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Thanks so much for your response! Im shocked this is your first official time writing, the story's just incredible. The clarification makes lots of sense, thanks for answering my questions; its always great to see an author who cares about their readers. This is a free download so please dont feel like you owe us anything haha, no need to apologize for anything. We count down the days till the chap 4 release, cant wait for the update!

Reading this so far and I'm LOVING IT, your art is just amazing! Even making full drawings for minor moments, the care and effort you put into the drawings is easy to see; the art is spectacular! Thats why I ask, please add a gallery! I know you may think its not worth it because not many large CGs, but even being able to look at your portraits of Gray would make this so worth it, please consider!

I'm also loving the story but there's lots of unknown information thats kind of leaving me confused. Like I know Wanes past with Grey is hidden purposely, but what about Sara, we don't know anything about her relationship with Gray. Was she a girlfriend, best friend, or like a motherly caretaker of some sorts? Also when he forgets his keys he states he could walk over to Sarah's, who's an hour away, did they not share a house? Does she have 2 homes, and if they live in the countryside (in a town where most people know each other), how is anything an hour walk haha. And whats Greys job? maybe this is something thats left a secret but it feels like a plothole hes living without having to work, or moved to town without income but this could totally be explained later

Also what time period is this in? The ID card said 87 so im guessing 1900's or is this modern? And maybe even which country does this take place in? Im not sure if these are unintentionally left blank but please let us know! Especially with Sarah, the plots revenge feels a bit empty without knowing who she was to Grey, I think adding more to the prologue may be beneficial. (and something more minor) the transition from before and after the death is very sudden, not knowing the cause of death/ how the house got fixed feels a bit empty. Maybe an autopsy report, funeral, or even a "_ months later" would be nice

Oh and last thing, please add LGBT or Gay to the tags, you put romance but I had no idea if this was a gay novel till now which was one of the reasons I held off reading this. I really regret waiting this long cause Im loving it, very quick and easy addition. (also with how the plot is being set up, will this be nsfw?) I know this was all writing about things you should add but this is because I absolutely love everything already in the vn as well. Keep up the great work, cant wait till the next update!

Love the story so much! Really excited to see the new characters, i know this is really unlikley but really hoping you guys add back the sunglass wolf guy or the laughing lynx from the flashback, the character design was amazing! Cant wait for more

toolbox! (i think) he said it to emma cause asked the same thing haha

oh my god clicking to see your posted comments was such a mistake D: I know people have their kinks but.. 25 comments asking and critiquing games asking for it is insane. I hope nobody takes your opinion seriously after seeing this 

DON'T READ THIS IF YOURE NOT NOMAX, you have been warned 

What drew me and probably most readers of the vn is your amazing art; the visuals are just stunning! The writing and story are great too but your art is just museum-worthy, hands down the best out of any vn out there. We can see it took lots of effort to make it look this good, and because it's so good I am writing to say please fix the eyes!

Wolf is my fav character with my fav design by far, but he has his eyes crossed and looking up at his forehead like googly eyes. It's really hard to unsee and took out all immersion for the rest of his route when I saw it, it's pretty noticeable as well. When Wolf is glaring his eyes align and he looks at you perfectly though.  I think I know what you were going for, by showing the white of his eyes it contrasts his fur color, or maybe he's somebody who doesn't make eye contact? I think you did this really well with Arthur, where he's always looking away unless he's surprised or angry, but I feel like Wolf's character wouldn't do that. It's an easy fix and would let the rest of your character model shine! This isn't as important as its only one scene but the first time most of us see the main character is during the Peirce favor where Jame's eyes are going completely different directions, I thought maybe he had strabismus. It was hard reading the rest of the story till the next cg knowing my character looked like that.

These are (i believe) such easy fixes, and as someone who fell in love with this vn really hope for it to be updated! Your art is just amazing and I hate for this small thing to take away from it. Other than that love your work, cant wait for the next update!

this helped a ton, thanks a bunch!

ty so much, it was so worth it

I DIDNT GET A NOTIF I missed it nooooo

is there any way to still download it? I've always loved your arpil fools builds!

What’s the other apple recipe! I can’t figure it out!!!

please dawn chorus I neeeed this

You keep bringing up “it took a year that dosnt justify the quantity”  IT HASNT, its been 1 month and that was for 3 routes which is insanely fast for a vn! I can’t name another vn that has such a consistent schedule, it’s amazing what they do. You’re reading 1/9ths of the story, probably even less cause of sub routes. As time progresses the stories seperate even more and more time is needed. I never said anything about rushing i just said it’s stupid and weird of you to write an essay criticizing the team for that. This is the equivalent of you saying “i’m only going to go outside for one month out of 12” then complain that the month was too short.

And yeah of course you are allowed to complain over free goods but the audacity today “it needs to be worth it” after the author took time to acknowledge your  stupid tantrum is appalling. Go look up the definition of consumer, then look up the definition of purchased. Clearly you have a lot of time on your hands, if you’re going to limit yourself to a book with such a large cast and be upset, then this story is NOT for you. “It’s really that simple 🤓👆”

Youre upset it was short, which makes sense BUT if youre only restricting yourself to one route of course its going to be slow progression. Its a dating sim with NINE characters each with their own subroutes. I dont generally understand critisism twords vn creators when they talk about timing cause duh its free, but if youre only going to read one route how can you complain about pacing? I hope the creators dont take your message to heart because if you really enjoyed the story youd read the rest of routes. They even wrote why in the devlog, I dont know where you find the privilage to say "if you’re going to release a new build, it needs to be worth it"

why would someone dislike this comment XD

the new devon looks like charlie kirk and i cant get it out of my head haha. I liked all the other sprite changes tho, hope they fix him soon so i can continue his route

i thought there might have been a haloween special but i dont think theres anything new

Oh wow that's interesting! Not bipolar but yeah he really could have DID that's a cool theory. I can't wait to see how this plays out, thanks for the video!

slight spoliers : gil route

Why is Walter lowkey scary? Like wanting to push Samuel out the school window to thinking of how to kill the thugs in the alley way. I couldnt reaccess that part though as soon as i scrolled back it disappeared. Its so out of character, are we ever given an explanation for this?

you know i thought I missed the old sprites with how upset many people were with the change but I have a much bigger appreciation for the new ones haha. This was a great update, it was fun seeing the old sprites again!

cant wait!

23??? Wow great work!

During the love reading we dont have an option for Eli, only dawid right? is this intentional :')

Wow that was great! Just when i thought ch 5 would end it just kept going, looking forward to future reads!

I think they both bring out charm in their respective vns

whats the other novel?

It's like dawn chorus and repeat, the art is better we just have to get use to it :')

Take your time! Im still amazed you are one manning 2 amazing vns by yourself 

I'm with u with this, I was shocked when i got to that scene. They had NO REASON to go all the way to 3rd base, they kinda put it in there and I had a good laugh

I was thinking the same thing! idk if youve read till the newest update but it seems that (spoilers*) the two characters are going to talk about it. Really cant wait

Are you subscribed to their Patreon? And if you think what you’re saying is critique you seriously need help, your essays you send are 90% straight  insults. At this point write your own story dawg, you clearly have the time for it

"Maybe you should take notes" "Are you actually failing yourself" Its a free game dude, the authors putting time and effort for no cost what so ever. If you dont like it, dont read it, but how could you say such things to somebody trying their best at a passion project? Have some shame

a week is acc crazy XD

which other one were u talking about?

lol

ur so real