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Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

How do you like this version of the little red riding hood?? I like the darker versions of the fairytales a lot! Do you want me to make a vid where I'd tell you the real stories behind the fairytales...

Advantages:
1. The story is very cool! I like the darker approaches to the fairytales a lot and I absolutely loved this version! Also, the game has 2 endings which is very nice as well)
2. The style of the game is absolutely incredible! The wolf is art.
3. It's free! C'mon, just play the game, it's amazing, I promise!

Disadvantages:
1. I feel like if the map would circle around it would be much nicer as it wouldn't take as long to get from one part of the map to another. The mechanics are pretty simple so there's only so much time when they keep being entertaining and I feel that running from one side to another for 40 minutes really tests the patience. But I mean, it prolongues the gameplay a bit and the game is free so I can't really whine about anything)

Overall:
Just play the game, it's awesome! I rate it 9 red hoods / 10 (officially 5/5 stars on itch). I really wish to see more similar games! That was incredible!
Thanks for taking your time to read this comment till the end, have an incredible day! <3

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there)) Likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

I love the spooks! They were subtle at first and then unexpected and very cool! I think that you had a very clear idea of what the player would think at a certain moment and you find a way to surprise them (at least me)). Great job!

Disadvantages:

I wish there'd be more endings! For example, if there'd be an option to wake the parents up or to get out of the house and something like that. You don't even have to animate endings or anything of that sort, a short epilogue would do! I feel that the game would benefit a lot from that!

Overall:

It was a very cool experience but I'll rate it 4/5 stars because I think it could be so much cooler if player would have more options on how to act. I mean, if I'd seen something in my house, I wouldn't just go to bed to try to sleep the nightmares away, I'd act differently.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there)) likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

1. The story is geat! I felt intrigued and curious, got a bit spooked as well) Great job!

2. The monster design is very very cool! I love that stuff! I googled the artist you mentioned and saw in what way you got inspired by their monsters but still, it's fascinating what you created, I want to see more of it!

3. I loved the little animations you did! They add so much to the ambiance!

Disadvantages:

1. It felt a bit weird to see the dude under the stairs. They only had questions so they didn't actually see anything yet but still, they chose a very weird spot to freak out about their suspicions. I just felt that something was off about this moment...

2. So short! I want to see more of that so much!

Overall:

Definitely 5/5 star rating. I hope that this will become a bigger project or you'll make more similar stories! It was such a cool experience! I'm impressed!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 3d there)), likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:

Advantages:

1. The gameplay is simple but challenging! I really enjoyed the mechanics and I think that the game is very potent!

2. The monster is scary and their animations are top-notch as well! The way they crawl to the ceiling is very scary! And the jumpscare is very cool as well! Very effective at least the first time one sees it!

3. Sound design is awesome! I especially loved when suddenly the monster would get quieter and then hop to the window. I love that there was a variety of monster's behaviors and the sounds they make.

Disadvantages:

1. It wasn't very distinct when the monster would get to the second-floor windows at least for me.

2. Lack of tutorial. I mean, the game is pretty simple but it still would be nice to get the message like "close the window and keep it shut until the monster goes away or you ded". Because it's a bit confusing at the start.

Overall:

Astonishing job! I can't wait to see more of the game! I feel like it can easily become the next hit! Outstanding! 5/5 stars. 

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!!)):


Advantages:

1. The story is mystical and interesting. It has some Fran Bow vibes in a sense that it makes you wonder whether the thing that's happening is really happening or it's all in her head kind of story. Very cool! I especially liked the open ending)

2. The art style is very cool! I absolutely loved how you can say that the girl is paranoid by looking at her. The little details in the background that hint at the story are also a very nice touch! I loved that!

3. The pacing is great! I feel like even though the game starts pretty slow but it has some mystery to it right off the bat and it hooks the player. Very cool!

Disadvantages:

1. I'd like to see more horror elements. The game spooked me only once and then reused the same trick over and over. It added to the ambiance a bit but overall I feel like there should have been something different. I mean the whole game it's been so smart at creating tension and predicting players' questions and then a lot of kind of cheap lil spooks. I just know you can do so much better at the whole basement part!

2. Lack of background music. That's a huge one. Just put non-intrusive creepy background music that's kind of always at the back of your mind but not really noticeable. I had to pick one track myself and I think the game benefited a lot from that but I'm (obviously) biased!

Overall:

That was amazing! I absolutely loved the game! I rate it 5 paranoid girls / 5! Yet, I'm sure you could still polish the game a bit more to make it perfect.

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below)

Check out my vid here if you want to)):

Advantages:

1. The levels are amazing! They are so different from each other and entertaining. Every level introduces new enemies, bits of plot, and mechanics. Mind-blowing incredibly job!

2. You get to see lots of references to the show and it's pretty cool. I'm sure that tons of them are going over my head as I haven't watched everything tho)

3. The story is actually captivating! I can't wait to see what is going to happen) At the moment I'm through 3 hours of the game (9 - 11 pm) (less in the vid). Can't wait to play more. This is just amazing.

4. There are challenges to the levels and mini-achievements you can get. I absolutely love that and I'll try to get at least some of them!)

Disadvantages:

1. Windows only.

Overall:

Amazing! I, personally, am having a blast playing the game and will def upload more episodes of the game on the channel. Such a cool game! Well done! I rate it 9.5 sponges / 10 (as of yet, my opinion might change when I reach the end of the game - then I'll post another comment))

Hope my feedback was useful!

EDIT for those who CAN'T play Yandere & Yangire mode: you have to buy the game for $4 to get access to these modes. Sorry for posting the comment again, I just saw so many ppl wonder what's happening and decided to make an update to the comment.

