I think your main problem was the characters' cliché personalities. Yes, they're clearly stereotypes, simply because some people like those specific character types. Do you like femboys? Well, there's one, go for him. Despite that, I think each character has their own backstory that gives them extra depth. The game isn't finished yet, so there's much more to see from the characters.
Regarding the name, yes, haha, I admit it. I used the English version simply because I thought it sounded a bit better. My apologies.
Finally, it's perfectly fine to have your own opinion about otome games. However, I think your comment came across as a bit harsh. Constructive criticism is always welcome, but expressing it more kindly could help avoid discouraging other creators.