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I got bored sitting through the intro.  

I also have a report.  Not really a bug, but a translation thing.  I was playing as a sexless loser who never used his powers by choice, and several times 'Step Sister' was left as 'Belle Soeur'.  Which, on another note, apparently translates into 'Sister-in-Law' according to google.  Does it mean both Step- and -in-Law?  It started at the first party, when I was asked what my biggest fantasy is, and that was the option, and it happens a few times afterwards

I also found that if you send Emilie and Rosie away at Mia's birthday party, and don't give her a present she calls us her beau-frere.  

Also, why is there an option to offer your body, but if you don't pick it he offers anyway?  You do so well making thing optional, but this feels a little forced.  Plus on the sexless route I still got the naked family scene, which is disappointing.

Well, just finished playing the newest version.  Big thumbs up.  I'm in two minds about the videos.  One the one hand, I did really like them, but I'd rather go without if it'll mean slowing down release times, you know?  I'd rather have more story and events.

On another note, I didn't much like the naked family thing at the end, with the mother.  I'd been hoping for her and the father to get back together.  I'm wondering, did it happen because I made Mia fearless during the birthday party, and if so is there an alternate scene, or does it happen regardless of player input?

Finally, is there any plans on some slave training scenes with Emilie in the future?  I kind of want to punish her for trying to sell-out Mia and make her into a better person.

So, first the good news.  Just finished playing, and the story and (most) characters are still good and enjoyable, for the most part.  Some minor things I dislike, but it's more stuff I personally just don't like rather than bad writing.  I do recommend this to anyone unsure if they want to play or not.  The story is good, there's some nice emotional moments, the girls are varied and meet a variety of tastes, so there's going to be someone you like.

And the neutral news is there's an error in the bowling scene where Scarlett and Val are with you, and you have to skip over it.

Edit to put the bad news under the line break.  Skip it if you're not interested.

Now the bad news.  After replaying it, and trying an alternate route with different choices, I've really started to notice how linear it is.  This isn't a game if you're looking for alternate events and meaningful choices that will affect the story.  It makes sense, since the time travel plot means the player can't really do anything since the outcomes of a possible choice are already made earlier in the story.  So just pick what you like, the only difference you make is 'get sex scene' or 'skip sex scene'.  Maybe it's just that you forgot certain choices, like I skipped interacting with Tiffany and Val in their yoga sessions, and yet I end up doing yoga with Tiffany anyway.  Or another one that sticks out is that I shut down the Krystal route right at the beginning, but even though she doesn't offer to cosplay for me, I still get the same screen saying she's gone off to get changed.  And I know this is purely subjective, but I utterly HATE Riley.  I hate her character, her appearence, and I'd be very happy if she died and wasn't in the story any more.  Her scenes are a boring slog to sit through.

Replying the game to see the new content and came up to getting Cadence as a slave.  Had to knock the rating down another star because oh my god it was so much worse than I remembered.  The MC sounds like Twitter.  If it wasn't for the fact that I know the rest of game is good when you get away from this, it'd just be unplaying.  Be honest, were you scared of having the game banned and censored if you didn't include that stuff?

I never thought to try it at first since usually for Renpy games I just right-click, or usean in-game shortcut.  Like how you put settings on the phone.  That was what I meant by 'usual Renpy stuff'.

Well, I found that if I hit Esc I can open the save screen, for anyone who didn't know.  Now to actually check out the game itself.

Ok, the game seems interesting, but I can't rollback, and more importantly I can't save.  And I don't mean I can't use old saves, to be clear, I mean I can't work out how to save.  The usual Renpy stuff isn't working.

Ahhh.  So it's the same content, just censored?

Why do I have a version called 'Beyond Humanity', and why is it censored?

So what's the deal with making the girls so unlikable?  It's a porn game, you're supposed to want them.  Terrible, one star.

Hey, great update.  I just got to the option about picking if I want to do the Daphne path, and the walkthrough mentions that there might be femdom on the way?  I just wanted to ask, will that be optional, or required with her?  Based on how the game is so far I'm guessing optional, but I just wanted to check.

Hey mate, just letting you know the Subscribestar link isn't working right now.

Neat.  ^_^

Yeah, I think a brightness toggle makes sense, and it's faster development-wise than making multiple versions of the same scene in this case.  

I have to agree with this.  What happened was really good, what I saw had some great funny and romantic scenes - and I admit I didn't get everything due to some choices being locked out - but it really felt like very little.  It certainly made me hungry for more, and I'm eagerly looking forward to Episode 9.