Pros and cons are down below) (I'll be reviewing the 2.1 version) Check out my vid here:


Advantages:

1.  Yandere and Yangire look so awesome! You've done a great job and I absolutely love the style and the animations and the change in the whole environment for these characters! Also, it's absolutely fabulous that these aren't just mods but a part of the story.

2. I love the new mechanics: closing doors and stealing the key from her belt. The animation of her breaking the door down is absolutely terrifying and the fact that you have to approach her to grab the key makes me shiver. Perfectly splendid changes!

Disadvantages:

1. I got that we are playing as Senpai's friend on Yandere mode. And I know that the same was implied for Yangire mode, but that's not totally clear. I'd suggest making Yangire appear at the end (bad end) of Yandere's mode. But she's killing Senpai's friend anyway. But I was thinking that maybe it would be more logical if she'd appear as Yandere, chase Senpai's friend down as Yangire and then be normal with Senpai. Tho it's also kind of weird... The whole point is that the lore part of Yangire is weak at the moment.

2. What the heck is happening with code on blackboards in classes on Yandere mode? I've seen so many doubles! Like I saw at least 2 digits for the 2d position, 2 digits for the 3d position, and 2 digits for the last position. Maybe it's intentional but I didn't understand the intent then.

3. She can move you in the space behind the locker (happened on my vid). I managed to wiggle my way out of there but that wasn't suppose to happen then. I feel like I've broken Yandere mode in lots of ways - you can see my vid for reference, but it's very buggy at the moment. Another example: If you crouch in front of Yandere - she straight up kills you, no warning. Pretty sure, that wasn't supposed to happen.

4. I get that Yangire mode is supposed to feel impossible, but it's still must be beatable and there's no way to lose her and she knows exactly where you are at any given time. I feel like it should be balanced a bit more.

Overall:

Absolutely mind-blowing changes! I LOVE that! I rate the update 9.5 Yanderes / 10. I feel like it's going to be even better after some patches. Also, wanted to mention that it's not free anymore. If you want to experience the update as well, you'll have to buy it for 4 dollars BUT it's so worth it! If you care for my opinion - I'd recommend buying it and experiencing it. Moreover, this game was wayyy too good for a free game for a long time, so I think it's only logical that now it costs money. 

Support habupain! Buy the game!

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. I like that this game was deeper than most horror indie games. It had a message. That's great, that makes the game much more than just an experience.

2. It spooked me so much. Nothing really happened but I was on the edge for the whole basement section of the game. Well done!

3. I felt the sadness. It's cool how you managed to appeal to the common depression experiences people have.

Disadvantages:

1. It's a bit empty. Like I said before, nothing really happened. On the one hand, it's understandable to provide the message of the game. On the other hand, I think that there were so many opportunities to make the game scarier.

2. It's basically the same point as before but a different suggestion. The basement section feels dragged out because, well, nothing's really happening there. Maybe it would be better to make it shorter or to make it scarier (then it's the previous point in the section).

Overall:

I rate the game 5/5 stars here on itch. I felt it and I loved it.

Hope my feedback was useful!


*btw played your chimney prowler and Dia and I want to say that you've grown a lot as a developer / developers) Great job!

Pros and cons are down below) 

Check out my gameplay here:

Advantages:

1. The creatures are amazing! They are gigantic and very very mencaing. I absolutely love the choice of enemies.

2. Each battle is different from the other. Bosses have different mechanics and you need to use different tactics in order to slay them. Fantastic! Moreover, you get more tricks to surprise your enemies)

3. The difficulty is absolutely beatable but still challenging. It's perfectly balanced battles that were sweaty to me but I managed to win from the first time.


Disadvantages:

1. The world seems empty apart from bosses. It would be cool to add some kind of trophies in your hub or journals that reveal the story.

2. Lack of lore. It's cool to have an awesome boss-battling game. But at least a bit of a story would be nice. Like in the cuphead. You had at least a bit of plot. And this game has such a humongous potential for great lore!

Overall:

I rate this game 5/5 stars here on itch. Great job! I'll definitely check the other bosses I haven't slain in the vid yet and will keep tracking this game's progress. Awesome job so far!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Why did you assume that  I didn't understand "at all the fact that you follow the enemy's lead in almost every single section".

I did, thanks.

Ppl are different. If I'd start from the bottom, I'd get bored immediately. I always start from the hardest difficulties so I'm kind of used to them. I mean it's not like I started playing something like Milf right off the bat ahah. I started from normal doable songs on week 5 which I feel was a perfect difficulty. I miss the pink arrows on every level no matter which one so Ig it's NOT the case of starting with smth challenging. They just sneak up on me even if I know they must be thereafter "following the enemy's lead".

Jeez at that point I feel like this conversation is so pointless. The game is great. If you think that overloading with colors is not the game's problem but my problem, ok, ppl are entitled to their own opinions. As I am entitled to mine. But I really really don't need your advice on how to start the game, please (I don't mean to be rude). I have my own learning curve and it's faster and simpler when it starts from something challenging. That's how I do things. Thank you for your concern nonetheless.

Hm, I think you misunderstood me. My whole point was that these games normally don't pose a challenge and I'm so glad that it's not the case. So, it's kind of weird that you are telling me to play tutorial and easy week 1... 
In the 1st disadvantage, I wasn't talking about the "feel for the game" I was talking about being overwhelmed with colors. I have the feel for the game, I've beaten it on hard and I even attached the vid so this kind of conversation wouldn't happen but oh well... My point is that the colors still throw me off, especially the left pink. I'm not color blind so that's why I mentioned it assuming that it might be the case for other ppl too. My eyes hurt after playing this game for like 20 minutes. It's too much. Maybe it would be nice to allow the players to control the saturation in the settings. Maybe that would help. Or maybe I'm the only one with this problem.

Other than that, I agree with you.

