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Pros and cons are down below) Feel free to check out my video here:

Advantages:

1. OMG the premise and the style of the game are legendary! It's already obvious the game is of so high quality that attracted all the attention of big streamers, it's amazing!

2. Voice acting is impressive! It's another type of joy listening to all the puppets and their twisted stories.

3. The whole gaming experience is polished and just so much fun. The way the things are reminded me a lot of resident evil games but it's mostly a good thing.

Disadvantages:

1. I personally have found the inventory system a bit annoying but I dislike that system in re games as well. At the same time, I have nothing to suggest to make it better that would keep the inventory management crucial so ig I'll just get used to it XD

2. I also disliked so many loading screens between areas that reset the enemies as well. Now I do see that this is an important mechanic but maybe some areas could be a bit bigger including more rooms so it wouldn't be just as much loading.

Overall:

The demo seemed very polished and it was hard to find something I could pick on. I can not wait to see the complete project and I do believe it's going to be legendary and very fun! 10 puppets / 10!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my video here if you are curious (tho I played before the update)):


Advantages:

This is an amazing horror game! It's very creepy and I was afraid of getting jumpscared for the entire time playing. I was checking the game out before the update tho (in the video) and now the game even has 3 different endings which immediately adds replayability and the feeling like your choices mattered. Huge props!

Disadvantages:

In my humble opinion, when a project is inspired by something, it shouldn't fully replicate it. Maybe it would be nice to add something fresh to the Mandela Catalogue template like some other games did (for example "the mandela invasion"). But it doesn't make the game worse, just my personal suggestion :3

Overall:

Easily 5/5 star game here on itch.io! Can't wait for more project by you!!

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my video here if you are interested <3


Advantages:

1. That was very creepy! I loved that the game recreated the exact feeling the Mandela Catalogue evoked! Great job!

2. It was very interesting to figure out the mechanics. I appreciate that there was a tutorial but I also loved that you had to explore and try things to beat the game. I couldn't figure out what the cross was for thought XD

3. Different death screens are nice.

Disadvantages:

1. Well if you get to the point where you boarded up all the windows in time then there is just a dude in the vents and a dude in the garage for the whole game which makes it a bit boring. I would love to see more challenges appear the more the night progresses maybe.

2. There are bugs. In the video, the death ("win") screen would not show properly (but I played before and seen it before so it just got bugged this one time for some reason).

3. Poor optimization. My pc had more problems running the game than running rdr2 XD

Overall:

I loved the game. I would rate it 8.2 alternates / 10 (5/5 for itch) and I can't wait to see more similar projects (if any are coming in the future). Great job!!!


Hope my feedback was useful!

Update pros and cons are down below)

Check out my gameplay here:

Advantages:

1. I absolutely love the update's pacing. It's way more action-based and feels much faster than the first chapter which is a welcome change in my opinion. I love that the first chapter is more creepy whether the second - scary.

2. Love the lore. I definitely want to know more about baby in yellow and the second chapter definitely made the game even more interesting.

3. The details. The game just looks very good, so much thought put into level design and all the details. Just the fact that you can flush that baby down the toilet makes it hilarious and amazing.

Disadvantages:

1. I feel like the "escaping from the evil demon" scenario might get a bit too boring if you stick to it. I don't know your plan and I'm sure it is probably brilliant but as a fellow gamer, I wanted to let you know my thoughts. I think that it would be way more interesting if you get to play the "demon upbringing game" when if you mistreat the demon - you have to go down the escaping path but if you treat it correctly then something sinister and unexpected happens. Right now I just feel like the 2d chapter feels like that's the logical conclusion and there's can't be much more to it.

Overall:

The game is amazing! I love it and will definitely wait for the next updates. Can't wait to see what you are going to come up with!

Hope my feedback was useful! Thank you for reading till the end <3

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my video here if you'd like:


Advantages:

1. The style is unique and lovely. It's not really scary but very adorable. I wish the grandma would look a bit creepier though.

2. I love that the game has different endings. That is a very nice touch. The thing that is especially good is that all endings add to the story and explain it to the player which is a very nice reward for replaying the game.

Disadvantages:

1. Sometimes the text is not going through or stops mid-sentence. I don't know why that is happening, I think it depends on how far you are from the stuff that triggers text.

2. The waiting for the mother part is pretty annoying when replaying. Maybe it would be nice to let the player skip ahead upon replaying or something like that.

Overall:

That was a very nice experience, I enjoyed it greatle and would rate the game 8.3 toybox demons / 10.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my video here if you'd like:


Advantages:

1. The style of the game is very unique which makes it creepy and very charming. I absolutely love the models of every person in the building, they were very unsettling and very cool.

2. The story. Very simple and smooth. Even had a plot twist. I love that this simple and short game actually had a decent story to tell.

3. Pretty scary at the end. Especially loved character design of the lady and the bully girl at the end.

Disadvantages:

I think the only thing that I disliked is the stolen food part. It was just 1 floor below and the building has no elevator to miss that floor so there's no way they couldn't find the food. Especially owning the doog. And who keeps the food outside anyway. I know I shouldn't question logic too much but it seemed a bit too ridiculous for my liking. Maybe it would be better to make a different conflict with the bully girl.

