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I liked that it was somewhat long, many demos don’t even have that. But it's very noticeable how you copied the programming from Nightbound and basically traced the background from Freak Circus. Add to that the fact that the Spanish script has a lot of spelling mistakes. I understand not having perfect spelling, but it's pretty weird that the English translation is almost flawless. So it's one of two things: either you're completely better at a foreign language than your native tongue, or you used AI.

Then there's what I dislike the most: removing the back button. Some games have a reason for doing this, but this one doesn't. They only do it to stretch out the playtime, which is annoying and tedious. Why should I have to save at every single choice if I can just go back a few seconds? I hope everything improves in the next update.

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I personally thought this was what the quick load was for, since it acts similar to it but if it's to your preference and others more, perhaps it's good to bring it back then.

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hola! gracias por jugar el juego, como esta es una versión de prueba aun hay varios errores por corregir, con respecto a los errores en español. soy una desarrolladora totalmente independiente, al no contar con presupuesto ni equipo, ni mucho tiempo, me apoye con herramientas externas para la traducción, con el único objetivo de que mas publico pudiera disfrutar al juego. tendré en cuenta las sugerencias del publico para pulir mas el juego a futuro. muchas gracias. 

pd: las novelas que mencionas al inicio no tienen correlación alguna con mi proyecto. tanto el código como las ilustraciones fueron un trabajo hecho por mi desde 0

I am hopeful that what you are telling me is genuine, but either way please try to improve your spelling, it is really awful.