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creeper, aw man

Just realized I played this game/rated it and forgot to leave a comment omg better late than never lol

First impression was that I loved the sounds that played when test displayed I actually made this exact face when the first customer spoke-->  :O It was a very delightful/satisfying sound to hear lol it reminded me of the sound laminated paper makes when you shake it. I really liked the character art a lot, they're all very nicely drawn with a great artstyle! I also enjoyed making the hotdogs :) Great job, I liked this game a lot and sent it to a couple friends I think might also enjoy it :D

Also once more the sounds are really great omg the sound of the kid eating was so adorable I audible said "awww" out loud lol it also made my cat get up and look around for what made the sound

OMG that's so nice to hear! If you ever do please let me know I'd wanna see it <3

Thanks for playing and commenting it means a lot :)

I'm glad to have been included in the creation for this game! :D Keep up the great work!

Thank you so much! Made my day with this comment :)

OMG thank you so much! I think you're the first person to say Amara is one of your favourites lol main characters always get overlooked in games but she's definitely got a personality to her as well :p Thanks for playing and commenting it means a lot to me, you totally just made my day with this comment :)

Thank you so much! :3

A very well put together game! I loved the voice acting a lot and thought it was well very written :) The sprite art was pretty and I LOVED that background art! It looks so nostalgic but I just can't place what it reminds me of :/

Overall great job to everyone involved this is a great visual novel I'm so happy that I had some time to sit down and play it today :)

:) :D I worked a lot on the characters so its good to know they came across as such <3  Thanks for playing and commenting :)

Loved the voice acting, everything came together so wonderfully in this. Great job! :)

You have a some good ideas, I might look  into adding more sound effects and music :)

Thank you for playing and leaving such a detailed comment :) <3

This game is amazing, great job the monster genuinely scared me so much <3 Loved it!

lol I've been seeing a lot of people react that way to Eden so you're not alone there ;P

Thank you so much for commenting I'm glad you liked it :D

Absolutely beautiful background art AND character designs! I loved Saoirse's design and then was absolutely awestruck when I saw Dionaea <3 <3 I love that character so  much! Great job to everyone on the team for such a well executed story !!

I was a little worried that detail would go unnoticed and I was just making unnecessary work for myself so I'm glad you pointed it out lol Thanks for the comment it made my day :p

Thank you so much :)

Thank you so much I'll be sure to pass on the compliment to artiethebeeboi that you liked his chibi art, he'll love to hear that :) Thank you so much for playing and leaving a nice comment I really appreciate it! <3

The pixel art was very fun and refreshing, I LOVED it so much- makes me want to try my hand at pixel art sometime it looked so good :0

Loved the sound effects in the game they all set a tone and atmosphere and helped make the game feel super polished and snappy (not sure if snappy is the right word in this context? Clean is the only substitute I can think of lol).

The character designs were great, I love characters with white hair :)

Great job on this game :D <3

Great start, the sound effects were great in it and I enjoyed reading that short blurb before jumping into the main story. I LOVE Cynthia's design a lot! The writing was really good at making me feel bad for Lou seeing him pout about the werewolf curse like he was :( The character writing is very good overall I like the way their relationships with each other were written.

I enjoyed talking with both of the characters a lot and thought it was an overall great experience. Good job! :) <3

I LOVED the art style for the sprites so much, your artist has such a wonderful eye for colour they're all so pretty to look at and fit with the background art very well! Great job on this game, I think it looks absolutely beautiful <3

I loved the art in this game so much! Amazing and unnerving story as well <3 Great job! <3

Very lovely art, I liked how the backgrounds outside looked like a painting though I thought it was a little inconsistent with the indoor background art which is a very different artstyle. I really liked the character design, white hair is so visually striking I love characters with it!

Interesting premise and well selected music. I enjoyed the story but thought that the ending was a bit abrupt, though maybe that was just the one ending I got by trying to not do the ritual and the others might be less so. Overall, good job on this game it was an enjoyable experience :)

Cute character designs, I really liked the bunny charm in Rabi's hair :) 

A very pretty game I absolutely ADORED all of the art and had so much fun looking at all the cats and cat themed items in the backgrounds! Absolutely adorable, great job!! :)

I liked the art style a lot! I really liked the sound that played when text appeared, it was very satisfying to listen to. Great job on this game :)

Aww thank you so much for such a nice comment! I'm so glad we met too, I've been loving your streams so far! :)

A very cute looking game with a creepy bird

Great job on this game :) I liked it a lot

Very unsettling atmosphere and the art was very good :) Great job!

The visuals are absolutely stunning here! Everything looked perfect! 

One thing I would change however is that the name/name box kind of clashes with the text box and artwork due to it being a bright pink, left over from one of ren'pys default colour schemes. I'd suggest making it black and maybe moving it or making a name box to go behind it. But this is a very small detail that I don't think you need to worry about if you don't want to since it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of the game, just a little thing I noticed a lot more since the text box fit so perfectly with the background.

I also thought that the text being white was a little difficult to read at some points since the text box is also a lighter colour. 

I absolutely adored the artwork in this game and the story was very well written, great job :)

I love the writing and art in this, that opening scene was the perfect way to start this story.  Beauty was my favourite character, you did a great job!

Right off the bat I loved the art style and thought it set the perfect tone for the story you were telling. I enjoyed the story and will definitely be returning to play more once I have more time on my hands. Great job!

A nice game. Very short and I would like to have seen more, but I really like the concept for where this is going. I like the drawing of the fortune teller. Good job! :)

Beautiful character designs I was so captivated by the little mushroom :)

Really enjoyed the story and music, the atmosphere in this game felt both spooky and cute to me at the same time, which is a thing I love in media <3 Great job!

The visuals here are BEAUTIFUL! I love the art style so much what a great use of colour here! Wonderful visual novel, great job! :)

I totally agree about the endings, I thought they felt a bit rushed but by that point in writing I was feeling a bit burnt out and decided to just leave it and maybe come back to it later- and I think I will now that you've reminded me about it. I'm glad you liked the minigames I had fun making them/trying to figure out how to incorporate them with ren'py.

Thanks for playing and commenting, I'll definitely think about ways to make the endings more fleshed out than they are now. :) 

I'm so glad you like the characters they mean a lot to me :3 I'm definitely going to do more with them in the future, thanks for playing !

Thanks! I totally agree with needing more spooky guys in the world lol And yeah I have plans to make more games with these characters both long and short form in the future :) Glad you liked it !

Aww thank you! I appreciate hearing that :) Bonnie is definitely really cute glad you liked her ! 

Loved the character designs! The story was written wonderfully and felt very suspenseful up to the very end, I enjoyed every moment of it! :)

(Also Sebastian did scare me a bit, great job on him)

Beautiful sprite art! I love the dress Sophia wears <3 All the ribbons and bows are so pretty to look at what a great character design <3 I enjoyed the story a lot, great job!! <3