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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. The music is super nice! I think that's the most important advantage that makes the whole game extremely fun to play! I played it on hard and I'm not the best so I failed a lot but the music didn't cease to be fun to listen to! Super cool!

2. The characters are amazing! I like their little animations and outfits. The characters are entertaining to look at and generally interesting. The only bland character is the main one in my humble opinion. But it's ok, why would we look at the main character anyway?

3. I LOVE the design of the levels. There's always so much going on! There are easter egg characters in the background, there's lore. I loved how the dad held Santa hostage on week 5! Absolutely incredible!

4. The hard mode actually poses a challenge. I'm honestly not a fan of these types of games but I had a blast trying to beat hard. It's so cool that it's actually challenging! It makes the game so much more fun in my opinion!

Disadvantages:

1. There are so many colors - it's hard to concentrate on the arrows at first. Especially the left one on week 5. It kind of blends in with the environment. And it's not such a big issue cuz after some learning you get used to it. But the game still overwhelms with colors at first. I don't know what to suggest here to improve that tho. I love the design a lot. But it's so hard to see the arrows sometimes especially the left one.

2. Ok, I'm not the best and I challenge myself to beat hard so it takes a loooot of tries for me. So the annoying part is the delay in between the tries. This split second of nothingness before the count starts becomes annoying really fast. I just wish that the game would start faster if it's not the first time you are trying the level.

Overall:

Amazing! The game is so incredibly cool, I didn't expect that at all! Now I see why all the people like it so much! I'll definitely play more on my channel so if you want to support me and sub, I would appreciate it immensely! Thanks for reading this thread till the end and have a nice day <3 Oh, yeah, I rate this game 10 lemon demons / 10 (officially I rate it 5 on itch so I'm gonna go and drop a 5-star rating).

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The game is so spooky! Well done! I enjoyed every scare the game had and it surprised me a lot. I feel like even if the concept of "going into the same room that changes a bit" isn't new, you managed to make the game look fresh nonetheless. Very cool!

2. The storytelling is amazing. I love how you give hints to the player but it's up to them to decide what has actually happened. 

3. The secrets! Yay! The fact that this game had secrets hidden everywhere made me replay the game. That means that you did a nice job of making the player want to know more and try again. Moreover, the secrets were kind of cool. And the fact that there are different endings is also awesome. (I put it here because I feel that you need to collect secrets to get the other ending but I might be wrong and it might have been a total coincidence for me))

Disadvantages:

1. The lack of background music! Any non-intrusive music would be better than the lack of music. I know that it's kinda hard to choose fitting music but I feel that it's still a "must-have". If you intentionally made the game silent then you could add the "sound of silence" - a wind behind the window or neighbors walking upstairs or the floor creaking to make the ambiance stronger. Or even better - make the radio play a non-intrusive non-copyrighted song that can be turned off if the player wants to experience the game in total silence.

2. The face in the darkness. It is an incredible spook, don't get me wrong. But it doesn't fit the game whatsoever. I guess the style of it reminded me of some creepypastas and stuff like that and it felt completely out of place. I would suggest replacing it with something more subtle, not so "in your face". Here's my suggestion that might inspire you: make the player go inside a dark room, close the door behind them so they will stay in (almost) complete darkness, then make the face (normal-sized face) appear (maybe with a sound cue to attract palyer's attention), and after they approach it, then continue with your sequence. That way players would have no chance of missing this great spook but it wouldn't fall out of the whole picture at the same time being too bright and distorted.

Overall:

I rate this game 4.6 fire axes out of 5 (officially 5 in the rate section). This is an incredible game with great spooks. It's fun to replay and to investigate more thoroughly. But it could be so much better if some minor details would get polished. Can't wait to see more from you! Stay awesome, devs!

Hope my feedback was useful!

*btw played your game called Lights out before and I wanted to say that this game is so much better! It's very cool to see you grow as (a) developer(s)!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!)):


Advantages

1. The game was so spooky! It's cool that it was able to scare me so much with subtle stuff and changes in ambiance. Very well done!

2. I really liked the humor of "nothing being there". I think the mixture of horror and comedy turned out to be ideal, at least in my opinion. I really really enjoyed that!

Disadvantages:

1. There was nothing there. Honestly, I wish there would be a way to open this suspicious door that had something there. Is there a way? Maybe I was just too stupid to find it.

2. The ending is sooo anticlimactic! I wish there would be more to that! And also after such a great ambiance and tension-building, the jumpscare seemed to be even cheaper :(

Overall:

This game deserves the best rating possible! 5 somethings / 5 somethings. Tho, there was nothing really there, so I don't even know what I am reviewing at the moment...

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The subtle scares were so good! The chair scare, the noises, and even the jumpscare - I enjoyed every part of the adventure. Jumpscare was a bit cheap, tho, but I still liked it a lot. It scared me and gave me chills so I believe that this game is a good horror game.

2. Tho lore was so cool. I was so happy to play a lore-heavy game. It was very fun. I appreciate the effort that was put into creating this story, I liked it a lot, it was very creepy!

Disadvantages:

1. The notes were really obnoxious, honestly. I mean, I know that you've changed them a bit cuz before there was no option for reading the text pressing RM. But still, it's so counterintuitive that you can scroll even tho there's a tip on the top. IT feels like you can scroll the note, not the text that appears after pressing RM. And also there were so many mistakes. Normally, I don't care about them as I'm also not native and I make a ton myself. But these notes had an overwhelming amount of mistakes even for my liking.

2. The phone calls were too quiet and the dialogues were a bit weird. Like too very shy people are talking so they make lots of very awkward pauses. I don't know. I actually feel kinda bad neat picking at this because I feel that I wouldn't enjoy the game as much if there wouldn't be lore like this. Still, I feel that there is room for improvement. 

Overall:

I rate this game 4.5 psychos / 5 (5 officially). It was a great game but there are still some places that could have been improved further. Anyway, can't wait for more games from you, amazing job!