Overall:

Incredible game! The disadvantage I mentioned doesn't make it worse and is not really a problem, just something I wanted to point out so I would rate the game 9.2 leftovers / 10.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my video here if you'd like:


Advantages:

So scary! The unsettling feeling from the call is amazing and the jumpscares are unpredictable, very well paced and surprisingly effective! I was on the edge of the seat for the entire time playing this!

Disadvantages:

I think that the choices were too close to each other and seemed like it doesn't really matter what you are choosing that much. I'm not sure whether that's correct but that is the impression that I got, I wish there would be more dialogue routes to pick.

Overall:

I wish this was a full game. 9.8 dispatch calls / 10. That was one of the best short indie horror games I've played and I've played a ton.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my video here if you'd like (I refer to it a lot and found some bugs there too):


Advantages:

1. The style is so cool! The visuals and the sound design are impeccable and so amazing! It felt very immersive to be inside the building, opening the doors, crawling around being scared of noises.

2. The puzzle was interesting. I wish that the game would have some less obvious not obligatory puzzles for additional content but as is it was very fun to solve.


Disadvantages:

1. Not scary enough. I wish you could see an actual monster or a glimpse of a chase scene or at least a jumpscare. Right now the scare factor seemed a bit disappointing.

2. Well I encountered a nonexistent wall and went through it and then found a door and fell through the floor of the map. So ig even the demo currently has bugs.


Overall:

I really love the style and I really want the full game to succeed! I can rate it 7.44 Clay Monsters / 10 as is (5stars for itch.io). Can't wait for more content!


Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my vid here:


Advantages:

1. Even scarier than the previous demo! It gets only better and better. I can clearly see that the developer knows how to manipulate player's points of attention to sneak in the best and the most unpredictable scares. Moreover, what's amazing is that the scares script is flexible (I mean that I played through the game 3 times and each time I saw some new scares I didn't notice before and they were happening at a different time). That's incredible cause that leaves so much replayability value.

2. Secrets. I LOVE how the demo hints that there will be so much more to the game. Can't wait to see what the actual night shift is going to look like.

3. Detailed facility. It's so nice to see how much thought was put into that building. So many things to interact with. It's just so refreshing to have multiple items that you can use instead of looking for 1 scalpel like other games do.

Disadvantages:

1. Well, it's very obvious that thought the building is very detailed, the outside space looks very empty and boring. I wish it would get some more attention and would hold some secrets too.

2. The main character's reaction to what's happening doesn't make sense at all. I know that this demo is a teaser and it takes the story out of the context but still. Why can't you just nope the frick out of that place. The dedication of tha main character, damn.


Thought the developer mentioned that both points will be addressed in the main game thus I think the game deserves the best rating possible as is.

Overall:

LOVE IT. Can't wait for the full release! I'd rate is as the demo 10 mortuary assistants / 10.

Hope my feedback was useful both to the players and developers!

Great job!

Thank you for answering!

Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my vid here:

Advantages:

1. Even scarier than the previous demo! It gets only better and better. I can clearly see that the developer knows how to manipulate player's points of attention to sneak in the best and the most unpredictable scares. Moreover, what's amazing is that the scares script is flexible (I mean that I played through the game 3 times and each time I saw some new scares I didn't notice before and they were happening at a different time). That's incredible cause that leaves so much replayability value.

2. Secrets. I LOVE how the demo hints that there will be so much more to the game. Can't wait to see what the actual night shift is going to look like.

3. Detailed facility. It's so nice to see how much thought was put into that building. So many things to interact with. It's just so refreshing to have multiple items that you can use instead of looking for 1 scalpel like other games do.

Disadvantages:

1. Well, it's very obvious that thought the building is very detailed, the outside space looks very empty and boring. I wish it would get some more attention and would hold some secrets too.

2. The main character's reaction to what's happening doesn't make sense at all. I know that this demo is a teaser and it takes the story out of the context but still. Why can't you just nope the frick out of that place. The dedication of tha main character, damn.

Overall:

LOVE IT. Can't wait for the full release! I'd rate is as the demo 9.2 mortuary assistants / 10.

Hope my feedback was useful both to the players and developers!

Great job!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my gameplay here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!!):


Advantages:

1. The gameplay is simple but very nice. The little details like ringing the bell are a very nice touch which actually adds a lot to the game in my personal opinion.

2. Scares are very well thought through! There were a couple of times the game made me jump in terror, very well done! I love that the game mixes different types of scares - from well-paced jumpscares to barely noticeable changes in the background like the scarecrow in the field which also gives the creeps.

3. The story is nice. I love that this little horror experience has a story and even a plot twist. It was very nice to see!


Disadvantages:

I think all the chases weren't really pressuring since you couldn't see the pursuer to catch up. I would suggest adding details like car lights that become more and more bright when the car catches up with you. Or the stomping gets louder when the girl does. Something to make the chase a bit more pressuring. Other than that I think the whole experience was very well thought and designed. I absolutely loved it!


Overall:

Wonderful, incredible game! Definitely 10 bicycles out of 10!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs would help out a lot)):

Advantages:

1. The pacing and the spooks in the game were very exciting! It made me more and more paranoid as I progressed since I was expecintg jumpscares or scary creatures chasing me or something like that. So, the game managed to create a perfect ambiance for a horror experience.

