SO FUN!!!!
freshnewboy
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Hi. I've got free time and want to help out on a game. I'd prefer the project to be small and not the first game made/published by the dev. Paid is a plus but not necessary.
Experienced (bonus if I can bundle and list on itch to sell after)
- VN sprites
- Pixel art and animation
Inexperienced but interested for the experience
- Game UI
- All the graphic design bells and whistles- logo, itch page banners/backgrounds/et
Some vn sprite examples
I like your take on the theme! The tutorial was very easy and the first real level was extremely hard. I kept getting stuck in small rooms, and wish that being in a room with no one inside would replenish your meter a little bit! Also, there's some text overlapping in the tutorial that I noticed! I loved the idea, and the set dressing and models. Good job!
Played this with a friend of mine... I think! I didn't bother to do anything but slash, and was able to win 3 times. I like the limited color palette and the style. It would have been nice if the opponents and I looked different, there were times when I wasn't quite sure who was who. Over all, good job!
The controls were absolutely nuts, and I found myself falling on accident more than platforming on purpose. However, the animations and level art were so beautiful that I found myself not caring that much! When I fell far enough and got the animation of being on the ground with dizzy spirals above my head, it felt like the game was rewarding me for sucking, which I really liked. I can tell just how much effort was put into this and I'm very impressed, even if I was bad at it.
I love a good visual novel. It would have been nice if you customized renpy's default UI! I like the touching story, but I definitely think you should have had content warnings since the topics are pretty heavy. I love the bond between the sisters and the progression of the game. It didn't feel slow at all. Over all, good job!