DON'T READ THIS IF YOURE NOT NOMAX, you have been warned
What drew me and probably most readers of the vn is your amazing art; the visuals are just stunning! The writing and story are great too but your art is just museum-worthy, hands down the best out of any vn out there. We can see it took lots of effort to make it look this good, and because it's so good I am writing to say please fix the eyes!
Wolf is my fav character with my fav design by far, but he has his eyes crossed and looking up at his forehead like googly eyes. It's really hard to unsee and took out all immersion for the rest of his route when I saw it, it's pretty noticeable as well. When Wolf is glaring his eyes align and he looks at you perfectly though. I think I know what you were going for, by showing the white of his eyes it contrasts his fur color, or maybe he's somebody who doesn't make eye contact? I think you did this really well with Arthur, where he's always looking away unless he's surprised or angry, but I feel like Wolf's character wouldn't do that. It's an easy fix and would let the rest of your character model shine! This isn't as important as its only one scene but the first time most of us see the main character is during the Peirce favor where Jame's eyes are going completely different directions, I thought maybe he had strabismus. It was hard reading the rest of the story till the next cg knowing my character looked like that.
These are (i believe) such easy fixes, and as someone who fell in love with this vn really hope for it to be updated! Your art is just amazing and I hate for this small thing to take away from it. Other than that love your work, cant wait for the next update!