2. The house didn't seem to be emty which is very nice. I loved attention to detail and interactable objects here and there. It was a exciting place to explore!

Disadvantages:

1. The ending, though, was very anticlimactic. It couldn't even be considered a jumpscare as neither the appearance nor the visuals were scary enough to make an excellent finishing point of an adventure.

2. Main character's house tho seems rather empty comparing to the ghost house. I think that the important lore part could be given on the phone right at the entrance of the house or it would be nice to pay more attention to the starting area. I mean, we don't even switch off the lights as we set on our ghost hunting adventure.

Overall:

I'd rate this little game 4/5 stars. But at the same time, I believe that this was a very good little horror game. I think that a couple of changes to the ending would easily make this project a 5 star horror on itch. 

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my gameplay here:

Advantages:

I loved the story and the ending especially! It's not the most original story I've seen (look disadvantage 1) but it was marvelously told! I even got a bit emotional at the end for some reason) I could relate to the character) way to go! I should also note that the morale of the story is admirable.

Disadvantages:

I think this game was way too similar to "it's not me, it's my basement!". It's not necessarily bad, but I hoped to see more original elements implemented. It's ok to use the same concept of a monster in a basement, but it would be much better if the lore behind this entity would be completely different. It's still a good game tho.

Overall:

That was an amazing experience! I think it could be further developed and it also has the potential to become a bigger game. I rate the game 8.7 basement monsters / 10 (officially 5/5 here on itch) and can't wait to see more from you!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

*btw I also played and review your other game candypink some time ago and I want to say that you've grown a lot. I liked the previous game a lot but this one seems a lot more interesting, complicated, and intriguing. Great job!

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Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

How do you like this version of the little red riding hood?? I like the darker versions of the fairytales a lot! Do you want me to make a vid where I'd tell you the real stories behind the fairytales...

Advantages:
1. The story is very cool! I like the darker approaches to the fairytales a lot and I absolutely loved this version! Also, the game has 2 endings which is very nice as well)
2. The style of the game is absolutely incredible! The wolf is art.
3. It's free! C'mon, just play the game, it's amazing, I promise!

Disadvantages:
1. I feel like if the map would circle around it would be much nicer as it wouldn't take as long to get from one part of the map to another. The mechanics are pretty simple so there's only so much time when they keep being entertaining and I feel that running from one side to another for 40 minutes really tests the patience. But I mean, it prolongues the gameplay a bit and the game is free so I can't really whine about anything)

Overall:
Just play the game, it's awesome! I rate it 9 red hoods / 10 (officially 5/5 stars on itch). I really wish to see more similar games! That was incredible!
Thanks for taking your time to read this comment till the end, have an incredible day! <3

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there)) Likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

I love the spooks! They were subtle at first and then unexpected and very cool! I think that you had a very clear idea of what the player would think at a certain moment and you find a way to surprise them (at least me)). Great job!

Disadvantages:

I wish there'd be more endings! For example, if there'd be an option to wake the parents up or to get out of the house and something like that. You don't even have to animate endings or anything of that sort, a short epilogue would do! I feel that the game would benefit a lot from that!

Overall:

It was a very cool experience but I'll rate it 4/5 stars because I think it could be so much cooler if player would have more options on how to act. I mean, if I'd seen something in my house, I wouldn't just go to bed to try to sleep the nightmares away, I'd act differently.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there)) likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

1. The story is geat! I felt intrigued and curious, got a bit spooked as well) Great job!

2. The monster design is very very cool! I love that stuff! I googled the artist you mentioned and saw in what way you got inspired by their monsters but still, it's fascinating what you created, I want to see more of it!

3. I loved the little animations you did! They add so much to the ambiance!

Disadvantages:

1. It felt a bit weird to see the dude under the stairs. They only had questions so they didn't actually see anything yet but still, they chose a very weird spot to freak out about their suspicions. I just felt that something was off about this moment...

2. So short! I want to see more of that so much!

Overall:

Definitely 5/5 star rating. I hope that this will become a bigger project or you'll make more similar stories! It was such a cool experience! I'm impressed!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 3d there)), likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

1. The gameplay is simple but challenging! I really enjoyed the mechanics and I think that the game is very potent!

2. The monster is scary and their animations are top-notch as well! The way they crawl to the ceiling is very scary! And the jumpscare is very cool as well! Very effective at least the first time one sees it!

3. Sound design is awesome! I especially loved when suddenly the monster would get quieter and then hop to the window. I love that there was a variety of monster's behaviors and the sounds they make.

Disadvantages:

1. It wasn't very distinct when the monster would get to the second-floor windows at least for me.

2. Lack of tutorial. I mean, the game is pretty simple but it still would be nice to get the message like "close the window and keep it shut until the monster goes away or you ded". Because it's a bit confusing at the start.

Overall:

Astonishing job! I can't wait to see more of the game! I feel like it can easily become the next hit! Outstanding! 5/5 stars. 

