I gave it a try and the story is actually pretty intriguing! The pacing is great and it gets straight to the point, but some of the writing falls apart logically. Even crazy, reckless scenarios need some grounding. Why doesn't the main character freak out when seven-foot-tall clowns with fangs climb onto their balcony? "Because they're hot" doesn't really cut it when they just met less than a week ago. I’ll cut it some slack since it’s still a work in progress, but the character reactions need a lot of work.
Now, for my biggest critique: circus history is incredibly rich! A quick search will give you endless inspiration. Right now, the direction feels a bit like a rushed Lore Olympus webtoon move, but honestly, even flatter. I know the plot is based on a well-known story, but there are so many creative and diverse designs you could have explored... right now, everyone kind of looks like the recolored Baldi meme.
Lastly, the voice acting is honestly pretty bad and tough to listen to at times. I really hope you guys can fix this and smooth everything else out in future updates!