Hope my feedback was useful!

I've made a comment about the 2.0.0. update already, so here I'm going to analyze the pros and cons of update 2.0.1.

Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. 2.0.0. felt impossible to beat (which I wrote in my previous comment). This version seems to be well balanced and beatable. Tho, I haven't beat it on the vid due to the lack of time ahaha. Still, it seems possible to finish.

2. Well, now saiko gives more chances to escape. Also, if she finds the player in the locker, there's a chance that she won't insta down them as soon as she sees them anymore which is also an improvement comparing to the previous version of the game.

Disadvantages:

1. The little rooms under the stairs don't seem to be of much help in this version of the game. She can glitch through the door with no problem.

2. I feel like if you were checking all the rooms and missed 1 locker in 1 room that had a key (bad luck) - there's no way to beat the game. Maybe it would be very cool to add some hints on easy mode so people would understand how that happens and how to avoid this situation playing on more difficult levels. I haven't really noticed much difference between easy and normal at this point.

3. It's really easy to trick her into hiding behind a pillar if you are in the corridor. If you are backing away slowly and looking at her - she'll hide behind a pillar giving you more time to escape. This behavior seems very repetitive after a while. I haven't really shown it in the vid tho, but it happened during my streams on twitch a lot.

Overall:

I feel that the 2.0.1. version is much better than the previous one. And the previous one was insanely good! 

Habu, you are doing such a great job and I'm happy I joined your discord channel btw (recommend everybody joining as well). I was very busy lately, but I hope to be more useful in the future! Sorry for leaving the comment here in case you see it) As this is the comment about version 2.0.1, I though it wouldn't hurt to leave my opinion here)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

The game was super creepy and I feel like there was more to the story than it seemed. I feel like the game gave hints about the fate of the world but it was up to the player to figure out what is going on and I really really liked it! The cat was adorable as well :3

Disadvantages:

I wish there would be a bit more to the gameplay than getting to point B and then back to point A. Also, I believe the game would benefit a lot from having more spooks and scares as it is a horror game after all. I haven't felt like this was a horror, it seemed to be more like a relaxing adventure than a horror experience. I wish there would be more secrets hidden here and there (and maybe there were some secrets that I just haven't found). At the moment the game feels kind of empty.

Overall:

I rate this game 4 adorable cats / 5. I feel it's an intriguing and relaxing adventure with lore that's been told through the environment (which is pretty cool). But it's not a horror experience and it feels kind of empty.

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, the game is the 2d there)):


Advantages:

The concept is very cool! I really enjoyed being at the same time in the game and in the game inside the game. It's cool that you could see how your actions affect both worlds and how the player is walking on the monitor when you are away from the computer. I t was something new and I enjoyed it a lot! 

Disadvantages:

I guess it would be cooler if there would be an option to change the outcome and to save the player. Also, I would prefer if the creepy sounds would mean something more instead of just being creepy ambiance cues. When you hear someone walking around it would be really cool if that would be an actual thing. Also, I was expecting the door to give me a spook, I think it was such a good opportunity!

Overall:

I would rate this game 4 meta demons / 5. Enjoyed playing it a lot but I still believe that it could be scarier. The concept was very cool and original tho)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, the game is the 2d there)):

Advantages:

The concept is very cool! I really enjoyed being at the same time in the game and in the game inside the game. It's cool that you could see how your actions affect both worlds and how the player is walking on the monitor when you are away from the computer. I t was something new and I enjoyed it a lot! 

Disadvantages:

I guess it would be cooler if there would be an option to change the outcome and to save the player. Also, I would prefer if the creepy sounds would mean something more instead of just being creepy ambiance cues. When you hear someone walking around it would be really cool if that would be an actual thing. Also, I was expecting the door to give me a spook, I think it was such a good opportunity!

Overall:

I would rate this game 4 meta demons / 5. Enjoyed playing it a lot but I still believe that it could be scarier. The concept was very cool and original tho)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

The game has an eerie feeling to it which is an incredible thing for a horror experience. There's always a feeling of something being off and I think it's really cool that you achieved that. There are different lines the mother says the more you wait, the way her head turns like 360 degrees, and more... cool!

Disadvantages:

Well, what the heck with flying meatballs and red lines? I mean, it's kinda weird and I couldn't understand whether the main character is having a trip or it's just bizarre. I think these things ruined the ambiance a bit (at least for me). I believe it would be way better to make more subtle changes in the environment as you did with the mother's face. For example, slowly change the color of the walls, make the room slightly darker each time. make some red stains appear on the floor... Stuff like that.  In my personal opinion, it would be way cooler! 

Overall:

I think this game definitely deserves 4 / 5 star rating. It could be a bit scarier and the ambiance could be stronger but it's still very cool as is and I genuinely enjoyed playing the game! Well done!))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The style of this game is amazing! I absolutely love it! The red and black seemed to be very brave and innovative to use and I'm glad you tried it out! Looks amazing!

2. The story and the spooks are just top-notch! I really loved it and got scared several times. I wish there would be another ending to that though...

Disadvantages:

1. The game feels unfinished. As I said, it would be cool to have another ending as the game seems to end abruptly as is. I wish there would be a way to fight the creature and throw it out of the house.

2. What's with the completely dark room? I hoped it has some secrets but found none :( It made me so curious and so disappointed at the same time :( I wish there would be more to that !!!

Overall:

I think that's incredible, I rate it 4.85 / 5 stars. Great job on this game! Can't wait for more games from you!))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. Near the end the game got scary! It was very cool to see an actual enemy as I didn't expect to meet one.

2. The ambiance is very cool and I love those bits of story that we got to see in the demo from the newspaper, paintings, and environment. Clearly, a lot of thought was put into the story which makes it promising for the full game.