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!!)):


Advantages:

1. The story is mystical and interesting. It has some Fran Bow vibes in a sense that it makes you wonder whether the thing that's happening is really happening or it's all in her head kind of story. Very cool! I especially liked the open ending)

2. The art style is very cool! I absolutely loved how you can say that the girl is paranoid by looking at her. The little details in the background that hint at the story are also a very nice touch! I loved that!

3. The pacing is great! I feel like even though the game starts pretty slow but it has some mystery to it right off the bat and it hooks the player. Very cool!

Disadvantages:

1. I'd like to see more horror elements. The game spooked me only once and then reused the same trick over and over. It added to the ambiance a bit but overall I feel like there should have been something different. I mean the whole game it's been so smart at creating tension and predicting players' questions and then a lot of kind of cheap lil spooks. I just know you can do so much better at the whole basement part!

2. Lack of background music. That's a huge one. Just put non-intrusive creepy background music that's kind of always at the back of your mind but not really noticeable. I had to pick one track myself and I think the game benefited a lot from that but I'm (obviously) biased!

Overall:

That was amazing! I absolutely loved the game! I rate it 5 paranoid girls / 5! Yet, I'm sure you could still polish the game a bit more to make it perfect.

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my vid here if you want to)):

Advantages:

1. The levels are amazing! They are so different from each other and entertaining. Every level introduces new enemies, bits of plot, and mechanics. Mind-blowing incredibly job!

2. You get to see lots of references to the show and it's pretty cool. I'm sure that tons of them are going over my head as I haven't watched everything tho)

3. The story is actually captivating! I can't wait to see what is going to happen) At the moment I'm through 3 hours of the game (9 - 11 pm) (less in the vid). Can't wait to play more. This is just amazing.

4. There are challenges to the levels and mini-achievements you can get. I absolutely love that and I'll try to get at least some of them!)

Disadvantages:

1. Windows only.

Overall:

Amazing! I, personally, am having a blast playing the game and will def upload more episodes of the game on the channel. Such a cool game! Well done! I rate it 9.5 sponges / 10 (as of yet, my opinion might change when I reach the end of the game - then I'll post another comment))

Hope my feedback was useful!

EDIT for those who CAN'T play Yandere & Yangire mode: you have to buy the game for $4 to get access to these modes. Sorry for posting the comment again, I just saw so many ppl wonder what's happening and decided to make an update to the comment.

Pros and cons are down below) (I'll be reviewing the 2.1 version) Check out my vid here:


Advantages:

1.  Yandere and Yangire look so awesome! You've done a great job and I absolutely love the style and the animations and the change in the whole environment for these characters! Also, it's absolutely fabulous that these aren't just mods but a part of the story.

2. I love the new mechanics: closing doors and stealing the key from her belt. The animation of her breaking the door down is absolutely terrifying and the fact that you have to approach her to grab the key makes me shiver. Perfectly splendid changes!

Disadvantages:

1. I got that we are playing as Senpai's friend on Yandere mode. And I know that the same was implied for Yangire mode, but that's not totally clear. I'd suggest making Yangire appear at the end (bad end) of Yandere's mode. But she's killing Senpai's friend anyway. But I was thinking that maybe it would be more logical if she'd appear as Yandere, chase Senpai's friend down as Yangire and then be normal with Senpai. Tho it's also kind of weird... The whole point is that the lore part of Yangire is weak at the moment.

2. What the heck is happening with code on blackboards in classes on Yandere mode? I've seen so many doubles! Like I saw at least 2 digits for the 2d position, 2 digits for the 3d position, and 2 digits for the last position. Maybe it's intentional but I didn't understand the intent then.

3. She can move you in the space behind the locker (happened on my vid). I managed to wiggle my way out of there but that wasn't suppose to happen then. I feel like I've broken Yandere mode in lots of ways - you can see my vid for reference, but it's very buggy at the moment. Another example: If you crouch in front of Yandere - she straight up kills you, no warning. Pretty sure, that wasn't supposed to happen.

4. I get that Yangire mode is supposed to feel impossible, but it's still must be beatable and there's no way to lose her and she knows exactly where you are at any given time. I feel like it should be balanced a bit more.

Overall:

Absolutely mind-blowing changes! I LOVE that! I rate the update 9.5 Yanderes / 10. I feel like it's going to be even better after some patches. Also, wanted to mention that it's not free anymore. If you want to experience the update as well, you'll have to buy it for 4 dollars BUT it's so worth it! If you care for my opinion - I'd recommend buying it and experiencing it. Moreover, this game was wayyy too good for a free game for a long time, so I think it's only logical that now it costs money. 

Support habupain! Buy the game!

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. I like that this game was deeper than most horror indie games. It had a message. That's great, that makes the game much more than just an experience.

2. It spooked me so much. Nothing really happened but I was on the edge for the whole basement section of the game. Well done!

3. I felt the sadness. It's cool how you managed to appeal to the common depression experiences people have.

Disadvantages:

1. It's a bit empty. Like I said before, nothing really happened. On the one hand, it's understandable to provide the message of the game. On the other hand, I think that there were so many opportunities to make the game scarier.

2. It's basically the same point as before but a different suggestion. The basement section feels dragged out because, well, nothing's really happening there. Maybe it would be better to make it shorter or to make it scarier (then it's the previous point in the section).