Hey, just went to buy this, and it mentioned a steamkey.  Is this only playable with Steam?  

Been playing this for a while, when does the actual story start?  Who is this woman I'm being forced to play as and why do I care about her?

Why the fuck is there a character like Zoe in the game?  Unless there's an option to shoot her in the face soon, I'm done with this game.

Not bad for a demo.  Hopefully there'll be some variation in characters and not just a constant parade of over-sized fatbags getting shoved in our faces.

Sorry about the 'lot of crap' comment, I'd been going through some things, and you didn't deserve that.

Ok, I just started and I have to ask: What was going through your head when you decided to make a porn game where the MC is anti-sex?

Just started playing, and wow the MC is a big pussy.  "Oh no, I get aroused by women, what a pervert I am!!"  

Yeah, so it is a hardware issue on my part, fair enough.  Would this mean that if I left it to load for a while it'd get smoother?  That it's just the initial load I have to be patient for?

If not, I look forward to the Part 2 fix you talk about.  Hope it's not too much extra work for you.

I mean, it's more than just 'a couple of lines', you give the player the option of seeing her or not, and then go 'whoops, sorry, that didn't count'.  But yeah, I was looking for a choice-based game rather than a kinetic novel, so fair play on removing that but it really left a bad impression on me.

And yeah, I don't much like yandere types, but when the red text came up saying you had a bad feeling about saying no, I assumed that was going to lead into the unexpected death and revival you mentioned, so that would've been fine.  

I will say you had nice models and designs, so you did good work there.

So, I know this is going to be a longshot, but can anyone offer advice on how to get this game to run?  It boots up really slowly, and I was wondering if there's anything I can configure.  It's probably just my system being old and crappy, but I'd really like to give this game a try.  I don't usually have a problem getting Unity games to play, so I thought maybe I could turn down the graphics or something.

Why did you force the player into a sex scene with the ex-girlfriend character when they don't want her?  I made it very clear on the phone that I didn't want anything to do with her, so why even bother giving the option if you're just going to railroad us like that?

Hey, I might've found a dialogue bug or mistake.  I was playing a virgin run, and at the end of the current version, when everyone was coming to the flat for the party, Joyce said we had sex even though we didn't.

Actually now that I type this, there was another time where the MC claimed to have used the anal toy when masturbating even though I didn't.

Yeah, I didn't even find the game until it was finished.  Guess I'll never get the full list.

Hey, I've played the story through a few times, and now I'm going in again to get the achievements.  How are we supposed to get the Founder one if we can't play an earlier version anymore?  This is on Windows.

So, it's not obvious, but I think what you're likely missing is that there are hidden files in the file explorer that can be revealed by clicking the 'show hidden files' button.  I didn't realise it would work properly either.

If that doesn't work, you just need to search through the emails with the right keywords.  I won't post them here due to spoilers, but everything you need is provided in the section.

Oh, and the security cameras, but I figure those are the obvious ones.

Yeah, I get you have a story to tell, but a basic opening would be nice.  Who are the characters?  What's their relationship to the MC?  Why am I supposed to care about them?

And I know about the name, but it's an old womans name.

Ok, this is definately one of the best games I've played on the site in a while, easily making my top 10 and I only played the free version.  You actually managed the make the MC likable rather than the usual pathetic virgin most  developers do.  Lily best girl and you'd better make sure she's ok by the end.

This was a nice start with some interesting beginnings.  But if I can suggest, you should add some kind of opening that actually explains who we are, who certain other characters are in relation to us and what's going on.  I spent most of the game confused as to how I should read things because I'm lacking context cues.

Also, Agnes is a terrible name, maybe consider renaming her.

So, you give a trigger warning about the MC, but all I've seen so far is a guy standing up for himself rather than just being the usual doormat you see in other games.  What exactly am I supposed to be triggered by?  

It's nice that you like them.  It's good to have a variety of characters for different people, but they should never be forced on the player.

Small bug report, in the achievements, it says I finished chapter 3 when it should be chapter 5.

So the game is about having maids, and the first order your MC gives is to to say don't call me Master?  What a dumbass.

Well, you didn't force the first sex scene with the Doctor on the player, so that's a plus.  Shame the game assumes it happens, but eh, still better than most developers.  Oh, also, no matter what you say in the description, that was an unconsenting mind control scene.