3. I really liked the pacing especially the spooks in the room with the soldier. I think that was done marvelously!

Disadvantages:

1. I think the game would benefit a lot from having options to read texts normally (like to press a button and then you see what's written on a paper but you don't have to turn the paper constantly and adjust angles which were pretty annoying).

2. The paintings didn't match the environment at all. Sometimes these paintings are very well done or a bit funky but creepy. These were neither so I didn't really like it. Though, the one with the soldier in a room when the enemy could be seen for the first time was very good. Maybe it would be nice to add a bit more color and get make them a bit crazier (a bit messier instead of "clean lines"). Though I don't really know what you were going for, I'm just telling you my personal opinion.

Overall:

It was a great demo which made the game seem promising and interesting. I'll check out your game on steam) Keep up the great work!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. This game is so very cute! Adorable! The environment, the story, and the animations are just so well done and so wholesome! Really enjoyed playing the game.

2. Everything rhymes! And the voice is soothing. I absolutely loved listening to the story!

Disadvantages:

1. It would be cool id the snowman could get mad if the penguin would mess up their face! Maybe it would be so cool if the game would have an alternative path for being a "bad penguin". Though, I understand that it would require a lot more work. Still, I'm pretty sure the game would turn out to be great!

Overall:

The cutest game I played in a long time, great job! Keep up the amazing work))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid out here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The game is spooky. Santa crept up on me a couple of times and spooked me good. Especially in the basement area of the metro.

2. It's hilarious. Just imagine that Santa had a mental breakdown from working too hard and all the pressure of Christmas and delivering presents. Santa went a bit nuts. I think that the concept is pretty funny as is but the cheerful music during some of the sneaking around scenes add as well)

3. The boss fight was pretty cool. It took me a couple of tries to beat Santa and I didn't expect that. Normally the boss fights in these games are either too simple or too hard. This was very well balanced.

4. The story is very cool as well. I didn't expect to get any story at all but it actually made me a bit sad right off the bat. Very well done!

Disadvantages:

1. The police are stupid, my god! Apart from that, I don't even know what one could possibly add to the game to make it better. It seemed pretty balanced to me. There was some fighting, sneaking, and running away from Santa and it all was pretty entertaining.

Overall:

Clearly, this game is a 5/5 star experience. I really enjoyed playing it!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly and highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. I liked the story a lot even though it has some holes in the plot (the 2d point in the disadvantages section). I think it was pretty cool that there were several chapters and locations to explore.

2. I liked that it was pretty logical where to go at all times. The player was either led forward by the lights or the gates. Really enjoyed that.

3. I think the witch was pretty scary. She had some nice dance moves as well) Great job creating a scary-looking monster! I got scared a couple of times especially when I didn't expect her to come at me (near the end of the game that happened).

Disadvantages:

1. What are the villagers doing? Before the disappearance, they are at least seem to be picking flowers and at the end of the game, their actions make no sense at all. Kind of weird.

2. The person who stole the rock left the note before the witch killed them and before the disappearance. How could they know about the disappearance? And if they knew, why couldn't they bring the stone back themselves? And why is the main character - the only one to survive the witch and the only one that hasn't disappeared. I feel like the story could have been a bit smoother. And if they knew that everybody has disappeared, why would they leave a note in the first place?

Overall:

I think the game was pretty cool. The plot was the main advantage of the game but it still had some holes (or the story just didn't explain some moments) so I rate the game 4/5 stars. I feel that there's still room for further development but it was a pretty good game nonetheless!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, of course <3):


As I'm writing these comments for each update, I'm going to discuss only this particular one)

Advantages:

1. The layout of the school now feels more interesting. It seems to be closer to the layout of actual schools and generally, I really liked it. There is a disadvantage to it that I'm going to mention later, though) I loved that you kept the misplaced chairs and tables from the last updates. Enjoyed the new cabinets in the classrooms a lot. They look cool, they make the player stay longer in the room so I think that's a great idea!

2. Two personalities! That's just amazing! Exactly what this game needed and I mentioned that in my last comment. Of course, such a change in mechanics has disadvantages as well (the 2d disadvantage below) but overall it's a great improvement to the game! I hope that in the next updates more ways of influencing Yandere's mood will be introduced. At the moment, the changes I saw were incredible. The new behavior of her offering drugs is also pretty cool. It's a pity that I haven't seen much of the other behaviors like talking to the player when they are in the locker and then leaving them (not even once :( ) but I guess that happens because her choice of behaviors is so wide that the probability of seeing particular ones is lower. The only last thing that I want to add here is that the change between the identities is perfect. It's partly clear but still makes the player wonder whether they are dealing with Yandere or Yangire. Very well done!

3. New mini-game for switching the lights on is very nice! I enjoyed that it keeps you in place but it's relatively easy and fast to solve at the same time! Can't wait for more) 

Disadvantages:

1. The disadvantage of the new layout I mentioned before is that it's much harder to lose yandere when she noticed you. Before you had lots of corners and the distances were smaller. Now it's so much harder to make her lose sight of you! Also, the only new cabinets I disliked being in the first spawn room. The brown ones. They don't look interactable at all. They are too low and they look exactly like the rest of the closet. That's confusing.

2. OK, what I didn't like about new identities is that there's not many options to influence her mood (I guess I already mentioned that). Also, considering that it's so hard to lose her now it feels kinda unfair that she keeps stalking you constantly. I think it would be great if you could give Yandere (when she's nice) a small task (to fetch you healies or something like that) and that would make her run away (but then she'd get pissed that you hid from her). Or something like that.

3. At that point because the map became bigger and it's harder to sneak around it, it's incredibly important to make the difference between voice level and position distinctive so you would be able to know for sure where she's at the moment. How far and general direction as well. Right now it's confusing and luck-based whether you're going to run into her or not. I guess she could also become silent from time to time to fool you and stuff like that.