Overall:

I rate the game 5/5 stars here on itch. I felt it and I loved it.

Hope my feedback was useful!


*btw played your chimney prowler and Dia and I want to say that you've grown a lot as a developer / developers) Great job!

Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my gameplay here:

Advantages:

1. The creatures are amazing! They are gigantic and very very mencaing. I absolutely love the choice of enemies.

2. Each battle is different from the other. Bosses have different mechanics and you need to use different tactics in order to slay them. Fantastic! Moreover, you get more tricks to surprise your enemies)

3. The difficulty is absolutely beatable but still challenging. It's perfectly balanced battles that were sweaty to me but I managed to win from the first time.


Disadvantages:

1. The world seems empty apart from bosses. It would be cool to add some kind of trophies in your hub or journals that reveal the story.

2. Lack of lore. It's cool to have an awesome boss-battling game. But at least a bit of a story would be nice. Like in the cuphead. You had at least a bit of plot. And this game has such a humongous potential for great lore!

Overall:

I rate this game 5/5 stars here on itch. Great job! I'll definitely check the other bosses I haven't slain in the vid yet and will keep tracking this game's progress. Awesome job so far!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Why did you assume that  I didn't understand "at all the fact that you follow the enemy's lead in almost every single section".

I did, thanks.

Ppl are different. If I'd start from the bottom, I'd get bored immediately. I always start from the hardest difficulties so I'm kind of used to them. I mean it's not like I started playing something like Milf right off the bat ahah. I started from normal doable songs on week 5 which I feel was a perfect difficulty. I miss the pink arrows on every level no matter which one so Ig it's NOT the case of starting with smth challenging. They just sneak up on me even if I know they must be thereafter "following the enemy's lead".

Jeez at that point I feel like this conversation is so pointless. The game is great. If you think that overloading with colors is not the game's problem but my problem, ok, ppl are entitled to their own opinions. As I am entitled to mine. But I really really don't need your advice on how to start the game, please (I don't mean to be rude). I have my own learning curve and it's faster and simpler when it starts from something challenging. That's how I do things. Thank you for your concern nonetheless.

Hm, I think you misunderstood me. My whole point was that these games normally don't pose a challenge and I'm so glad that it's not the case. So, it's kind of weird that you are telling me to play tutorial and easy week 1... 
In the 1st disadvantage, I wasn't talking about the "feel for the game" I was talking about being overwhelmed with colors. I have the feel for the game, I've beaten it on hard and I even attached the vid so this kind of conversation wouldn't happen but oh well... My point is that the colors still throw me off, especially the left pink. I'm not color blind so that's why I mentioned it assuming that it might be the case for other ppl too. My eyes hurt after playing this game for like 20 minutes. It's too much. Maybe it would be nice to allow the players to control the saturation in the settings. Maybe that would help. Or maybe I'm the only one with this problem.

Other than that, I agree with you.

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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. The music is super nice! I think that's the most important advantage that makes the whole game extremely fun to play! I played it on hard and I'm not the best so I failed a lot but the music didn't cease to be fun to listen to! Super cool!

2. The characters are amazing! I like their little animations and outfits. The characters are entertaining to look at and generally interesting. The only bland character is the main one in my humble opinion. But it's ok, why would we look at the main character anyway?

3. I LOVE the design of the levels. There's always so much going on! There are easter egg characters in the background, there's lore. I loved how the dad held Santa hostage on week 5! Absolutely incredible!

4. The hard mode actually poses a challenge. I'm honestly not a fan of these types of games but I had a blast trying to beat hard. It's so cool that it's actually challenging! It makes the game so much more fun in my opinion!

Disadvantages:

1. There are so many colors - it's hard to concentrate on the arrows at first. Especially the left one on week 5. It kind of blends in with the environment. And it's not such a big issue cuz after some learning you get used to it. But the game still overwhelms with colors at first. I don't know what to suggest here to improve that tho. I love the design a lot. But it's so hard to see the arrows sometimes especially the left one.

2. Ok, I'm not the best and I challenge myself to beat hard so it takes a loooot of tries for me. So the annoying part is the delay in between the tries. This split second of nothingness before the count starts becomes annoying really fast. I just wish that the game would start faster if it's not the first time you are trying the level.

Overall:

Amazing! The game is so incredibly cool, I didn't expect that at all! Now I see why all the people like it so much! I'll definitely play more on my channel so if you want to support me and sub, I would appreciate it immensely! Thanks for reading this thread till the end and have a nice day <3 Oh, yeah, I rate this game 10 lemon demons / 10 (officially I rate it 5 on itch so I'm gonna go and drop a 5-star rating).

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The game is so spooky! Well done! I enjoyed every scare the game had and it surprised me a lot. I feel like even if the concept of "going into the same room that changes a bit" isn't new, you managed to make the game look fresh nonetheless. Very cool!

2. The storytelling is amazing. I love how you give hints to the player but it's up to them to decide what has actually happened. 

