Reading this so far and I'm LOVING IT, your art is just amazing! Even making full drawings for minor moments, the care and effort you put into the drawings is easy to see; the art is spectacular! Thats why I ask, please add a gallery! I know you may think its not worth it because not many large CGs, but even being able to look at your portraits of Gray would make this so worth it, please consider!
I'm also loving the story but there's lots of unknown information thats kind of leaving me confused. Like I know Wanes past with Grey is hidden purposely, but what about Sara, we don't know anything about her relationship with Gray. Was she a girlfriend, best friend, or like a motherly caretaker of some sorts? Also when he forgets his keys he states he could walk over to Sarah's, who's an hour away, did they not share a house? Does she have 2 homes, and if they live in the countryside (in a town where most people know each other), how is anything an hour walk haha. And whats Greys job? maybe this is something thats left a secret but it feels like a plothole hes living without having to work, or moved to town without income but this could totally be explained later
Also what time period is this in? The ID card said 87 so im guessing 1900's or is this modern? And maybe even which country does this take place in? Im not sure if these are unintentionally left blank but please let us know! Especially with Sarah, the plots revenge feels a bit empty without knowing who she was to Grey, I think adding more to the prologue may be beneficial. (and something more minor) the transition from before and after the death is very sudden, not knowing the cause of death/ how the house got fixed feels a bit empty. Maybe an autopsy report, funeral, or even a "_ months later" would be nice
Oh and last thing, please add LGBT or Gay to the tags, you put romance but I had no idea if this was a gay novel till now which was one of the reasons I held off reading this. I really regret waiting this long cause Im loving it, very quick and easy addition. (also with how the plot is being set up, will this be nsfw?) I know this was all writing about things you should add but this is because I absolutely love everything already in the vn as well. Keep up the great work, cant wait till the next update!