Overall:

Amazing update!) That was so great, I had lots of fun checking it our and I will for sure try my best to beat it) For now, I rate it 10 scary Yandere girls out of 10! Can't wait to see how the game will be improved next))

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated, of course <3):

As I'm writing these comments for each update, I'm going to discuss only this particular one)

Advantages:

1. The layout of the school now feels more interesting. It seems to be closer to the layout of actual schools and generally, I really liked it. There is a disadvantage to it that I'm going to mention later, though) I loved that you kept the misplaced chairs and tables from the last updates. Enjoyed the new cabinets in the classrooms a lot. They look cool, they make the player stay longer in the room so I think that's a great idea!

2. Two personalities! That's just amazing! Exactly what this game needed and I mentioned that in my last comment. Of course, such a change in mechanics has disadvantages as well (the 2d disadvantage below) but overall it's a great improvement to the game! I hope that in the next updates more ways of influencing Yandere's mood will be introduced. At the moment, the changes I saw were incredible. The new behavior of her offering drugs is also pretty cool. It's a pity that I haven't seen much of the other behaviors like talking to the player when they are in the locker and then leaving them (not even once :( ) but I guess that happens because her choice of behaviors is so wide that the probability of seeing particular ones is lower. The only last thing that I want to add here is that the change between the identities is perfect. It's partly clear but still makes the player wonder whether they are dealing with Yandere or Yangire. Very well done!

3. New mini-game for switching the lights on is very nice! I enjoyed that it keeps you in place but it's relatively easy and fast to solve at the same time! Can't wait for more) 

Disadvantages:

1. The disadvantage of the new layout I mentioned before is that it's much harder to lose yandere when she noticed you. Before you had lots of corners and the distances were smaller. Now it's so much harder to make her lose sight of you! Also, the only new cabinets I disliked being in the first spawn room. The brown ones. They don't look interactable at all. They are too low and they look exactly like the rest of the closet. That's confusing.

2. OK, what I didn't like about new identities is that there's not many options to influence her mood (I guess I already mentioned that). Also, considering that it's so hard to lose her now it feels kinda unfair that she keeps stalking you constantly. I think it would be great if you could give Yandere (when she's nice) a small task (to fetch you healies or something like that) and that would make her run away (but then she'd get pissed that you hid from her). Or something like that.

3. At that point because the map became bigger and it's harder to sneak around it, it's incredibly important to make the difference between voice level and position distinctive so you would be able to know for sure where she's at the moment. How far and general direction as well. Right now it's confusing and luck-based whether you're going to run into her or not. I guess she could also become silent from time to time to fool you and stuff like that.

Overall:

Amazing update!) That was so great, I had lots of fun checking it our and I will for sure try my best to beat it) For now, I rate it 10 scary Yandere girls out of 10! Can't wait to see how the game will be improved next))

Hope my feedback was useful!

OMG can't wait to try it out!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. That was so much fun! The game is the purest form of fun. You can kick enemies into oblivion, shoot them, and throw guns at them. That was amazing.

2. I really liked the style of the game. It's so colorful and vivid and still somehow relaxing in a weird way... It's very pleasing to look at. And the pumping music is just right for this game.

Disadvantages:

1. Only 3 levels for such a fun game :( I need moreeeee.

2. What was that ending? I mean, what was that all about? I need more lore! At least a voice line in the end or an epilogue would be nice.

Overall:

I rate this 5/5 stars. A brief, vivid and entertaining experience. There is not much that could be said really, just great job! Well done) Looking forward to seeing more games from you))

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 3d there, likes and subs are highly and highly appreciated!)):

Advantages:

1. It was hilarious! I loved the plot of this short game)

2. The game scared me a bit. I don't think that it was the intention but the ghost is very scary when you don't really know what to do and how to play yet.

3. IT"S THE THIRSTIEST TIME OF THE YEAR!

4. At this point, the game became an annual tradition of popping up on the top places of itch's horror games.

Disadvantages:

1. Well, the ghost was a bit funky. They would go through the fence and hit the player through the doors. Though, naruto-running was really fun.

2. The main character took a lot of time to explain what is need to be done. The first time one will die no matter what as it takes such a long time to read that first one should hide and then take Fanta and run towards the gas station.

Overall:

I rate this game 4/5 stars. It was enjoyable but weird. I wouldn't call this a horror game though I got spooked once. Still, it was funny and I enjoyed playing this. Also, this game is rather old, so I don't even know if anybody would care about me rating the game at this point :) Merry Christmas) 

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. That was something new! It had SCP containment breach vibes, of course, but the game was still original in every way possible! The mechanics (though simple) were rather appealing - the fact that the character had several lines for reporting using a walkie-talkie (or whatever it's called) for the same sighting is very cool! (especially enjoyed "oh f*ck" ones at the end))

2. I loved the story and the details in the facility. Enjoyed reading the notes on the walls and it's so nice that the game gave you just enough time to do that. The moment (and the note) with the cups was amazing! Such a cool little detail. Like, yeah, they have also escaped, but I have bigger problems over here.

3. I think the ending was cool. I think it was perfect. A little bit of irony always makes the story a bit spicier. I think that it wouldn't be as great if you'd finish it after the neutralization of the entity.

4. Voice acting!

5. The game saved progress on each floor so even if the player woul'd die - they don't have to replay the whole game again. 

Disadvantages:

1. Well, the hints at the walls don't really make sense as the entity kills almost immediately (as one can see upon failing the game). Who'd leave a note for the only other fighter so high on the wall in a dying state. I know that this is a bit nitpicky but that's what I thought when I saw these bloody notes on the wall. Maybe it would be better to let someone scream that before dying before the main character's eyes or something like that in order to keep the immersion.

