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please dawn chorus I neeeed this

You keep bringing up “it took a year that dosnt justify the quantity”  IT HASNT, its been 1 month and that was for 3 routes which is insanely fast for a vn! I can’t name another vn that has such a consistent schedule, it’s amazing what they do. You’re reading 1/9ths of the story, probably even less cause of sub routes. As time progresses the stories seperate even more and more time is needed. I never said anything about rushing i just said it’s stupid and weird of you to write an essay criticizing the team for that. This is the equivalent of you saying “i’m only going to go outside for one month out of 12” then complain that the month was too short.

And yeah of course you are allowed to complain over free goods but the audacity today “it needs to be worth it” after the author took time to acknowledge your  stupid tantrum is appalling. Go look up the definition of consumer, then look up the definition of purchased. Clearly you have a lot of time on your hands, if you’re going to limit yourself to a book with such a large cast and be upset, then this story is NOT for you. “It’s really that simple 🤓👆”

Youre upset it was short, which makes sense BUT if youre only restricting yourself to one route of course its going to be slow progression. Its a dating sim with NINE characters each with their own subroutes. I dont generally understand critisism twords vn creators when they talk about timing cause duh its free, but if youre only going to read one route how can you complain about pacing? I hope the creators dont take your message to heart because if you really enjoyed the story youd read the rest of routes. They even wrote why in the devlog, I dont know where you find the privilage to say "if you’re going to release a new build, it needs to be worth it"

why would someone dislike this comment XD

the new devon looks like charlie kirk and i cant get it out of my head haha. I liked all the other sprite changes tho, hope they fix him soon so i can continue his route

i thought there might have been a haloween special but i dont think theres anything new

Oh wow that's interesting! Not bipolar but yeah he really could have DID that's a cool theory. I can't wait to see how this plays out, thanks for the video!

slight spoliers : gil route

Why is Walter lowkey scary? Like wanting to push Samuel out the school window to thinking of how to kill the thugs in the alley way. I couldnt reaccess that part though as soon as i scrolled back it disappeared. Its so out of character, are we ever given an explanation for this?

you know i thought I missed the old sprites with how upset many people were with the change but I have a much bigger appreciation for the new ones haha. This was a great update, it was fun seeing the old sprites again!

cant wait!

23??? Wow great work!

During the love reading we dont have an option for Eli, only dawid right? is this intentional :')

Wow that was great! Just when i thought ch 5 would end it just kept going, looking forward to future reads!

I think they both bring out charm in their respective vns

whats the other novel?

It's like dawn chorus and repeat, the art is better we just have to get use to it :')

Take your time! Im still amazed you are one manning 2 amazing vns by yourself 

I'm with u with this, I was shocked when i got to that scene. They had NO REASON to go all the way to 3rd base, they kinda put it in there and I had a good laugh

I was thinking the same thing! idk if youve read till the newest update but it seems that (spoilers*) the two characters are going to talk about it. Really cant wait

Are you subscribed to their Patreon? And if you think what you’re saying is critique you seriously need help, your essays you send are 90% straight  insults. At this point write your own story dawg, you clearly have the time for it

"Maybe you should take notes" "Are you actually failing yourself" Its a free game dude, the authors putting time and effort for no cost what so ever. If you dont like it, dont read it, but how could you say such things to somebody trying their best at a passion project? Have some shame

a week is acc crazy XD

which other one were u talking about?

lol

ur so real

Ever since the "car incident" my main menu has been stuck on this really depressing music. Its been like a year since i even read that route, even looking at the gallery is sucked out of its joy cause of the song. Is there any way to revert it?

For Granks page

“Grank does his best to watch over Artemi, providing her solace and reprieve from Her Excellency's sharp tongue whenever possible. It is heavily implied that he harbors romantic feelings for her”

I havnt read this in a while but is this true???

All are such great routes cause theyre all so differnet from each other. Juns was the most impactful but I gotta go all Shoichi routes, im a sucker for friends to lovers trope lol

same, I have to reread this again to unfuck my mind...

I should not have read all of that in one sitting, especially at night. With all the fuckary I probobly need to reread everything again... great story but so soo many questions

good way of telling ourselves we're not enjoying a story of sex trafficking and rape lol

If I never saw them how would I know I’m missing it? XD

Bunch of CGs dont appear on the gallery, did they not upate it or is my game glitched? :(

(i have terrible memory so this might be wrong) but after you helped him he had to do some manual labor type work on the document so he didnt need Arvos help anymore. Arvo left before he was finished (i think?)

CONGRATS ON FINISHING!!! Furries rejoice!

*spoilers for latest ch*

When Yuichi thought to himself  "the teachers surprisingly handsome like this" and then internally paniked I wonder what that was about. This is the first time we see him intresetd in a character outside of the dateable 4. WOTB does a great job at putting in foreshadowing like the "one step at a time" quote in the last day, so I got really worried thinking he might date the teacher instead or the teacher might do something really bad.  At the same time it could have just been forshadowing to the teacher being gay,  am I reading into this line too much? Why would the author put such a out of place thought if it wasnt significant to the story? Im preparing for the worst, what do you guys think? 

LMFAO SAME it shouuld come out this or next month, Ive been looking forward to it my entire highschool life XD

rainbow is prob right and I know this isnt much help but its only day 1 so you could restart if nothing works

SO HAPPY TB IS BACKKKK 

As a solo man project its crazy how fast youre pumping these out, we all love and appreciate it but dont overwork urself!