3. The secrets! Yay! The fact that this game had secrets hidden everywhere made me replay the game. That means that you did a nice job of making the player want to know more and try again. Moreover, the secrets were kind of cool. And the fact that there are different endings is also awesome. (I put it here because I feel that you need to collect secrets to get the other ending but I might be wrong and it might have been a total coincidence for me))

Disadvantages:

1. The lack of background music! Any non-intrusive music would be better than the lack of music. I know that it's kinda hard to choose fitting music but I feel that it's still a "must-have". If you intentionally made the game silent then you could add the "sound of silence" - a wind behind the window or neighbors walking upstairs or the floor creaking to make the ambiance stronger. Or even better - make the radio play a non-intrusive non-copyrighted song that can be turned off if the player wants to experience the game in total silence.

2. The face in the darkness. It is an incredible spook, don't get me wrong. But it doesn't fit the game whatsoever. I guess the style of it reminded me of some creepypastas and stuff like that and it felt completely out of place. I would suggest replacing it with something more subtle, not so "in your face". Here's my suggestion that might inspire you: make the player go inside a dark room, close the door behind them so they will stay in (almost) complete darkness, then make the face (normal-sized face) appear (maybe with a sound cue to attract palyer's attention), and after they approach it, then continue with your sequence. That way players would have no chance of missing this great spook but it wouldn't fall out of the whole picture at the same time being too bright and distorted.

Overall:

I rate this game 4.6 fire axes out of 5 (officially 5 in the rate section). This is an incredible game with great spooks. It's fun to replay and to investigate more thoroughly. But it could be so much better if some minor details would get polished. Can't wait to see more from you! Stay awesome, devs!

Hope my feedback was useful!

*btw played your game called Lights out before and I wanted to say that this game is so much better! It's very cool to see you grow as (a) developer(s)!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!)):


Advantages

1. The game was so spooky! It's cool that it was able to scare me so much with subtle stuff and changes in ambiance. Very well done!

2. I really liked the humor of "nothing being there". I think the mixture of horror and comedy turned out to be ideal, at least in my opinion. I really really enjoyed that!

Disadvantages:

1. There was nothing there. Honestly, I wish there would be a way to open this suspicious door that had something there. Is there a way? Maybe I was just too stupid to find it.

2. The ending is sooo anticlimactic! I wish there would be more to that! And also after such a great ambiance and tension-building, the jumpscare seemed to be even cheaper :(

Overall:

This game deserves the best rating possible! 5 somethings / 5 somethings. Tho, there was nothing really there, so I don't even know what I am reviewing at the moment...

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The subtle scares were so good! The chair scare, the noises, and even the jumpscare - I enjoyed every part of the adventure. Jumpscare was a bit cheap, tho, but I still liked it a lot. It scared me and gave me chills so I believe that this game is a good horror game.

2. Tho lore was so cool. I was so happy to play a lore-heavy game. It was very fun. I appreciate the effort that was put into creating this story, I liked it a lot, it was very creepy!

Disadvantages:

1. The notes were really obnoxious, honestly. I mean, I know that you've changed them a bit cuz before there was no option for reading the text pressing RM. But still, it's so counterintuitive that you can scroll even tho there's a tip on the top. IT feels like you can scroll the note, not the text that appears after pressing RM. And also there were so many mistakes. Normally, I don't care about them as I'm also not native and I make a ton myself. But these notes had an overwhelming amount of mistakes even for my liking.

2. The phone calls were too quiet and the dialogues were a bit weird. Like too very shy people are talking so they make lots of very awkward pauses. I don't know. I actually feel kinda bad neat picking at this because I feel that I wouldn't enjoy the game as much if there wouldn't be lore like this. Still, I feel that there is room for improvement. 

Overall:

I rate this game 4.5 psychos / 5 (5 officially). It was a great game but there are still some places that could have been improved further. Anyway, can't wait for more games from you, amazing job!

Hope my feedback was useful!

I've made a comment about the 2.0.0. update already, so here I'm going to analyze the pros and cons of update 2.0.1.

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. 2.0.0. felt impossible to beat (which I wrote in my previous comment). This version seems to be well balanced and beatable. Tho, I haven't beat it on the vid due to the lack of time ahaha. Still, it seems possible to finish.

2. Well, now saiko gives more chances to escape. Also, if she finds the player in the locker, there's a chance that she won't insta down them as soon as she sees them anymore which is also an improvement comparing to the previous version of the game.

Disadvantages:

1. The little rooms under the stairs don't seem to be of much help in this version of the game. She can glitch through the door with no problem.

2. I feel like if you were checking all the rooms and missed 1 locker in 1 room that had a key (bad luck) - there's no way to beat the game. Maybe it would be very cool to add some hints on easy mode so people would understand how that happens and how to avoid this situation playing on more difficult levels. I haven't really noticed much difference between easy and normal at this point.

3. It's really easy to trick her into hiding behind a pillar if you are in the corridor. If you are backing away slowly and looking at her - she'll hide behind a pillar giving you more time to escape. This behavior seems very repetitive after a while. I haven't really shown it in the vid tho, but it happened during my streams on twitch a lot.

Overall:

I feel that the 2.0.1. version is much better than the previous one. And the previous one was insanely good! 