2. I also didn't really like that we are constantly going down but the floor count is going up.

3. The entity can block the walkie-talkie signal but can't affect the elevator in any way? That was very weird. Maybe the game would benefit a lot from letting the character get stuck in the elevator at some point for a brief time (it would allow them to comment that and explain why the elevators are still going).

Overall:

Amazing! 5/5 definitely. It's a pity I can't rate the game on jam as I don't have my own submissions, I would like to help you out so much! That was great. It's obvious how much effort was put into the game (in such a short time) and that you thought about the players a lot and made everything to create a comfortable experience. Great job! Can't wait for more games form you!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. That was something new! It had SCP containment breach vibes, of course, but the game was still original in every way possible! The mechanics (though simple) were rather appealing - the fact that the character had several lines for reporting using a walkie-talkie (or whatever it's called) for the same sighting is very cool! (especially enjoyed "oh f*ck" ones at the end))

2. I loved the story and the details in the facility. Enjoyed reading the notes on the walls and it's so nice that the game gave you just enough time to do that. The moment (and the note) with the cups was amazing! Such a cool little detail. Like, yeah, they have also escaped, but I have bigger problems over here.

3. I think the ending was cool. I think it was perfect. A little bit of irony always makes the story a bit spicier. I think that it wouldn't be as great if you'd finish it after the neutralization of the entity.

4. Voice acting!

5. The game saved progress on each floor so even if the player woul'd die - they don't have to replay the whole game again. 

Disadvantages:

1. Well, the hints at the walls don't really make sense as the entity kills almost immediately (as one can see upon failing the game). Who'd leave a note for the only other fighter so high on the wall in a dying state. I know that this is a bit nitpicky but that's what I thought when I saw these bloody notes on the wall. Maybe it would be better to let someone scream that before dying before the main character's eyes or something like that in order to keep the immersion.

2. I also didn't really like that we are constantly going down but the floor count is going up.

3. The entity can block the walkie-talkie signal but can't affect the elevator in any way? That was very weird. Maybe the game would benefit a lot from letting the character get stuck in the elevator at some point for a brief time (it would allow them to comment that and explain why the elevators are still going).

Overall:

Amazing! 5/5 definitely. It's a pity I can't rate the game on jam as I don't have my own submissions, I would like to help you out so much! That was great. It's obvious how much effort was put into the game (in such a short time) and that you thought about the players a lot and made everything to create a comfortable experience. Great job! Can't wait for more games form you!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. The idea is very cool! I really enjoyed how immersive it was, the secret notes here and there, and the existing survey at the end! That was awesome! Also, I liked that there are some pieces of lore that can be missed

2. The game managed to scare me. Even though the game used cheap jumpscares, it also created very strong suspense and tension, which made the jumpscares more effective. So, I really enjoyed the horror aspect of this game.

Disadvantages:

1. Well, as I've already mentioned the jumpscares were pretty cheap. The last one was hanging on the screen for way too long that it managed to become annoying for me. Didn't really like that. BUT I mention again that this is NOT the only horror element of the game, so that's not a big disadvantage.

2. The ending (assuming there is only one ending, Idk really) is predictable and, thus, a bit anticlimactic.

Overall:

I think the game deserves the highest rating! 5/5 (it's a pity I can't rate this on the jam as I don't have my own submission, I would love to help out!)) It broke the 4th wall a bit and though the ending was a bit disappointing, the game was original in many other ways. Great job! Can't wait for more games from you!)

Hope my feedback was useful!


*Played the other game Thy Flesh a while ago and wanted to say that this (ghost study) game is so much better! You are growing as the developer (or developers) and that's awesome!) Can't wait for more)

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The idea is very cool! I really enjoyed how immersive it was, the secret notes here and there, and the existing survey at the end! That was awesome! Also, I liked that there are some pieces of lore that can be missed

2. The game managed to scare me. Even though the game used cheap jumpscares, it also created very strong suspense and tension, which made the jumpscares more effective. So, I really enjoyed the horror aspect of this game.

Disadvantages:

1. Well, as I've already mentioned the jumpscares were pretty cheap. The last one was hanging on the screen for way too long that it managed to become annoying for me. Didn't really like that. BUT I mention again that this is NOT the only horror element of the game, so that's not a big disadvantage.

2. The ending (assuming there is only one ending, Idk really) is predictable and, thus, a bit anticlimactic.

Overall:

I think the game deserves the highest rating! 5/5 (it's a pity I can'r rate this on the jam as I don't have my own submission, I would love to help out!)) It broke the 4th wall a bit and though the ending was a bit disappointing, the game was original in many other ways. Great job! Can't wait for more games from you!)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 3d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. The mechanics are very original! I never saw something like that before and never expected a fridge to be threatening and scary! I'm going to keep an eye on my fridges from now on)

2. I really enjoyed the detalisation. So many notes with a piece of lore and story, objects and boxe. Really makes the place seem alive.

3. Different endings! The fact that there is a different animation for each end is such a treat! Great job! Disadvantages:

1. I think the main issue is the lack of "tutorial" in the game. It would be nice to have a note which would explain that the player can drag objects as well as interact with them. I know that this is explained on the game page but it's more convenient to have key bindings written in the game somewhere.

2. The other thing that I didn't like is that we can start spelling the fridge's name before we find a note that says the name. I think that's kind of weird. But oh, well, it doesn't really make the game worse.

Overall:

Definitely 5/5! Such a great game! Such a great experience! I loved it! I wish I could rate the game on the jam to help you out, but, unfortunately, I can't. Wish you good luck!) Can't wait to see more games from you)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 3d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. The mechanics are very original! I never saw something like that before and never expected a fridge to be threatening and scary! I'm going to keep an eye on my fridges from now on)

2. I really enjoyed the detalisation. So many notes with a piece of lore and story, objects and boxe. Really makes the place seem alive.

3. Different endings! The fact that there is a different animation for each end is such a treat! Great job!
Disadvantages:

1. I think the main issue is the lack of "tutorial" in the game. It would be nice to have a note which would explain that the player can drag objects as well as interact with them. I know that this is explained on the game page but it's more convenient to have key bindings written in the game somewhere.

2. The other thing that I didn't like is that we can start spelling the fridge's name before we find a note that says the name. I think that's kind of weird. But oh, well, it doesn't really make the game worse.

Overall:

Definitely 5/5! Such a great game! Such a great experience! I loved it! I wish I could rate the game on the jam to help you out, but, unfortunately, I can't. Wish you good luck!) Can't wait to see more games from you)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):


Advantages:

1. That was hilarious! I mean, c'mon the "big reveal of everything making sense" was so unpredictable, kmsl. Great job on building suspense and tension but still sneaking in funny jokes. Poor unappreciated cookie btw)

2. OMG the voice acting and the little story at the start and in the end. I mean, this game deserves a high rating! This was marvelous! Great job coming up with the plot and the story!

3. I loved that the game had different mechanics. I mean I totally didn't expect the car part after the chase scene. That was a very nice surprise!

Disadvantages:

1. I feel that the voices were too quite in comparison to sound. In order to make sense of what was said, I had to use some filters to make the music duck each time somebody speaks. I think that the game would benefit a lot from making the character louder at least at the start and in the end.

2. The whole place seemed to be so empty. I mean, I get that you had limited time to develop the game but you could still make the place seem livable. A bit more furniture and stuff like that would make the game much more immersive.

3. Driving part was a bit annoying. Still beatable, though. I guess that the part after Santa started pursuing the car was nice and a bit challenging but the part before that with em weird turns here and there was really annoying. 

Overall:

I rate the game 5/5. I mean, it made me laugh and it scared me. I really enjoyed playing the game. It's a pity, I can't really rate the game on the jam as I don't have my own submissions, I would really really like to help you out! I hope you'll win :)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there, likes and subs are highly appreciated)):

Advantages:

1. That was hilarious! I mean, c'mon the "big reveal of everything making sense" was so unpredictable, kmsl. Great job on building suspense and tension but still sneaking in funny jokes. Poor unappreciated cookie btw)

2. OMG the voice acting and the little story at the start and in the end. I mean, this game deserves a high rating! This was marvelous! Great job coming up with the plot and the story!

3. I loved that the game had different mechanics. I mean I totally didn't expect the car part after the chase scene. That was a very nice surprise!

Disadvantages:

1. I feel that the voices were too quite in comparison to sound. In order to make sense of what was said, I had to use some filters to make the music duck each time somebody speaks. I think that the game would benefit a lot from making the character louder at least at the start and in the end.

2. The whole place seemed to be so empty. I mean, I get that you had limited time to develop the game but you could still make the place seem livable. A bit more furniture and stuff like that would make the game much more immersive.

3. Driving part was a bit annoying. Still beatable, though. I guess that the part after Santa started pursuing the car was nice and a bit challenging but the part before that with them weird turns here and there was really annoying. 

Overall:

I rate the game 5/5. I mean, it made me laugh and it scared me. I really enjoyed playing the game. It's a pity, I can't really rate the game on the jam as I don't have my own submissions, I would really really like to help you out! I hope you'll win :)

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 1st there, likes and subs are highly and highly appreciated!)):


Advantages:

1. I really like the scares and the pacing. For such a short experience it was pretty scary. The first ones didn't get me but each time the scare was a bit better. Near the end I got scared and thus this game deserved an additional point in the "advantages" section).

2. I really liked the ambiance of the cabin. The style of the game looked cartoonish and very appealing. Nonetheless, the snowman looked scary. Also, I liked the storytelling through the environment (a melted snowman, hats, and blood here and there). Very cool!

Disadvantages:

1. There is a reason people are wondering about the different ending. It would be cool if one would actually exist. People are wondering cuz something doesn't feel right about the current ending. I get that the game was developed in a short period of time but you could add a very simple secret ending of leaving the cabin before starting to investigate (with an epilogue or something like that, for example). It would make the game instantly more interesting!

2. I guess the mere key hunting mechanic is a bit boring. But considering how fast this game was made, it can be forgiven) It's just nice to see original mechanics and ideas in these small indie games as they usually let the game stand out.

Overall:

I rate this experience 4/5 stars. I think it's a great game especially considering that it was made in 2 days! But the lack of other (even the most simple) ending and boring mechanics don't really let me give the game the perfect rating. Still, I think that it was great and I can't wait to see more games from you especially in the horror genre!

Hope my feedback was useful!

Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated!)):


Advantages:

1.  This game is great! I played Locked Up and was impressed but this blew my mind! The pacing was impeccable! I loved that there were lots of scares but not too much at the same time. The way the game made the player turn around constantly was really cool!

2. I liked very much these subtle scares of things just being somewhere on the second floor or outside the window. Subtly watching... Very creepy!

3. The sound design is also very cool! The sounds made me jump several times!

Disadvantages:

I didn't like some particular moments that I'm going to mention below:

1. The way the lady disappeared behind the pillar was so weird. It would be OK if at one point she would be completely blocked by the pillar but because the pillar was so thin it felt weird to see her half existing.

2. I think after the player would see the lady on the second floor she has to disappear. Because it feels extremely weird watching the lady watch you back and having no second thoughts, no comments about that.

3. The lack of the main character's comments also feels weird. I mean, it's so obvious that this house means bad news but the main character doesn't care at all. Maybe in the full game, it wouldn't feel weird as the players would have more context, though...

Overall:

This was so scary! Great job! I can't wait for the full game, adding it on the wishlist right now! 5/5.

Hope my feedback was useful!