Habu, you are doing such a great job and I'm happy I joined your discord channel btw (recommend everybody joining as well). I was very busy lately, but I hope to be more useful in the future! Sorry for leaving the comment here in case you see it) As this is the comment about version 2.0.1, I though it wouldn't hurt to leave my opinion here)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

The game was super creepy and I feel like there was more to the story than it seemed. I feel like the game gave hints about the fate of the world but it was up to the player to figure out what is going on and I really really liked it! The cat was adorable as well :3

Disadvantages:

I wish there would be a bit more to the gameplay than getting to point B and then back to point A. Also, I believe the game would benefit a lot from having more spooks and scares as it is a horror game after all. I haven't felt like this was a horror, it seemed to be more like a relaxing adventure than a horror experience. I wish there would be more secrets hidden here and there (and maybe there were some secrets that I just haven't found). At the moment the game feels kind of empty.

Overall:

I rate this game 4 adorable cats / 5. I feel it's an intriguing and relaxing adventure with lore that's been told through the environment (which is pretty cool). But it's not a horror experience and it feels kind of empty.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, the game is the 2d there)):


Advantages:

The concept is very cool! I really enjoyed being at the same time in the game and in the game inside the game. It's cool that you could see how your actions affect both worlds and how the player is walking on the monitor when you are away from the computer. I t was something new and I enjoyed it a lot! 

Disadvantages:

I guess it would be cooler if there would be an option to change the outcome and to save the player. Also, I would prefer if the creepy sounds would mean something more instead of just being creepy ambiance cues. When you hear someone walking around it would be really cool if that would be an actual thing. Also, I was expecting the door to give me a spook, I think it was such a good opportunity!

Overall:

I would rate this game 4 meta demons / 5. Enjoyed playing it a lot but I still believe that it could be scarier. The concept was very cool and original tho)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, the game is the 2d there)):

Advantages:

The concept is very cool! I really enjoyed being at the same time in the game and in the game inside the game. It's cool that you could see how your actions affect both worlds and how the player is walking on the monitor when you are away from the computer. I t was something new and I enjoyed it a lot! 

Disadvantages:

I guess it would be cooler if there would be an option to change the outcome and to save the player. Also, I would prefer if the creepy sounds would mean something more instead of just being creepy ambiance cues. When you hear someone walking around it would be really cool if that would be an actual thing. Also, I was expecting the door to give me a spook, I think it was such a good opportunity!

Overall:

I would rate this game 4 meta demons / 5. Enjoyed playing it a lot but I still believe that it could be scarier. The concept was very cool and original tho)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

The game has an eerie feeling to it which is an incredible thing for a horror experience. There's always a feeling of something being off and I think it's really cool that you achieved that. There are different lines the mother says the more you wait, the way her head turns like 360 degrees, and more... cool!

Disadvantages:

Well, what the heck with flying meatballs and red lines? I mean, it's kinda weird and I couldn't understand whether the main character is having a trip or it's just bizarre. I think these things ruined the ambiance a bit (at least for me). I believe it would be way better to make more subtle changes in the environment as you did with the mother's face. For example, slowly change the color of the walls, make the room slightly darker each time. make some red stains appear on the floor... Stuff like that.  In my personal opinion, it would be way cooler! 

Overall:

I think this game definitely deserves 4 / 5 star rating. It could be a bit scarier and the ambiance could be stronger but it's still very cool as is and I genuinely enjoyed playing the game! Well done!))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The style of this game is amazing! I absolutely love it! The red and black seemed to be very brave and innovative to use and I'm glad you tried it out! Looks amazing!

2. The story and the spooks are just top-notch! I really loved it and got scared several times. I wish there would be another ending to that though...

Disadvantages:

1. The game feels unfinished. As I said, it would be cool to have another ending as the game seems to end abruptly as is. I wish there would be a way to fight the creature and throw it out of the house.

2. What's with the completely dark room? I hoped it has some secrets but found none :( It made me so curious and so disappointed at the same time :( I wish there would be more to that !!!

Overall:

I think that's incredible, I rate it 4.85 / 5 stars. Great job on this game! Can't wait for more games from you!))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. Near the end the game got scary! It was very cool to see an actual enemy as I didn't expect to meet one.

2. The ambiance is very cool and I love those bits of story that we got to see in the demo from the newspaper, paintings, and environment. Clearly, a lot of thought was put into the story which makes it promising for the full game.

3. I really liked the pacing especially the spooks in the room with the soldier. I think that was done marvelously!

Disadvantages:

1. I think the game would benefit a lot from having options to read texts normally (like to press a button and then you see what's written on a paper but you don't have to turn the paper constantly and adjust angles which were pretty annoying).

2. The paintings didn't match the environment at all. Sometimes these paintings are very well done or a bit funky but creepy. These were neither so I didn't really like it. Though, the one with the soldier in a room when the enemy could be seen for the first time was very good. Maybe it would be nice to add a bit more color and get make them a bit crazier (a bit messier instead of "clean lines"). Though I don't really know what you were going for, I'm just telling you my personal opinion.

Overall:

It was a great demo which made the game seem promising and interesting. I'll check out your game on steam) Keep up the great work!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. This game is so very cute! Adorable! The environment, the story, and the animations are just so well done and so wholesome! Really enjoyed playing the game.

2. Everything rhymes! And the voice is soothing. I absolutely loved listening to the story!

Disadvantages:

1. It would be cool id the snowman could get mad if the penguin would mess up their face! Maybe it would be so cool if the game would have an alternative path for being a "bad penguin". Though, I understand that it would require a lot more work. Still, I'm pretty sure the game would turn out to be great!

Overall:

The cutest game I played in a long time, great job! Keep up the amazing work))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The game is spooky. Santa crept up on me a couple of times and spooked me good. Especially in the basement area of the metro.

2. It's hilarious. Just imagine that Santa had a mental breakdown from working too hard and all the pressure of Christmas and delivering presents. Santa went a bit nuts. I think that the concept is pretty funny as is but the cheerful music during some of the sneaking around scenes add as well)

3. The boss fight was pretty cool. It took me a couple of tries to beat Santa and I didn't expect that. Normally the boss fights in these games are either too simple or too hard. This was very well balanced.

4. The story is very cool as well. I didn't expect to get any story at all but it actually made me a bit sad right off the bat. Very well done!

Disadvantages:

1. The police are stupid, my god! Apart from that, I don't even know what one could possibly add to the game to make it better. It seemed pretty balanced to me. There was some fighting, sneaking, and running away from Santa and it all was pretty entertaining.

Overall:

Clearly, this game is a 5/5 star experience. I really enjoyed playing it!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly and highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. I liked the story a lot even though it has some holes in the plot (the 2d point in the disadvantages section). I think it was pretty cool that there were several chapters and locations to explore.

2. I liked that it was pretty logical where to go at all times. The player was either led forward by the lights or the gates. Really enjoyed that.

3. I think the witch was pretty scary. She had some nice dance moves as well) Great job creating a scary-looking monster! I got scared a couple of times especially when I didn't expect her to come at me (near the end of the game that happened).

Disadvantages:

1. What are the villagers doing? Before the disappearance, they are at least seem to be picking flowers and at the end of the game, their actions make no sense at all. Kind of weird.

2. The person who stole the rock left the note before the witch killed them and before the disappearance. How could they know about the disappearance? And if they knew, why couldn't they bring the stone back themselves? And why is the main character - the only one to survive the witch and the only one that hasn't disappeared. I feel like the story could have been a bit smoother. And if they knew that everybody has disappeared, why would they leave a note in the first place?

Overall:

I think the game was pretty cool. The plot was the main advantage of the game but it still had some holes (or the story just didn't explain some moments) so I rate the game 4/5 stars. I feel that there's still room for further development but it was a pretty good game nonetheless!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, of course <3):


As I'm writing these comments for each update, I'm going to discuss only this particular one)

Advantages:

1. The layout of the school now feels more interesting. It seems to be closer to the layout of actual schools and generally, I really liked it. There is a disadvantage to it that I'm going to mention later, though) I loved that you kept the misplaced chairs and tables from the last updates. Enjoyed the new cabinets in the classrooms a lot. They look cool, they make the player stay longer in the room so I think that's a great idea!

2. Two personalities! That's just amazing! Exactly what this game needed and I mentioned that in my last comment. Of course, such a change in mechanics has disadvantages as well (the 2d disadvantage below) but overall it's a great improvement to the game! I hope that in the next updates more ways of influencing Yandere's mood will be introduced. At the moment, the changes I saw were incredible. The new behavior of her offering drugs is also pretty cool. It's a pity that I haven't seen much of the other behaviors like talking to the player when they are in the locker and then leaving them (not even once :( ) but I guess that happens because her choice of behaviors is so wide that the probability of seeing particular ones is lower. The only last thing that I want to add here is that the change between the identities is perfect. It's partly clear but still makes the player wonder whether they are dealing with Yandere or Yangire. Very well done!

3. New mini-game for switching the lights on is very nice! I enjoyed that it keeps you in place but it's relatively easy and fast to solve at the same time! Can't wait for more) 

Disadvantages:

1. The disadvantage of the new layout I mentioned before is that it's much harder to lose yandere when she noticed you. Before you had lots of corners and the distances were smaller. Now it's so much harder to make her lose sight of you! Also, the only new cabinets I disliked being in the first spawn room. The brown ones. They don't look interactable at all. They are too low and they look exactly like the rest of the closet. That's confusing.

2. OK, what I didn't like about new identities is that there's not many options to influence her mood (I guess I already mentioned that). Also, considering that it's so hard to lose her now it feels kinda unfair that she keeps stalking you constantly. I think it would be great if you could give Yandere (when she's nice) a small task (to fetch you healies or something like that) and that would make her run away (but then she'd get pissed that you hid from her). Or something like that.

3. At that point because the map became bigger and it's harder to sneak around it, it's incredibly important to make the difference between voice level and position distinctive so you would be able to know for sure where she's at the moment. How far and general direction as well. Right now it's confusing and luck-based whether you're going to run into her or not. I guess she could also become silent from time to time to fool you and stuff like that.

Overall:

Amazing update!) That was so great, I had lots of fun checking it our and I will for sure try my best to beat it) For now, I rate it 10 scary Yandere girls out of 10! Can't wait to see how the game will be improved next))

Hope my feedback was useful!